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Sanam was getting ready to make her special recipe that she recently created. She looks in her pot to see if she had any water, when she realize she doesn't she asks her servant to fetch her some water.

"I'm sorry sanam, but I'm busy right now." He says turning back to his work.

What should I do now? She thought suddenly an idea came to her. She quickly grabs her pot and called her servant. She told him to watch the dhaba while she's gone.

"Ok mam" he says

Elsewhere, seher came out of the air plane with her crew. She took a deep breath and puts her glasses on her head, with her black dress showing every curve of her body. Her agent told her to follow him and she did. They entered the car and drove to the shooting area. Once they were there they all got out of the car.

"Isn't this great seher?" Says Sam "I've only seen India on TV but now I can finally explore and try on their fabulous sarees." She says

"I thought my hometown would be better but now I just want to go back home." She says arrogantly "I mean where is the buildings, the stores and the food court?" she asks

"Calm down seher, this place is not far from Punjab. "Says her manager

"How can I calm down, this place looks like a desert, and it's so freaking hot, even flies think I'm meat" She says

"Give it a chance seher; you were excited when we were on the plane, what happened?"

"It changed when I saw this dump." She says

Sam shook her head and says "just give it a chance seher, the faster we finish the quicker we can explore this place." says Sam happily

The manager calls all the models and informs them, that they can't leave the group in no circumstance which they have to stay together. Soon the group left to get ready to shoot. They put on their suit and seher puts on her wedding outfit.

Elsewhere, sanam was walking towards the river. When she got their she started putting water in her pot. While doing that she saw blood in the water.

"Blood?" she thought looking at the sourcse only to see a body lying face down in the water. Quickly she turns him over. Oh god, who would do this to him? She thought pulling him out of the water and taking him to the land.

Once she did that, she ripped his shirt off, and saw the bullet wound. She search for something to take the bullet out when she didn't find any, she used two of her fingers to remove the bullet, earning a scream from him. He opens his he and looks at sanam.

"Are you a doctor?" he says making sanam shook her head

"if your not a doctor." He says in pain "than what are you doing?" he says getting up

"I was trying to help you with the wound, but I guess you don't need my help." She says getting up to leave when he grabs "wait!" he says

"Yes" says sanam

"I..i need you to treated my woun-" he says not finishing before he felt pain and finally fell unconscious. Sanam quickly bandaged his chest and was about to walk away to get help when her duppat got stuck on his bandage. "Great." She says

She gently walks closer to him and removes her duppat, and then she screams for help. When no one came to her call she decides to take him home with her. She grabs on to his arm and lifts him up, and then she starts walking with him. On the way home she almost trip on herself. When she reached the house she calls dilshad and haya and they helped her. Once they put him inside they turned their question look to sanam.

"Whose he and why is he injured? Says dilshad

"I found him in the river; I don't know how he go t that injured that's why I brought this here.

Dilshad nods her head and sanam went to make something

Meanwhile, seher was doing her photo shoot, she was having difficult positions. Just when she was about to make another pose, her phone rang

"Hello, seher I found information

"Really? What did you find?"

"Well the house you guys used to live in was recreated and was given." He says i

"Really? By whom" she says

"His name is ahil raza ibrahim." the voice said

Seher repeated that name and smirks. I'm one step close to find my family killer.

To be continue...

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this is intersting!!! pleeaassseee do continue asap!!!😃
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Sanam was cleaning ahil wound when the doctor came in. "how is he sanam?" he says making her look at him. She quickly got up from the chair and says "namaste, doctor mohit. He's breathing terribly because the bullet is still there." she says worried

"ok, let me take a look." he says walking towards ahil and sitting down on the bench next to him. He looks at ahil body and he could see a scar on his abdomen, he was shaking uncontrollably and he was breathing hard. Not wasting anymore time, he quickly got his equipment out from his bag and starts operating on him. Sanam not wanting to see this walks out the door. She went to the porch to sit down; there she saw dilshad and haya counting the vegetables and supplies. When they saw sanam they stop what they were doing and look up.

"How is he sanam?" asks dilshad

"He's ok at the moment; the doctor is trying to get the bullet out. She says

"That's good." She says back

Sanam looks at haya; she did some sign language and then sanam replies "I don't know haya, who ever did it, must hate him a lot. Enough to kill him." she says making everyone tense.

When the doctor came back out everyone held their breath. "How is he doctor?" says sanam

"I managed to take the bullet out, he should be ok now, but he needs a lot of rest and needs to take his medication." He says giving sanam the bottle

"Baaraka Allahu fik." She says while grabbing the bottle

"No problem, sanam. i will come back to see how he's doing, but for now I have to go." He says

"Ok doctor, Ila al-liqa'a." she says

"Al Wada' a." he says before leaving

After the doctor left, dilshad went to the kitchen and gave sanam a glass of water. "Shukran." She says while grabbing it, she walks to the room and puts the glass down on the night stand. Then she sat down on the bench, watching ahil sleep.

She stares at him sleeping thinking to herself, ahil on the other hand was having a nightmare he kept replaying the incident when he was shot. He twists and turns his head, sweating some more. Sanam seeing this walks to the window and opens it, making the wind blow moving the curtains. She then walks back to ahil and grabs her rag, dipping it in the water from earlier she starts wiping the sweat, making ahil relax. While doing this the wind started blowing stronger making her hair move. Ahil feeling someone touching him quickly grabs the person's wrist tightly, squeezing it. Sanam gasp making ahil opens his eyes, he looks at her and they had a moment, the song oh khuda starts playing

Oh Khudaa

Wooohoo...

Sanam and ahil continues to look at one another.

Tujhe Hai Maanga Har Dua,

He watches as sanam tries to get her hand free, while doing so the wind blows on her hair removing it from her ponytail.

Khudaa Bhi Khud Hai Ab Gawah,

He watches as her hair sway with the wind. In dazed he slightly loosens his hand on her wrist.

Tujhe Hai Maanga Har Dua,

Sanam saw him looking at her, she looked confuse. Oha allaha usake satha kya galata hai? She thought

Khudaa Bhi Khud Hai Ab Gawah,

"Hello" she says waving her other hand in his face, snapping him from gazing at her. He looks at there hands and quickly let go. While doing that he reopens his wound on his chest. Sanam seeing this becomes concern; she quickly went to her closet and got something to wrap his wound.

Haa.. Na Aisa Ek Bhi Din Aisa Gaya,

When she came back, she sat on the bed and touched his shoulder, making ahil look at her. "I'm just gonna change your bandage." She says removing the bandage from his back, when she took it off, she could see where the bullet was in, she gently she took the rag and started cleaning his chest.

Juda Jo Tujhse Mein Raha,

He watches as she clean his chest, the wind still blowing her hair. He saw her hair getting on her face and she trying to remove it while cleaning his wound.

Tu Mujh Me Hai Kuch Is Kadar,

He took his other hand and removes the hair from her face, making her look at him.

Ye Jaanu Me Aur Bus Khuda,

She stops what she was doing blushing, she looks at him.

Oh Khudaaa...

Ahil realize his hand was on her face, he quickly removes it. Making sanam looks down still blushing. She continues to clean his shoulder.

Wooohoo Wooohoo Wooohooo...

Both of them avoiding each other. Once she was done she bandages him fast and gets up, ending the song.

Ahil looks at her and she avoids him and walks to the window to close it. Once she was done she walks to the door. Before she leaves she says" your medicine is right there I made sure I brought you water which is over there if you need anything else you just ask us." She says fast before leaving the room. She pressed her back to the door feeling her heart beat. Oha allaha, kya mere satha galata hai? She thought before walking away.

Ahil took his medicine and swallows it, after words he sat back down, with the moonlight still brightening the room. He remembers what happened to him, and then he remembers sanam. Shaking his head he lays back down and thought about his family, mummy must be worried about me and so is my sisters. He thought I have to hurry up and leave. He thought before sleep took him.

Meanwhile, Tanveer was in her room, someone calls her and informs her that ahil was shot. She smiles thinking to herself finally now my son can have the will, and I will have all the properties. She thought smirking.

The next day seher was getting tired of sitting there taking pictures of her in her red bridal saree. She wanted to go look for the house that used to be there. Once her shoot was done, she went to her tent and grabs her black dress than she puts it in her small bag. She went to the entrance of the tent and took a quick look to see if anyone was around. When she saw no one she quickly ran, passing the car. Sam spotting her screams "SEHER! WHERE YOU GOING?"

Everyone look at her and look at seher running away. The designer that design the saree scream. He looks at everyone and says" get that girl! She has one of my collection." He said dramatically. Everyone ran after her, seher turns around and saw people behind her. She grabs onto her saree and throws her shoes at them making some of them stop. Just when she turns back around. She fell down the small hill, the sand covering her. Everyone that was running after her couldn't see her. They look below and shook their head.

"Where is she? Did you find her? No did you find my dress?" he says

"The sand is too deep over there, she probably fell in quick sand." One of them said

Sam looks sad, she shook her head and walks away, follow by everyone else. The designer on the other hand, drops down on his knees, and said something in French than he says "NOOO! MY BEAUTIFUL DRESS." With tears coming out of his eyes, after his display he sadly walks away.

Once everyone was gone, Seher removes herself from the sand. She dusts herself and looks up the hill, seeing no way up, she decides to walk straight. The sun shinning her face, she couldn't see any city or people. "Close my ass." She says "we are no where near Punjab. They lied to me." She says again

Elsewhere, Rehaan had call ahil since yesterday but he still didn't pick up. While driving he was worried. Where did he go? He thought it's not like him to not answer his phone. I just have a bad feeling about this he thought still driving not knowing seher was coming towards his direction.

"Oha Allahu, Krpaya Meri madada karo." She says suddenly she saw something moving coming towards her direction. When she saw a car, she quickly got in front of it. Rehaan stops the car when he saw a woman in wedding attire. The car screeched and halts making her smile, thanking god. Rehaan came out the car and walks towards seher.

"Are you ok?" he asks

"Yes thank go-"she says not finishing before Rehaan cuts her off

"Are you mad? Do you know how dangerous that was." He says

"Excuse me; I was trying to stop the car. If I didn't do that you wouldn't have seen me." She says glaring at him

Rehaan signs than says "I'm sorry, but you should be careful, don't do something this dangerous." He says softly

"I apologize." She says

"Its ok, by the way where are you heading?"

"I'm heading to Punjab." She says

"Really? I'm heading there too, but first I need to see someone in pune. Is that ok if we visit there first?" he asks

"Its fine, lets get out of here. I'm starting to turn dark." She says

They both got in the car and head to pune, not knowing what trouble they're about to be in.

To be continue in the clash ~Ek Mutthi Aasmaan~ the untold story meets Qubool hai Dohari Musibata

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"Why are we here?' says seher

"I finally found where my father was buried. Turns out this is the place." Rehan says bending down to say his prayers.

"But why are we here in the dark, we could come back tomorrow." She says

"No, I want to show my respect now. Don't you want to be in Punjab by tomorrow?" he asks making her nod her head

"Good, so please be quiet I'm trying to show my respect." He says

Seher sat on top of a grave yard. She was looking at the stars when she saw some one coming. "R...Rehan" she says sacredly when she got no response from him she turns around again, and saw the person coming closer.

"R...Rehan!" she says this time backing away ending up falling on his back. Rehaan turns his head around and yells at seher "I told you to wait but now look I just disrespected my fathers." He says looking at seher only to see her shaking controllably.

"Why are you shaking?" he asks making her point towards the direction she was looking at.

When Rehaan saw what she was looking at, he also got scared, but he didn't show it. Both of them grabbing on to each other and not realizing it at the moment. As soon as the figure was close to the light, they saw a girl running towards them, she had cuts all around her arm, she was wearing a white saree which was now dirty, she ran to them and says " please please help me." She says with her hands together tears coming out of her eyes. Seher and Rehaan look at each other and realize there holding each other. Quickly they let go, Rehaan blushing while seher refuse to look at him. They heard noises and saw a group of guys coming towards them they were all tense.

Coming soon...

Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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Chapter 4

Scene 1

Seher and rehan arrives in pune, they park their car and ask people for direction to the graveyard. Some people didn't know while others gave them the wrong direction. Just when they were about to give up, a young girl working at this food stand says "you guys looking for the grave yard?" When they answer she says "its just five minutes away from here. Just keep heading straight and make a left." She says

"Thank you, may Allah bless you." He says

They walk until finally seher got tired of walking. Rehan looks at her and asks her why she stopped. "Its hot, and I'm tired. We haven't stopped for food or stop to pee." She says grouchy

"We're almost there, just wait for a little while." He says making seher groan.

Once they reached the grave area, rehan search for his dad, When he was about to pass it. He tripped on a stone. As soon as he was about to get up, he saw the grave stone in front of him, it had his dad name on it. He got up and sat down, seher looks at him, she was about to ask him something when he beat her to it.

"I finally found where my father was buried. Turns out this is the place." Rehan says bending down to say his prayers.

"That's great and all, but why are we here in the dark, we could come back tomorrow." She says

"No, I want to show my respect now. Don't you want to be in Punjab by tomorrow?" he asks making her nod her head

Good, so please be quiet I'm trying to show my respect." He says

Seher sat on top of a grave yard. She was looking at the stars when she saw some one coming."R...Rehaan" she says sacredly when she got no response from him she turns around again, and saw the person coming closer.

"R...Rehaan!" she says this time backing away ending up falling on his back. Rehaan turns his head around and yells at seher "I told you to wait but now look I just disrespected my fathers." He says looking at seher only to see her shaking controllably.

"Why are you shaking?" he asks making her point towards the direction she was looking at.

When Rehaan saw what she was looking at, he also got scared, but he didn't show it. Both of them grabbing on to each other and not realizing it at the moment. As soon as the figure was closer to the light, they saw a girl running towards them, she had cuts all around her arm, and she was wearing a white saree which was now dirty. She was running towards them saying "please, please help me." She says with her hands together tears coming out of her eyes. Seher and Rehaan look at each other and realize there holding each other. Quickly they let go, Rehaan blushing while seher refuses to look at him. They heard noises and saw a group of guys coming towards them, they were all tense.

Scene 2

Later on that night, two figures were seen talking in the kitchen. It was non other then paki and gauri. Paki had made tea for gauri and she was drinking it. Gauri smiles and thank her.

"Our little scene today was a little bit extra." Says gauri

"No it was good. Now I can move on with plan B" says paki

"It won't be to long before Raghav falls for you, now that kalpi is out of the picture." Says gauri making paki smile.

"How did you manage to get kalpi hand written gauri-ma?" she asks

"I didn't, I let kalpi write it." She says then remembering asking kalpi to write a letter to Raghav about how she felt about marrying him.

"I guess she wrote it and throw it away, luckily I found it." She says looking at paki

"Now it's your turn, how did you get kalpi out of the house?" she ask

"Easy I hired some goons to kidnap her with Neetu help." She says

Just when they were about to talk some more they heard a noise, gauri put the cup down and got up. They were about to go and check when Raghav appeared in his pajamas, shocking them both. Paki and gauri were both scared that Raghav have found out about their alliance, they were too scared to say anything.

Raghav looks at both of them and says "what are you two doing here?" making them both relax. Gauri was the first one to calm down "I asked paki to make me some tea." She says making paki grab her cup to go and wash it.

"What are you doing up, son?" she says

"I can't sleep, I miss kalpi." he says making paki roll her eyes

"Don't worry son, we will find her" she says

Scene 3


They watch as the goons appeared, rehan push the girls back.

"Well boys we found her. Didn't I tell you she wouldn't get far?" He says

.seher saw kalpi shivering and scared. Looking at her clearly she could tell she was tortured. She grabs on to kalpi hands to comfort her, making kalpi turn around to look at her. The goons look at rehan and started laughing. "Do you see this boys?" the leader says "this weakling wants to be a hero" he says making his friends laugh

"Hand over the girl so we won't kill you." He says

"Their will be no blood shed on my fathers grave." He says

"Oh really" he says before going to the grave and kicking it, upsetting rehan.

"Hey stop it, that's disrespectful" says seher

They look at her and whistle, and then the leader says "you're very pretty, maybe after we beat your boyfriend over there we can play with you." He says making seher shiver with disgust. Rehan bold his fist, when the guy tries to touch the girls he punches them making them move back. "You mess with the wrong group." He says before attacking rehan.

While attacking him, two of the guys tried to attack the girls. Seher pulls kalpi behind her but when the guys multiplies they ran, they ran as far as they could. But kalpi ended up tripping making the guys catch up. They grab her tugging her legs while seher pull her with her hand.

"Help! Let go of me. Some one please" she says

"RAGHAV!" she screams

Elsewhere, Raghav was drinking his tea when his heart started to tug. He was starting to feel pain. Just when he was about to lie in the bed he fell on the god statue.

"RAGHAV HELP!"

"Kalpi?" he thought panicking why am I thinking about kalpi, what if something happened to her? He thought

"RAGHAV!" she says making the voice stronger in his head

"Kalpi!" he says getting out of bed and getting his key. He ran out the door and gauri and paki came out hearing a ruckus. Gauri walks to Raghav and says "where you going to urgently son?"

"Kalpi, she's in trouble" he says making paki and gauri tense.

"Your wrong son, you must have been dreaming. Your forgetting kalpi left you." She says grabbing Raghav hand "come son go back to sleep" she says

Raghav was about to follow his mom order when he felt the tug again. Something was telling him to go and look for her, when he heard the voice again he removes his hand from his mother and ran out the door. Gauri and paki where very worried.

"What if he finds her" says gauri

"He won't because I told those guys to take her somewhere far" she says

"Let's hope he doesn't find her" says gauri

Scene 4

Raghav drove everywhere searching for kalpi, he park his car by the park and started searching screaming her name and the song tu hi rab tu hi dua starts playing.

Meri aankhon mein meri saanson mein

Raghav went around asking people while walking if they've seen his wife. He showed them a picture of her and they shook there head.

Tera chehra (x2)

He continues this routine asking people for kalpi. When no one would answer he stopped to think.

Meri dil ki har ik deewar peTera chehra (x2)

He ran to places that he knew kalpi might go. But she wasn't their. Raghav was sweating and out of breath but he didn't give up.

Tu hi hai tu hi mera jahaanTu hi rab tu hi dua

He screamed her name and fell on his knees, crying to the gods. Just when he was about to give up an old couple walk by, they saw the picture on the ground and realize that was the same girl they saw at the graveyard.

Tu hi labh tu hi zubaanTu hi raah tu hi makaamTu rehnuma

"Excuse me?" she says making Raghav look up at her

"By any chance are you looking for her?" she asks

"Yes, have you seen her?" he asks with hope

"Yes I did, I saw her running at the graveyard." She says

Raghav got up and thank the couple then he ran towards the grave yard

Tu hi rab tu hi duaTu hi labh tu hi zubaan

Once he reached there he started searching for her calling her name once more.

Elsewhere, rehan finished of the goons and head towards the girls. Just when he was about to reach there he heard someone shouting. Turning around he saw a figure by his close to the gate running around the graveyard. Is he looking for someone? He thought going towards him.

"Excuse me?" he asks making Raghav look at him

"Are you looking for someone?"

"Yes I'm looking for my wife. "He says showing the picture to him, making rehan gasp

"I know her." He says getting Raghav attention

"You do? Have you seen her?" He asks

"Yes right now she's in trouble, we have to go and save them" he says making Raghav worried "follow me" he says

Tu hi raah tu hi makaamTu rehnuma

Raghav follows rehan until they reached there.

Tu hi rab tu hi duaTu hi labh tu hi zubaan

They came just in time to see the goons push kalpi making her hit her head on the grave stone. Raghav seeing this was angry. he ran towards them shouting " KALPI!!!"

He saw her falling and quickly ran to catch her. Kalpi felt two hands wrapped around her. She thought she heard Raghav voice. When she opened her eyes she saw Raghav screaming her name to stay awake.

Tu hi raah tu hi makaamTu rehnuma

Rehan ran to seher and help her. He was impressed at her bravery. When he came to the scene he saw her taking a stick and hitting the guys with it. When he saw one of the guys holding the stick he ran to her and punch the guy making him fall back. Seher looks at rehan and they had a moment. But it was soon broken when they heard Raghav crying out kalpi name. They turn around to see him getting up with her in his hand. Then they saw the leader attacking him. Raghav kick the leader making him fall back, when he got back up, seher throws a rock at him hitting his head.

"Bulls eye!" she says

"I don't think this is a good time to gloat seher." He says making her frown.

When the leader was distracted Raghav managed to punch him, this time knocking him out. Once they were all knocked out, rehan offered him a ride. He was about to refuse when he remembered where he parked his car. It will take me longer to get there he thoughtand kalpi needs medical treatment now he thought

Making his decision he agreed to rehan request and followed him.

Meri aankhon mein meri saanson meinTera chehra (x2)

Once they were in the car, he lays kalpi down and watches her sleep. Rehan asks him where they going and he said to his house, Seher curious start asking him question.

"Why was your wife being chased by those guys?" she asks

"I don't know" he says

"I mean they wanted to kill her" she says "How could you not know about this?" she asks upsetting Raghav

"She ran away and left me during our wedding day" he says surprising seher and rehan

"I thought you said she was your wife?" asks rehan

"She is but not by legal rights." He says surprising seher

"Wait what! How can you married someone without legal rights?" she asks when Raghav explains the whole story rehan understood while seher still not understanding.

"How can you play with someone's heart like that?" she says then says "you are really stupid, for doing that." She says making rehan stop the car and looks at her" he's not playing with anyone's heart seher. You need to understand that what the heart wants the heart gets." He says making seher roll her eyes.

Once they reach the house Raghav quickly pick up kalpi. He turns around and asks them if they were gonna stay for the night, they were gonna refuse when Raghav insist that they stay until tomorrow. Rehan accepts and they walk to Raghav door. And just when he was about to open the door paki opens it. She looks down to see kalpi in Raghav hands making her smile turns to a frown. They both walk in and gauri saw Raghav lip bleeding but what shock her most was kalpi in Raghav hands.

Both of them were tense, while seher and rehan greets them and walk in.

To be continued...


Preview


Some biker gang came to harass sanam at work, they trash her food and chairs. people started running, screaming. ahil walking to her restaurant saw one of the biker gangs about to slap sanam. sanam closes her eyes waiting for the slap to hit her cheek, when it didn't come she opens her eyes to see ahil holding the guys hand.

elsewhere, rehan and seher reached punjab and rehan asks her if she has a place to stay.



Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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This is so exciting
So many stories at once
Nice idea

Strange not having ahil sanam knowing each other
But nice to see them in a different avtar

Thanks

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