Episode 131 (06-30-2014) (Monday)

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Sumneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Scene 10 - Paro and Rudra have a serious talk after all the pillow-gudiya nok-jhok/masti.

Paro feeling her leg hurt a bit,

Rudra - Maaf karde na, Paro.

Rudra - Please forgive me, Paro.

Paro - Kyun? Aapne kya kiya?

Paro - Why? What did you do?

Rudra - Nahi.. Umm. Tune kaha tha na, ki main saath chalon baazar. Aur main nahi gaya.

Rudra - Nahi.. That,, You asked me, right, to come along with you to the market. And I didn't go.

Paro - Major Saab! Isme, aap ne..

Paro - Major Saab! This has nothing..

Rudra - Nahi. Meri galati hai. Mujhe chalna chahyiae tha. Aur agar tujhe kuch ho jata, koi kuch kar deta, toh?

Rudra - No. This is all my fault. I should have accompanied you. And what if something was to happen with you, or someone was to hurt/harm you, then?

Paro - Kyun, Major Saab?

Paro - Why, Major Saab?

Rudra - Kyun kya? Tu hai, Paro!

Rudra - What why? It's YOU, Paro!

Paro - Aur agar main nahi hoti? Aur, Maa sa hoti, toh? Kya.. tab bhi aap..

Paro - What if is wasn't me? And, if it was Maa sa, then? Would you then too...

Rudra - So jaa!

Rudra - You better sleep!

Rudra (In a new sexy tone, I presume) - Intezaar kar raha hoon, memsaab! Koi aur hukum ho toh..

Rudra - I am waiting for your commands, Mam!

Rudra - Takiya, bistar, gudiya..

Rudra - Pillow, Bed, Doll...

Rudra - Baarsih, baraf..

Rudra - Rain, snow..

The scene shifts to the aangan and Mohini is busy yawning on the way to lock the gates of the Haveli. The stalker has made an entry, his presence is felt behind the bushes/plants.

From PaRud's room - He.. He.. (Guess Paro still laughing, giggling)

Mohini - Ha Ha!! (In a sarcastic manner) Pura waqath, bas yahi. Pata nahi, kaun si, gondh se chipak kar aaye hain ek doosre ke saath! Zeher, Laila, Mirchi aur ab tejaab. Koi bhi cheej inn dono ko, ek doosre se alag nahi kar paayi! Na jaane kya daan kiya tha iss ne, pirma ji ko, jo apni kismat mein phool likhva liye! Aur mhaari kismat mein yeh, pathar pada va diye!

Mohini - Ha Ha!! All the time, this is what goes on! Jeez. Don't know, with which special glue these two have been joined, that they always stick together! Poison, Laila, Red Chilli Powder and now acid - nothing seems to do the trick, seperate them. I wonder what special offerings they made to pirma ji (I assume some God), that they have beautiful flowers written(meaning they have happiness surrounding them all the time) and my destiny- filled with stones (meaning loads of obstacles always, not as smooth as their's)

The stalker puts his hand on the diya & puts it-off.

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 11 years ago

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@Zeffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Scene 11 - The morning after - Stalker's unexpected call while Paro was having her beauty sleep! (Come on, she is an acid attack victim given neend ka injection..)

He tries to be as quiet as possible, tries not to wake her up, disturb her. after Paro!

Until..

He notices the extra glass on the night stand, a steel one, next to Paro's milk wala empty glass.

He quickly puts on his chappals and aaram se, folding his sleeves, goes out of the room.

Mythili is busy holding a bada sa patila, (a vessel) and almost trips.

Rudra - A. Arre! Sambhal ke Bhabi sa!

Rudra - A.. Oh.. Be careful, Bhabhi sa!

She regains herself, using the wall as a support.

Rudra - Theek hai na, aap?

Rudra - You fine, right?

Mythili - Ji. Aap itne jaldi utt gaye. Chai bana laaun aapke liye?

Mythili - Yes. Your up so early? Can I make some tea for you?

Rudra - Nahi, theek hai.

Rudra - No. That's alright.

Rudra walking towards her, looking at her worried expression.

Mythili (with her eyes to be looking down) - V.. Voh..

Mythili - Th.. That..

Rudra - Kya hua?

Rudra - What happened?

Mythili (pointing towards the ground) - Ji.. Ji voh.. voh..

Mythili - Yes.. th.. that..

Her pretty ghagra/saree moves out of sight and we get to see PaRud's not-so pretty doll. He carefully takes a step closer, really confused.

Rudra (out loud) - Paro ki gudiya?

Rudra - Paro's doll?

Myithili - Aapko pakka yakeen hai ki, yeh Paro ki gudiya hai?

Mythili - Are you sure, that this is Paro's doll?

Rudra - Haan, kamre mein se gaayab thi.

Rudra - Yes, this is was missing from the room.

He carefully glares at it's current condition.

Rudra - Lekin, iski aisi yeh haalat, kaise?

Rudra - But, how is it, in this condition?

Then he eyes fall on the note/kajaz ka tukuda. He is about to reach for it.. Tring Tring...

Mythili gets a hold of the same and he gets up, and..

Voice on the phone (Looks a wee bit like General VK Sing ji's voice) - Major Rudra Pratap Ranawat, BSD ka sabse bahudar officer. Agar aapne abhi tak, chitthi padne ki takleef nahi uttayi hai, toh aapse kuch bahut khaas kehna chahunga.

Voice on the phone - Major Rudra Pratap Ranawat, BSD's most courageous officer! If you haven't taken the pleasure to read through the letter, I would like to inform you about something important.

Mythili reads the letter and is - HAW, super worried.

Voice on the phone - Yeh samjne ki galti bhi mat karna ki, mera nishaana chuka tha. Agar chahta, toh, voh tehzaab seedhe, aapki patni ke, khoobsurat chehre ko hi bigadta! Ek baar bas, chitthi padd lo, hoshiyaar ho, samaj jaaoge, Ha Ha... (Evil laugh)..

Voice on the phone - Don't you dare believe that I missed my target. If I wanted, then, the acid would have directly been aimed at your, beautiful wife's face and would have spoilt it! Oh yes, please do read the letter atleast once, your smart, you will get the point. Ha Ha...

Rudra - Tere ko main...

Rudra - Wait till I...

Mythili - Y.. Yeh.. (Handing over the letter to the not-so terrified/threatened Rudra)

Mythili - Th.. This..

Major Rudra snatches the letter and the same thing is written (I highlighted it with the underline feature, if you missed it) what the mysterious guy on the phone mentioned.

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 11 years ago

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Last Scene -

Mythili still busy with holding a patila, this time I guess the contents being different, notices an apshagun.

Mythili (to herself) - Hey Bhagwaan! Yeh Diya? Yeh diya kaise bujh gaya. Yeh toh, Parvati raat ko jalakar gayi thi. Akhand jott thi, raat bhar jalni chahyiae thi, aur yeh. Yeh bujh gaya! Yeh toh bahut bada apshagun ho gaya. Hey, Bhole baba, ab sab aap hi theek karo!

Mythili (to herself) - Oh my God! This lamp! How did it extinguish/get put-off? This very one, Parvati had herself lightened. Akhand jott thi. (Sorry no idea abt the same, something traditional/ritual) , it was supposed to have been burning all night. and this, this got put-off! This is a very a bad sign/omnious. Oh God, Bhole baba, only you can save us and right all the wrongs..

Rudra (from behind, having overheard her worried Bhabi sa) - Aisa kya tha, isme?

Rudra - What was so special about it?

Mala - Aaj, Teej hai. Parvati ki pehliTeej.

Mala - Today, it's Teej. Paravti's first Teej.

Rudra is wondering as to how is he supposed to respond and Mythili go ahead, gets the letter from Rudra's hands and hands it over to Mala.

Mythili - Thayi ji sa..

Mythili - Aunty..

Mala gets a good look of the threatening comments and responds.

Mala - Ye.. Yeh.. Ye.. K.. Kya hai yeh? Kaun?

Mala T.. Th.. This.. Wh.. what is all of this? Who?

Rudra - Shaant rahiye! (Grabs a pagdi) Paro ko iss baare mein kuch pata nahi chalna chahyiae.

Rudra - Please be quiet! Paro need not know anything about this,

He is busy wrapping up the doll with the pagadi...

Mythili - Lekin, Devar ji sa? Parvati jab yeh, gudiya dekhegi tohuse sab pata chal hi jaayega.

Mythili - But, brother? When Parvati will get to see this doll, she will pretty much figure it out.

Rudra - Nahi dikhni chahyiae. Bahut mayine rakhti hai, uske liye. Hum dono, ke liye. Takleef hogi use.

Rudra - No, she shouldn't catch a glimpse of it. It's holds immense value for her. For the both of us, she might get hurt.

Rudra finishes wrapping up the doll.

Mythili - Lekin, ab yeh diya? Yeh toh bujh gaya na?

Mythili - But, this lamp? This has been put-off, right?

Rudra graciously, removes his chappals, enter the bhagawan ka area and lights up the diya. Mala feels like a proud mother.

Rudra - Yahan kya hua, Paro ko koi kuch nahi batyega!

Rudra - What took place here, no one dare tell Paro anything!

Paro (from a distance) - Major Saab? Major Saab, aap subah-subah?

Paro - Major Saab? Major Saab? You, in the early morning itself?

Rudra (confused, looks towards Mala, Mythili, while trying to hide the doll) - Ah. Vo..

Rudra - Well.. That..

Paro (sensing the tension, awkwardness) - Kya hua? Sab theek toh hai?

Paro - What happened? Is everything alright?

Thus the episode ends with a cliff-hanger!! Kya Paro sach jaan payegi? Aur kya sach sunn ne ke baad voh chup bhaitengi? Jann ne ke liye dekhyiae Rang Rasiya, roj shaam, raat ko 9.30 baje, sirf Colors par!!

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 11 years ago

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -himu-
love your posts

Thank you so much!! Appreciate your kind words!!

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: parud143
lovely post n pic👏

Thank you ji!! Appreciate it.

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

You know what??? Monday was actually a good episode... I liked it, pretty balanced... Major going to office, trying to find out about the attacker, talking to Maithili, some cute moments with his wife... Ohh Aman was also there... 😛 He is quite a calm and sensible officer as opposed to Rudra's aggressiveness,...

Chalo ji aapne khush kiya iss wale episode ki photo aur written update ke saath... 🤗

I got late in finding this one... 😉