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Posted: 11 years ago
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BREAKING WAVES : Part 2


He kept staring at the window of his hospital room with little movement. It had been years since he last saw her and nothing seemed to have changed, her presence made his heart skip a beat. With happiness or nervousness, he didn't know. Her eyes didn't seem to have carried any grudge when they fell on him. He looked around the room and let the feeling of her presence in his room a few minutes ago, sink in.

Her father is a fraud who found a shield in lies to save his skin. She is no less. It's in their genes. There's no riddance from it. You still want to maintain the same relation with somebody who thinks it's absolutely alright to hide how big of a cheat and a fraud her dad is? I'm sure there were many instances where she lied to continue hiding the truth. Trust is extremely valuable Maan and it has been wasted over whatever relationship you shared with her.

So many words were spoken and there wasn't a single word he could come up with, to defend her. Until that moment he probably had no idea on what being clueless meant. Neither did he know what helpless meant until he saw her trying to convey how she never meant ill of anybody by hiding the truth. All she wanted was to make clear how she never wanted the past of his father to effect whatever was ahead of her.

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Since the moment she saw him, she hated the breaks she had in between her works. They only triggered all the bitter memories. The only way she learnt to deal with them was to stop feeding her thoughts but his mere presence weakened her tricks and ideas of dealing with those memories.

Do you think your parents are right Maan?

Tears escaped her eyes while rewinding the moment where Maan's answer was not something that declared his trust in her. At one level, she knew she was wrong but failed to form an image of how differently her actions could be interpreted. Selfish, Liar, Cheat could the conclusions of her actions, she never knew. If the effects of her actions pushed her into a pit of regret and helplessness, Maan's silence only worsened things for her. For once, she found herself in a losing battle with no one standing beside.

She remembered the mess created by her in her house. All she wanted was to hurt her father, hurt him as much as she was hurt, more than that, if possible. She hurled insults at him and threw everything breakable on the floor. The sound of smashing objects still rung in her ears. The vicious words uttered by her still stung her.

Thanks for ruining everything for me, Papa. You never gave anything much to me, but it didn't bother me much. Today, you have just snatched everything I had. I can never forget this and never forgive you.

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Geet took a deep breath and closed her face in her palm. She could not afford to let the old memories take over her senses at any cost. Maan is a closed chapter and he'd remain to be one. She is a new Geet and she'd only improve for the better. If there's anything she wanted from him, a few months ago, was a closure but now even it didn't seem to matter. Maintaining the distance from the man was the best thing to do. She got up and went to her locker where she found a note lying.

Maan Khurana, the patient with the broken leg has been asking about you the whole time. I don't think he would mind if you visit him once in Room no. G7 .

The paper soon lied in a corner of her locker in a crushed state. Crushed it was, yet in the locker.

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To be continued...

Edited by -Crayon- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update! beautifully written! Maan still loves her! He thinks abt the past! He realised that she never wanted to hurt anyone! Her dad destroyed her life! Geet was inconsolable! Bt she moved on! seeing him, everything came back! Geet decides to stay away frm him! bt a note left 4 her to go n c him as he asked 4 her! Geet crushes it! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The dilemma. She expected Maan to show trust in her but for Maan, maybe she broke the trust in first place. Let us see if they, any one of them, likely Maan breaks the ice.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update hun.. ofcourse geet is hurt.. she expected atleast her love to trust her and have faith in her.. he should have atleast let her know he knows shes not wrong.. cont soon hun
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely os
waiting for the next part
will they find each other again
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Posted: 11 years ago
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'Yet in the Locker'. tat shows her heart's condition. crushed still locked in her heart.

nice update.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am glad that Geet threw the note away. Why should she go to see him?

I understand that Geet kept a secret from Maan and his family. But obviously no one, not Maan nor his family members, bothered to ask WHY? Why did Geet hide this secret.

From what you have revealed in the chapter, Geet does not get along with her father nor does she approve of his past. So she was just trying to distance herself from that life.

Maan was hurt but never once did he consider her feelings? Not once he asked why did Geet lie?

Geet has moved on and if Maan wants answers now, then HE needs to do the work. Why should Geet make it easy in him now?

Loved part 2! Thank you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
why maan wants to talk with geet now after this long time

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am totally lo inv it with each update... A strong geet after miserable past... And she is all ready to move on(at least till now)... I m loving it so much... Plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maan din trust her ... And they parted ways
But that was past

Whts there for them in the future

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