~SanDhir OS~ Kyun dard hai itna tere Ishq me?

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Hey Guys regarding the current track I decided to write an OS. Mostly based on Randhir's situation. Hope you all will like it. Your appreciation and criticism means alot to me. Please do comment and share your views & spare me for all the mistakes. Happy reading! 😊
~SanDhir OS~ Kyun dard hai itna tere Ishq me?

Fest award ceremony was going on and Sanyukta received a call from her her saying that a car is waiting for her outside and she has to leave for Delhi as her engagement is fixed She was helpless in means seriously helpless, she was in deep grieve, she was crying hard but none of this would help her. On the other hand Captain Sanyukta Aggarwal's name was call out to present her the trophy but she wasn't there as she was leaving the college without informing anyone because she doesn't want to face anyone, she doesn't really have that courage. How will she let everyone know that the Sanyukta whom they consider as a fighter in real how coward and helpless she is? NO! she can't let anyone know.

Randhir, Kaustauki and Parth went in search of Sanyukta but she wasn't in the hotel, canteen, basketball court or anywhere else.

Randhir: (Unable to find her) Kahan chali gayi abb yeh, har jagah iske peeche peeche jana parta he.

Then suddenly he saw Sanyukta with her suitcase leaving the college and sat in the car. He was shocked, he seriously was. He couldn't stop her and with what right he will? He was dealing with different emotions, fear, hurt, pain and most importantly love for her which was clearly evident in his eyes. He never felt so hurt before.

Kaustauki and Parth informed everyone that Sanyukta is not in the college as she left. Parth went n the hostel room. And saw Randhir sitting on the floor he was shattered and tears were flowing from his eyes no stop. He immediately went towards Randhir and tried to pick him up but he was too stubborn.

Parth: Randhir? Are you okay? Get up!
Randhir: She left, she left..
Parth: Randhir we'll talk about it, please get up first..(He never saw Randhir like this)
Randhir: I couldn't stop her..
Parth: Randhir please get up..
Randhir: I lost her forever, I can't live without her, I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT HER. (He shouted)
Parth: Then bring Sanyukta back and confess your love.

Randhir was amazed that how he knew that he is taking about Sanyukta.

Parth: Though we are not friends but one thing is common between us, we both love someone that too madly and deeply. I know you love Sanyukta, I know this when you even didn't realize. I can see concern, care, anger, love all for Sanyukta in your eyes, I know how you always got restless seeing Sanyukta with me. Its not too late yet

Randhir: But,..(Parth cuts him in between)

Parth: No Randhir in love the their is no but, or and either. Bring her back before its too late. You know I have felt the pain of separation and I know how it feels like and trust me nothing can be more terrible than knowing the fact that the one you love to the infinity and beyond is not with you. Don't give your self a chance to regret, go and get back your love.

Randhir: (he was seriously mesmerized by his words, which affected him directly on the heart) I don't know whether I should say thank you or sorry to you..

Parth: This isn't the time of thankyou or sorry, go get her back.

Randhir stood up took him back hugged Parth really hard and left, He was on the way to get her Sanyukta back, his and only his Sanyukta Aggarwal. His Farzi.

~IN DELHI (SANYUKTA's HOUSE)~

Sanyukta met his mom with a fake smile on her face and went directly in the room. She sat infront of the mirror and took the trophy out from her bag. And cried, cried hard she want to give herself a relief, she want to took all that out from what she was going through.

"I am sorry", I couldn't make it. May be full filling my dream wasn't my destiny".

Her mom came with a beautiful blue and white saree in her hand and asked her to get ready as Sameer and her family was about to come and rituals will be started. *She nodded* and took the saree from her Mom's hand. And wore it, she was looking stunning more than usual. *Eeekks* She was looking so damn beautiful. Suddenly she heard a noise coming from her behind.

She looked back and noticed that Randhir was in her room. "Randhir"?
He looked up and saw Sanyukta wearing a saree, she was looking so beautiful, he was completely lost in her.

Sanyukta: Randhir? Randhir? (He got back in his senses)
Randhir: Not looking that bad today (With a grin on his face as if he was teasing her)
Sanyukta: Randhir what are you doing here?
Randhir: I am here to take you back..
Sanyukta: Randhir I am not in a mood of jokes please today my engagment, just leave!
Randhir: You are already engaged to me (With a smirk)
Sanyukta: What?
Randhir: Ahh! I mean I made you wear this ring, remember?
Sanyukta: Randhir you've completely lost it, just leave!
Randhir: So you are a coward right? I was right you were not capable of being an engineer, I* was right that girls only belong to kitchen not in mechanical lab. I was damn right..
Sanyukta: Just shut up Randhir! I am not doing this because of my will, I have to do this for my parent's sake. I don't want to marry that MCP.
Randhir: You don't have to then.
Sanyukta: What?
Randhir: Yes, you are doing this wedding for your parent's sake right? But, what if your parent will call off this wedding?
Sanyukta: But, how will this be possible?
Randhir: Leave this to me, I will not let you marry that Sameer and thats a promise to you and to me.

Sanyukta was puzzled, she was unable to figure out that why Randhir is doing all this for her? He always wants her to leave the college and always told her that she belongs to the kitchen but then why all this? But she was happy, happy with this changed.

Due to Randhir's plan and trick Sanyukta's father called off the wedding and told everyone that sanyukta will not marry a guy like Sameer Mittal and announced infront of everyone. Randhir was also present there and Sanyukta was not getting that how all this happened, then she saw Randhir (he winked at her) and she remembered his words that how he promised her and She was so happy, she just can't describe. She was happy that now she can be back to FITE, to live up her dream all because of Randhir.

~NEXT DAY~

Randhir: Are you ready? Let go
Sanyukta: Yeah!
They both sat in the bus.
Sanyukta: Randhir I don't know how to thank you, I..
Randhir: O common Sanyukta, don't worry I'll make you pay back.
They both laughed.
Sanyukta: But why you did this?
Randhir: (In his heart) Can't you see in my eyes? How much I love you. *He remained quiet*

And they reached FITE. And Sanyukta met everyone, all were glad to see her back.

~AFTERNOON (IN CANTEEN)~

Randhir: Now, I'll confess my love. I'll tell her how much I love her. Yeah finally I will. (Going towards the canteen, saw Sanyukta and Kaustauki sitting and talking)

Kaustauki: Thank God Sanyu, you are back. But what now?
Sanyukta; Yeah now my focus will only be on my dream.
Kaustauki: But what about your wedding? You have to marry someday.
Sanyukta: Yeah but probably after the completion of my dream.
Kaustauki: But, what if you'll fall for someone?
Sanyukta: *Laughed* No chance, I know love is a very beautiful feeling but I cannot love anyone because I can only marry a guys of my parents choice. And that time no one can rescue me.

Randhir heard all of the bit. He was heartbroken, he was again shattered. May be being loved back was not in his fate but this time he will not give up or run behind her. He will fight for his love and will make her fall in love back. Yes, Love is very painful.


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Zyra thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was such a good OS. ❤️
Wish it had a happy ending!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zyra

That was such a good OS.❤️

Wish it had a happy ending!



Thankyou so much 😳
Yeah it will definitely have a happy ending 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was awesome, i loved it
well the last part was bit sad, but he was determined...
and dat was the best part to read..
paran bonding was great again...
Keep up the good work!!

love
-Sush 😳
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that was mindblowing...
amazing work dear👏......
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What a brilliant ending.this is definitely gonna happen in the serial .This is the real Sanyukta who will never fall in love and will fulfill wants her dreams
Superb os yaar.
just loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice one dear, plz continue
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Originally posted by: sushie166

This was awesome, i loved it
well the last part was bit sad, but he was determined...
and dat was the best part to read..
paran bonding was great again...
Keep up the good work!!

love
-Sush 😳


Thankyou so much Sush 😳
Yeah I really hope Parth will play a cupid for Sandhir 😛
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Thanks Dear 😊
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Originally posted by: anjipankaj

What a brilliant ending.this is definitely gonna happen in the serial .This is the real Sanyukta who will never fall in love and will fulfill wants her dreams
Superb os yaar.
just loved it


Thankyou so much Dear 😳
I really hope this happens and I really don't want Randhir to beg for his love I want him to fight for his love 😳

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