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Posted: 11 years ago
oh yes they did😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

Ohh...I did not know that *facepalm*...okok waiting for the next one...!!

avi..*pulls cheeks*
i will update the last part of this SS tomorrow😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
To all my readers,
Thank you so much guys.
You are a bunch of one of the most amazing people.
thanks a lot for all the love and support
if all goes fine( if i don't get any urgent works or there is no long power cuts), the last part of this SS will be up tomorrow
thank u so much again😃😃😃

-vinu❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
This is not done vinu main aaj jaa rhi hoon aur tu kal update kar rhi hai...!!😭 par it's okk main aakar sabse pehle tera ss hi padhungi😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinu127

To all my readers,

Thank you so much guys.
You are a bunch of one of the most amazing people.
thanks a lot for all the love and support
if all goes fine( if i don't get any urgent works or there is no long power cuts), the last part of this SS will be up tomorrow
thank u so much again😃😃😃

-vinu❤️

Thank u so much for nt ending it thr thnks a tons
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for the support dearies
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey Zayantics,

So as usual, my ranting first 😆 so as I had said in the very beginning, this SS will be of only 4 or 5 parts and here, the last part is up!i am late I noe but frankly I was scared. This is the last part of my 1st ever serious attempt to write. And this phase in the show is over as well. I did not really know if you people were even interested in this anymore and the likes and comments had also reduced drastically but as I said the last time, I did not want to leave this unfinished. So here is the last part which is not really emotional like the previous ones... the effect is much lighter I feel.I don't think you will cry today... the first part will seem all repetitive may be(sorry for that! My mind is blocked) and the second part you would like *hopefully* .So here is the last part of my rondu SS-Bin Tere.

Chapter 4(Last chapter)

She was relieved. Her classes for the day were done. Sharp at 11:30 am. How longer could she expect little pre-kg kids to stay at school? Though she would have loved to spend the whole day with them, she could not. Unfortunately. She had developed a bond with them in just 3 months. But now it was time to stay alone. Thinking of him. Rewinding those precious moments she spent with him. Remembering those dreaded moments which separated her from him. Cursing herself for not supporting him when he needed her the most. And remind her of the fact that now, she was far away from him. But something unusual happened today while packing her things. She could feel him. She could feel a strong gaze that belonged to him. She froze. Was it him? "Zain" that was a mere whisper which she let out. She turned back slowly.

She feared what if it was zain?' she was scared. She prayed to Allah that it should not be him! She did not have the strength to face him. She could not face him. What would she tell if he asked her why she did not stand by him when her support was what he loathed for? Why she let someone break them apart? Why did she not show the love she claims to have for her maamu? Why she did not... just stay with him? Or moreover, how did she stay without him? But she was helpless. Just as much as he was. She could not dream of going against her Maami who was already broken because of the accident. She could not accept the thought of Zain going against his mom for her. She did not to spoil their relationship for the sake of her love. Was that not why she hid herself from him at the dargah on that fateful day?

Yes, she was there! She had been there to pray- for her Maamu and her Zain. She wanted to ask allah to give both of them the strength to live through the storm fate had put across to them. Especially Zain! He had to support the entire family. He had to handle Barkat Royale. He also had to look after Maamu. He had to live without her! She knew it for a fact that he loves her as his life. And it the separation was definitely more painful for him. More because he had not acknowledged it! And she saw zain! He was praying in front of the tomb of the holy man. She wanted nothing but being in his arms at that moment. But her feet did not move one inch as her Maami's voice reverberated through her ears " Phir kabhi mere ghar ya mere gharwalon ke zindagi me dhakal dene ke bare me soch nab hi math! Tumhara aur mera parivaar ka abb koi rishta nahi raha! Phir kabhi apna shakal bhi hume math dikhana! Humse milne ki koshish kabhi math karo! Especially mere bete aur mere shauhar se door rehna" The tears she had controlled with all her efforts made their way back to her cheeks. She could not live without him. But now, she could not live with him either. She hid herself from him. Even though her heart was sinking and craving for him, she did that!

It was outside the very same dargah that she had found Zara and Kabir that day. The two kids whose father helped when she fainted outside the holy place. He had taken her to his house and helped her recover physically and mentally. He had given her shelter till she found herself a job. Though Zara and Kabir had insisted that she should stay with them and Rehan had asked her too, she had not let herself be a burden on anyone's shoulder. She had moved into a small house which she rented with the advance she got from the school and had been living in the house with his memories. She never let it hurt her or haunt her. She had made them her Oxygen which helped her live but at times she wondered till when she could do that and feared the day she would meet him again. That day which was finally there. She prayed that it should not be him but she her heart knew that the prayers were all futile! It was him and she knew it. Turning around, she saw his back!

He knew it was her. He for sure knew it was her. At that moment, all he wanted was to have her in his arms. He wanted to feel her. He wanted to make sure she was there and never let her go. He was going to take a step forward when his own words pulled his foot back "agar main kabhi tumhara saath na doon, toh main tumhara shauhar kehlaane ke laayak nahi hoon!" He was right then! He did not deserve being called her husband. He did not deserve her love after what he had done... or what he had not done! He feared her questions like never before. He feared as he had no answer if she asked why he did not stand by her when she was screaming out for help though he had promised her that he would always be by her. He had no answers if she asked him how he let someone else break them apart. He had no answers if she asked he did not show the love he claims to have for her. He had no answer if she asked why he did not... just stay with her! Or moreover, how did he stay without her? He turned back!

He could not face his Mallika-E-Zain, his Mamu ki bhaanji. He did not know the answer for any of these questions. But he knew definitely knew one thing! He loves her. And she loves him as her life and the separation had been more painful for her than for him! He had his family by him. He had Fahad bhai and Rizwan to hold him tight and not let him collapse. He had his dad to fill in hopes in him each day. But Aliya! She had been alone. She had fought alone! For over three months. About 98 days! Over 2353 hours 141125 minutes 8467234 seconds... another second adding with each passing second! She held herself together all by herself. She had wiped her own tears. She had no shoulder supporting her! She had lived all alone. But no more! She had gone through enough pain alone. Now he was going to be with her! He knew, he was nothing of what she deserves. She deserves the world's best husband but he was sure... he was sure that she wants this imperfect piece of a creature. She loved him... she still did! And moreover, he needs her! They love each other and no matter how imperfect he was and how perfect she was, they could not live without each other! They were so imperfectly perfect! And that was when he heard a silent call, "Zain" and his heart answered back, "Aliya"

That was it! As soon as she turned back, she knew it was him. And that was enough! There was no more to ponder over! Zain definitely deserved a better wife but she could not let go off! She could not let Zain fight the storm all alone. She had promised that she would be by him and she had to keep up that promise now! It was now or never! Her heart called out for him...silently, "Zain" and she got her reply "Aliya" and he turned around! She saw his face after 3 months! But it was not the desperate tired face she had last seen at the Dargah! His eyes were full, but she could still see through them. He was waiting for her and she would not let him wait longer. Just like he would not! Not after seeing her after the eternal 3 months! And he saw nothing but longing for him in those clouded eyes.

They did not have to put any effort. Their feet involuntarily bought them closer and within no time, they were mere inches away and that was when they paused. But unlike they had feared, it was a day of no words. Unheard confessions were made. Their hearts spoke to each other in a language that only they knew. Their pain, their concerns, their happiness, their love. They were all much beyond words. Something the world's best poems could never convey. Something that books could never suffice. Something the most beautiful painting could not depict. It was all shared within seconds. Silent promises were made- to never even think of parting. No barriers were now left. Nothing to stop them.

They did not want to stop themselves either and held each other in embrace. They held on to each other like that was the last moment of their lives. Her hands were clutching his coat while her cheek was pressed on to his shirt. As his left hand caressed her hair softly, his right hand held her right shoulder as tight as possible and his chin was firmly placed over her head, protectively and possessively. They frequently adjusted themselves to fit in even perfectly, if possible and absorb the warmth of the hug which they had dearly missed in the last three months. The wind was fanning their faces as though it was taking a detour because it could not pass through between them. They stood there forgetting the word, exploring each other's souls. She knew his eyes were oozing out salt water and he could feel his shirt wet.

Zain slowly broke the hug, after what seemed less than a split second to them but eternity for the outer world, and cupped her face his palms and her hand found their way to his cheeks. Looking into one another's eyes, what they found was pure love for each other. Unconditional, unconventional! "I LOVE YOU" both said together and those were the only words they spoke. Nothing beyond it. They knew nothing was necessary beyond that! And his lips rested on her forehead while her eyelids landed smoothly over those wet eyeballs making a last stray tear get out of her left eye and he hugged her again. He smiled remembering their confession and swung her around just like he had done that day and she smiled wholeheartedly just like that day, the day of their new beginning as this day is also a new beginning for them. The beginning of a journey they had to complete as one.

Zain would definitely have kissed her again if not for his brother's call. He picked the call...quite unwillingly, side-hugging his life unaware of the fact that he would get the best news of his life. News that his Darling was now conscious. Their eyes lightened. They were the happiest people in the wide world at that moment. They had both finally reached the two most important people in his life but people at Barkat Villa were worried! The head of their family had asked for his son and niece before anything else as soon as he gained strength to speak. Fahad immediately called Zain and let him know of his father's recovery and then added this piece of news as well concluding saying "Zain, mujhe lagta hai hume dad ko sach bata dena chahiye" "Nahi bhai! Dad so sab kuch mamu ki Bhaanji samjhayegi. Hum 15 minute me pojunch rahe hai. Dad to batadijiye" and hung up leaving a beyond confused Fahad! What did Zain mean? But he just followed his brother's instructions and left the rest of the family also confused!

In 13 minutes, zain was literally flying in the hall ways of Barkat Villa towards his dad's room with Aliya just behind him. He had driven as fast as possible being safe. He could waste a single second in reaching his father. He stopped momentarily at the door. He had to fill the sight of his father sitting and happily chatting with his family into his eyes. He had to relish that moment. And his eyes met with Usmaan saab's "Dad!" he ran to him and sat by him and hugged him with all his might! Separating out of the hug, he found 2 suspicious eyes. "Aliya kaha hai?" he knew his Aliya could not stay away from him for a month if she was in the same house! And he had seen guilt in his wife's eyes. Something was wrong. Something definitely was! And he would not let them hide it now. If anything had happened to his Aliya, he would not forgive any of them but he did not have to, as his question was answered "Main yahi hoon Maamu" she said, entering with a glass of juice, as happily as ever. All the members were sweetly surprised..ermm,, shocked!handing the juice over to her maamu , she asked zain, "Haar gaye na? maine kaha tha ki Maamu sab se pehle mujhe poochenge!" and Zain acted as if he had lost a serious bet. Usmaan saab was haapy! Ah that's an understatement! His family was as one! And their relations, which he had tended like a gardener, had blossomed into beautiful fragment flowers. He put his hand over both their heads and hugged them as his wife joined beside him.


so here ends my 1st baby...

i hope you all liked it

this is the last chapter that does not mean you don't comment..i'm eagerly waiting for ur reactions...

please do leave your views..

joota chappal rotten tomatoes everything is welcome

bas eggs math throw karo.. i'm a veggie

with lots and lots of love

-Vinu❤️❤️❤️❤️

Edited by vinu127 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOWW that was awesome 👏👏👏 You beautifully described their feelings !! I miss mamu. Its been so long since we have seen him giving blessings to Zaya and walking in Barkat Villa 😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..!!!👏
U portrayed Zain and Aliya's feelings beautifully...
Too good I Really loved it ❤️
Ty so much for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
very beautiful and emotional update.love the way u discribe ZaYa feeling,their pain of separation.thanks for PM.

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