~Dohari Musibata~SAHIL FF

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Sanam &Ahil If i dress like my sister will you know the difference?

Seher

Sanam is a girl with a dream. while going to the river she saw a body in the water. the body was soon identify as Ahil Raza Ibrahim, a business tycoon who lives in Moga, Punjab.

Seher is a model that was adopted and raised in london. when she found out she was born in india she wanted to go there to find her family. when her company said they were going to india to model in their clothes, she took that opportunity. while running away she meets Rehan Raza Ibrahim, who is ahil best friend/ brother. rehan helps ahil in the company when ahil is away. he met seher by chance and finds her spoiled and lonely. he believes thats why shes putting up a tough personality so no one could see her loneliness. Tanveer rehan mother who ahil respects will stop at nothing to get rid of seher. when she finds out ahil is alive she will do everything in her power to get rid of him, so she can have his inheritance. will ahil stay with sanam? will sanam come to punjab? and will the two sisters finally meet? an old family member comes back, who do you think it is? 😲😲😲





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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1

Sanam was at her dhaba making food for her customers, ever since she was little she always love cooking. After all she learned it from the best her grandma. While cooking she was saying the poem of the day. Everyone listens while she recites a poem from her favorite book. When she was done she went to serve the table in the corner. While putting the food down, a drunken man touched her arm.

"saynam." he said while staggering back a little.

"How many drinks have you drank before coming here." she says

He tried counting his fingers only to stagger some more. " i thwink twelve." he says this time falling on the floor.

"you will never learn Mr. Adarsh; you do this everyday, disturbing my customers." she says hands on her waist. She grabs him and puts him on the chair, and then she went and brought lime and cold water.

"here, the lime should wake you up from your drunk state and the water should help remove the bad test in your mouth." she says before leaving

"Thwank you." he says making her shake her head.

"He will never learn sanam." says her servant

"This time he will, because i called his wife to come get him."

"uh oh." he says turning around

Mrs. Adarsh came to the dhaba, she was looking for her husband. Sanam points her finger to the table in the corner, when she turned around she saw her husband half conscious.

"Abhi Adarsh!" she yelled making everyone stop what they were doing and look at her. Abhi knew who it was he didn't have to look up to know. he knew he was in trouble now.

"Honey, its not what you think." he says

"oh really." she says next to the table

"Ah.. You see i was just getting some lemonade to drink." he says getting up and showing her the cup

"Is that true?" she asks

"yes, i would never lie to you." he says

Mrs. Adarsh turns towards sanam and asks the same questions. Abhi was giving sanam signs to lye for him but she pretend like she didn't see it.

"no its not true, he's been here for three hours drinking alcohol in my dhaba." she says making mrs. Adarsh turn to him calmly.

"You would never lie to me huh?" she says mocking him

"Sanam lying" he says making his wife grab his hand.

"As soon as we get home, i will destroy all the alcohol you've been hiding under our bed and you will be sleeping on the couch for 3 month." she says

"Please forgive me." he says

"I've told you no alcohol but you broke your promise, so Theres nothing to say to you." she says than she looks at sanam, "thank you sanam. Because of you i caught him red handed." she says

"No worries." she says, when they were gone sanam servant looks at her.

"What?" she asks

"you would think with someone name Abhi he would be able to handle anything, but i guess not." he says

"Well not everyone goes by that." she says turning and going back to work.

Meanwhile, ahil was talking to some business man when his car got hit.

"What's going on?" he says

"a car is trying to hit us, sir." he says

"Avoid it and make it pass." he says looking at a form paper."

the driver tries to avoid it only to get hit again. he moves to one side and the car follows, then he moves to the left the car follows too. The car pushed sahil car towards the cliff, making ahil move the other way. "What's going on driver?" he says

"I'm sorry sir, but i can't control this." he says

Ahil tries to get to the wheels but the driver push him back..

" what are you doing?" he says to his driver

" i'm sorry sir, but i need the money." he says pointing his gun at ahil

" you dont want to do this." he says

" i'm sorry sir." he says before shooting the gun. ahil dunks and attacks him, making them both fall on the seat. the car was moving left and right because no one was in the drivers seat. the driver tries to grab the gun but ahil held him still. another person enters the car, leaving the door open. he attacks ahil making him let go of the driver. he punches ahil and he fell on the floor . the other guy tried to kill ahil while he was on the floor but ahil managed to flip them over, getting on top of the guy, punching him in the stomach. just when he was about to get up the driver shot him in the shoulder, making ahil look at him than the driver apologize and shot him this time closer to his heart. ahil fell down the cliff and lands in the water. the driver turns back to the front only to see the car hit a rock, making him fall and roll out of the car.

Ahil was bleeding on his shoulder. he tried floating but his body couldn't move, his phone rang and he tried so hard to grab it but his shoulder was parallelize so he just let it ring. he held his breath as long as he could but he soon gave up and let some air out allowing water to reach his lungs and him being unconscious.

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Elsewhere

Seher came from her photo shoot. when she enters her house she heard her foster parents talking.

" honey, its about time we tell her about her birth place." her adopted mom says

" i guess your right." says her adopted dad

" what about my birthplace?" she says surprising her parents

" sit down Seher, lets have a talk." he says

she sat down wearing her jean skirt, her hair tied in a ponytail and her sandals off. she looks at her parents waiting for them to speak. her mom was the first to answer

" you see dear, we found you in india. lost wandering the streets." she says

" when we asked you where you were going? you told us you got lost. we didn't know where you live or who your parents where." her dad says

" but someone identified you as Seher. and i asks them if they know you, and they said you live close to them." her mom said

seher was listening intensely. she felt embarrassed for getting lost. but she didn't care about that , she had so many questions like why would her parents let her wander the streets alone? where were her parents at that time? are they still looking for her? do they love her and miss her? And so on.

" the person took us to your place, and when we got there it was burned down. we asked the police what happened, turns out some crazy lady massacure your family and burned it down." he said finishing the story. seher felt like her heart had stop. Massacred she thought to herself. is that why they haven't looked for me, because they were killed? she thought feeling a little bit better.

" so dear are you gonna say something?"

" I want to go to India." she says her parents not surprised at all.

"ok dear." they said

"you guys are not shock or sad?" she asks

" we are dear, its just we were already preparing our self for this." she said

Seher was about to say something when her phone rang. " hello." she says

" seher, this is Sam. i found out where our next shoot is." he says

" i dont have time for that now Sam." she says

" but girl listen, its gonna be in India." she says making seher drop her cell phone.

"what is it dear? " says her mother

" i guess fate wanted me to go to India." she says

" what do you mean dear?"

" my next photo shoot will be shot in India." she says. her parents happy for her.

" i better start packing because we're leaving, tonight." she says

"So soon." her dad said

"yes, I'm sorry mom and dad." she sadly said watching her mom cries.

"please don't cry mom," she says

"how can i not, my baby is leaving me." she

" i will make sure to call you and text every day. she says making her parents smile.

" we know you will."

later on that night, they dropped seher to the airport and she said her goodbyes. once her parents left she walks with her crew.


To be continue.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all the title..?



Wow!



You gotta tell me it's significance and I guess meaning too.




And now.




The prologue..?



Woahh! I mean. Woah woah!



And already a chapter 1!!


Excellent? So so so intriguing and I'm sooo excited already!!


Oh you have to continue!



I'm in! Amazing story line!


You have my full attention!!


Am honest to God, blown away by how awesome this story is!


And I love the pictures!!!!


I love them!!!



Wow.



Still not over it!




You rock!



:)




Mwah mwah!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice. You need to write sahil ff in the title. You will get much y views that way.

Waiting for next chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very interesting.. continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Farz the title is call double trouble in english. the reason why is because the two boys ahil and rehan will be confuse, they think they fell in love with one girl. tanveer will try to get rid of seher because ehan her son is head over heels for her and would even go against tanveer for her. she will think that both boys are in love with seher and will try to turn them against them. but her her plan will be ruined when sanam comes to punjab to work, there she will cross path with ahil again who will ignore her thinking she's seher. but when seher finds out what really happened to her parents it will be double trouble for tanveer because both sisters will seek revenge. tanveer will try to kill sanam which she will think she died in the fire like her parents. but when she sees sanam alive and also seher she will be shocked and it will be game over for her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelk1

Farz the title is call double trouble in english. the reason why is because the two boys ahil and rehan will be confuse, they think they fell in love with one girl. tanveer will try to get rid of seher because ehan her son is head over heels for her and would even go against tanveer for her. she will think that both boys are in love with seher and will try to turn them against them. but her her plan will be ruined when sanam comes to punjab to work, there she will cross path with ahil again who will ignore her thinking she's seher. but when seher finds out what really happened to her parents it will be double trouble for tanveer because both sisters will seek revenge. tanveer will try to kill sanam which she will think she died in the fire like her parents. but when she sees sanam alive and also seher she will be shocked and it will be game over for her.




Wow!




Did you just tell me the entire plot!!??



Wow wow wow!.

Thank you thank you!


Oh this is incredible! Double trouble indeed!! I was thinking along the lines of trouble again or something like that.

Angelk1.


You have made a fan out of me!



:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dang girl😲...don't just give out plots like that... Let it be a suspense😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dont worry i didnt give to much information. its just a small portion. how everything comes together is the most important thing. so even if i give it away you guys still wont know whats gonna happen next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey. Thats an awesome concept! Double trouble. Lol 😆 This is cool. Can I expect some comic scenes too? Please? 😆
Can't wait when the confusion starts 😆
Amazing story. Do continue soon! :)

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