Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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InspiredSoul

@InspiredSoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

IS👏

Great update and yes very late but understandable.🤗

Love the lizard scene and Khushi's squirming under his body attack ..poor heart of hers was racing like maniac.

OK I know you didn't think of that but it suits so well to your story.

LIZARD...an animal who has the ability to break off their tails to escape predators. This is one of the trait of this animal.Second,it is associated with dreams ...both work in your story.

Third,Lizard is your power animal, heed your own intuition before anyone else's.

Should I say that is brilliant touch which came unintentionally but a reader like me seeing beyond with it.

I can see her sankiness is grabbing his heart.

Akash and Arnav's convo was really nice.can't wait for the plan he just came up with

Thnx for the PM😊

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

wonderful that arnav was able to make contact with akash...but want to know about his plan

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Amazing update...

I am glad Arnav was able to contact Akash...

So wana know what is the plan... 😃

Waiting for the next update...

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esamoe

@esamoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Loved it!

Khushi poor heart,she's definitely falling for him!

Adored the whole lizard scene..

Can't wait to see what plan Arnav came up with..

So sweet of Arnav to consider Khushi's family's security.

Thanks for the pm!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#266

he isnt ASR for nothing you know
so he has got a plan
and it seems very good plan
but the hell with that for now
really arnav you dont know why she is red and panting
seems he didnt remember what he did
well that was all reflexes for him
giving her a right heart attack
and with her heart beat raising
god that was funny
not for poor khushi though
well he got to his brother
and let him know he is okay
dude LG naa bulaye toh kya bulayengi aap ko
and arnav i thought you knew by now what she is like
well what ever he is planning its something good
but that jha who is behind him
cant be just him he dont have that much courage to stand against ASR

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Loved the update... ArShi scene was beautiful... Also Arnav-Akash convo is so well written... Loving the way things are moving forward... Already waiting for the next update... Thanks for the pm...

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

lovely !!! arnav got chance to speak to akash.. well the plan has been drawn.. lets see how raizada brothers trap their so called jeejaji.. khushi and her fears.. lizard.. well that was beautiful scene.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊