ARHI TS: Heartache....... *removed * - Page 31

just completed Heartache.
and i liked the concept.
of course i would have liked to see Arshi together but the words spoken by Arnav were just too cruel and not worth forgiving.
but Khushi's stand was the best that i liked in it. her confession of loving Arnav still but not more than Sameer reminded me of Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam where Ashwariya chooses Ajay Over Salman.

the logic behind this was simply applaudable.

Loved your story from the beginning till the last part.

👏

Khushi had no choice but to move on. Arnav on the other hand was made to realise the importance of Khushi in his life, but it was rather late. I am a little sad with what happened to these two, but the callous way Arnav behaved and treated Khushi with total disregard to her feelings... the ending was apt.😡

Though, Khushi will always yearn for Arnav, because he was her first love, she has somehow resigned herself to the love and goodness of Sameer.

This was the first arshi separation story that didn't make me cry. Infact I am not even sad by the fact they are separated. So opposite of me ! Otherwise I would have cried buckets. What khushi did was right. No girl should be treated the way she was.

Superb dr.felt bad frst when reading fr arshi seperation bt dats true what u have presented in ths story it happens.

sach bolo .love ur stroy and i dont fell sorry for arnav.he disarv this

Tis is utter crap... Dont ever writ tis sort of stories

Originally posted by: anithabalaram

Tis is utter crap... Dont ever writ tis sort of stories

If you dont like it, dont read it🥱 no one is forcing you to do so🤔,
stop commenting nonsense atleast😕

Its litterly awesome concept
I love this i know being arshi fan maye lil disappointed
But otherwise i brilliant
I am glad and agree with khushi made she has full right to live happy and there is no need to drag that relation which is
Meaningless thank u for writing this

Awesome dear..
I LOVE you for penning out this..
I really like Arshi separated where Arnav is a total jerk rather than seeing them live happily!
Emotions are portrayed very well!

Beautiful story!!!...really liked the end...also was happy with Arnavs redemption.. Also really liked ur comment about moving on ...leaving the shackles of the past... So true!!! Great writing!!