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Posted: 11 years ago
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Alright, so I'm back. After a looong time too.
Remember me? I doubt you do. And since I have no qualms about re-introducing myself, I'll do it.
The name is Mugdhaa ( mind the double'a' ) though I'm known around as Mugs.

If you're wondering on what basis I'm saying I'm back, I'll tell you, of course. I wrote an OS on SanDhir, way back in January. ( Flabbergasted *SanDhir OS* )
I didn't watch the show then. In fact, I still don't watch the show, regularly, that is. I catch it if I have both time and nothing else to watch.
And I did manage to catch the Fest track episodes. And fell for VidArth.

Yeah, she's quite the bitch and he's just... undecipherable, but who cares? They are hawt!

So yes, inspiration struck, and I wrote this. Nothing really great, and I believe, I've never been this bold with fanfiction, but VidArth ke liye banta hai.

Drabble-ish. Alternate Universe where Arpita doesn't exist. ( No, I don't think she's a kabab-mein-haddi or something, just that I want this to steer clear of what is canon.)

On to the one shot!


***

Find You


"Let's make a night you won't remember,

I'll be the one you won't forget"


Hangover. Major hangover. Shit.


That was the first thing that Parth Kashyap realized as he woke up. His head felt as if it would burst into a thousand gory smithereens any moment, as he groaned to himself, clutching it and beginning to tenderly massage his temples. The nausea hadn't kicked in yet, thankfully, so he could do a little something about his head before he found himself bent over the toilet or the basin, regurgitating.


As a rule, Parth never got drunk. At least, not this kind of drunk. And yet, last night, he'd lost control, and he didn't remember how or why.


What happened last night?


The second thing he realized, as he got up to drink some water, splash some over his face and hunt for a painkiller, was that he was clothed waist down the way he clothed his torso before going to bed every night. With nothing.


He was naked. Double shit!


He found his boxers on the floor, pulled them on, and went over to his bedside table, grabbing the jug of water and gulping it down. Wiping his mouth with the back of his right hand, he walked to the bathroom, stepping over his pair of jeans, his t-shirt and his jacket.


What the hell happened last night?!


The third thing he realized after he opened the basin tap, ducked his head under it as best as he could to let the cold water soothe his ravaged nerves a little, splashed some water over his face, and looked at his reflection in the mirror above the basin, was that there was a bruise on his throat, a little above his collarbone.


A love bite. Oh, shit, shit, shiiit!!


His head throbbed harder as he wondered what his bathroom would look like with pieces of his brain splattered all over. Disgusting. He bent over the basin and was violently sick.


Having finished unloading his gut of it's contents, he brushed his teeth and had a bottle of cold water from the refrigerator and a painkiller he'd managed to find on top of the refrigerator, though he had no idea how it got there.

Feeling a little better, he got back into bed. He had to figure out what had happened!


His head still throbbed, of course, but the painkiller seemed to have started killing the pain. Or wounding it, at least.


He tried to piece the events that led to his discovery of not only a hangover, but also of him being naked and with a love bite planted on his throat.


He was in the club, that much was obvious. For some reason he still couldn't remember, he'd had a lot to drink. It didn't matter anyway. So alright, he'd gotten drunk. What next?


He closed his eyes, and implored his brain to remember. the throbbing increased a little again, but it brought flashes with it. Much needed flashes of memory.


Lights. Multi-coloured lights. Dancing bodies. And-


His eyes flew open- her too!


The woman. The woman in that short, black dress and heels, dancing away, as she ignored the men gazing at her lasciviously and the women around glaring daggers. The woman who'd caught his eye and flashed a smile at him, a seductive curling of her lips. The woman he'd not only ended up dancing with, but also bringing home. The woman who gave him that love bite, as she pushed him so he fell back on his bed, taking her with him. The woman, whose scent still seemed to linger around him.


The woman who'd whispered seductively in his ear after he'd mumbled out his name and asked her her own, and before kissing him, so he wouldn't be mumbling out unnecessary personal details anymore: "It won't help you to find me, but I'll still give it to you- "


A tiny smirk made his way to his lips at the memory.

I'll find you alright, Vidushi.


***


O-kaay. So. I don't know how this turned out, coz yeah, it's late, I'm supposed to be working on my Accounts project and I'm sleep deprived, as is usual.

Oh, and lyrics used: "Timber"- Ke$ha feat. Pitbull.
And I apologize for the shitty title. The title maker part of my brain is defunct as of now, it seems.

Anyway, reviews are love, people! And thank you for reading from beginning till the end. At least, I hope you read it from beginning till the end.

Indebted,
Mugs.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res.
Mugs. I regret reading this..
Do you know why?
Cuz you just made me ship this pairing so much harder. Like I was obsessed enough with vidarth. Started posting a FF on these both.
And then bam!
I get a dose of this os of amazing hot ...argh! This is mind blowing.
I want more n more vidarth from you.plz atleast write 1 more vidarth os!
I will post a more detailed review later after my college gets over
Mugs. I shall stalk you.
Love
Ash
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RESSS :3
UNRES.

I'm hoping you like this comment because obviously, you HAVE to feel better right now.
To the OS, I have to say, this is one of your best Canon One Shots. It was ingrained in my brain. Usually, when I comment, I have to read the one shot all over again but her, I don't need to because I remember everything.

First things first, though I like VidArth, I'm not really a shipper but now that I think of it, I guess I love the dark aura. <3 Well, we always do, don't we? :P You, my friend, have the ability to make even the supposed villains be the heroes. You did that with Anya, and now with Vidushi. Damn, I absolutely love that. <3

Coming to the one shot, simple yet amazing. I love the song <3. You're going down, I'm yelling timber. :') You have an amazing choice in songs, I will say that. (excluding you-know-who). You've always been my inspiration and you know that and every one shot proves to me that I made the right choice. The concept isn't too extraordinary but the way you put it is.

It goes so well with VidArth and I don't think this would suit any other couple, maybe just Gauri-Yudi, but that too is maybe.

This Parth somehow gave me the Nihaal vibes. You get me? And Vidushi, ah, she's one sexy biatch. I love how he recollects everything, not at a time, but step by step. I guess this is how it is supposed to be? :P I loved whenever he said shit, the poor guy. xD

Just a thing, did you have to add that he was naked? ☺️🤣 It kinda sorta made me laugh and blush at the same time. Blush because of you know what and laugh because I'm imagining if this happened in FITE, what would Randhir's reaction be. Sorry, got out of track there.

I absolutely loved how you ended the one shot with her name. Makes you crave for more, let makes you feel it's complete. I don't know how you do it Katniss, but you just do.

This is brilliant as it always is. Keep writing more and you know I will always comment. :)

-Rue ;)
Edited by ARandKJFan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: infernofyre

Res.
Mugs. I regret reading this..
Do you know why?
Cuz you just made me ship this pairing so much harder. Like I was obsessed enough with vidarth. Started posting a FF on these both.
And then bam!
I get a dose of this os of amazing hot ...argh! This is mind blowing.
I want more n more vidarth from you.plz atleast write 1 more vidarth os!
I will post a more detailed review later after my college gets over
Mugs. I shall stalk you.
Love
Ash


Hey Ash!
Nice to meet you. :)

I'm glad you liked this. And yeah, I have more from where this came from. :3
According to the time I find, I'll be posting a oneshot or two more on VidArth. Maybe one on SanDhir too.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D

Mugs.

P.S. You wanna stalk me? I'm flattered. ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much!

Mugs.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jaldi, alright? :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i love this one...aah even i find vidarth hot..they have some chemistry man. n your writing..love it ❤️
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Originally posted by: moonkmh

i love this one...aah even i find vidarth hot..they have some chemistry man. n your writing..love it ❤️


Aah, IKR?! They are like super crackling hawt! <3

And thank you so much! :D

Mugs.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

RESSS :3

UNRES.

I'm hoping you like this comment because obviously, you HAVE to feel better right now.
To the OS, I have to say, this is one of your best Canon One Shots. It was ingrained in my brain. Usually, when I comment, I have to read the one shot all over again but her, I don't need to because I remember everything. Oh, I DO, Kid. How could I not? I made you rush to comment and you still did a brilliant job of it. <3 Thank you! ( See this? Iss kehte hain tactfully bully karna. ;) ) But no, I'm sacchi feeling better abhi. :)

First things first, though I like VidArth, I'm not really a shipper but now that I think of it, I guess I love the dark aura. <3 Well, we always do, don't we? :P You, my friend, have the ability to make even the supposed villains be the heroes. You did that with Anya, and now with Vidushi. Damn, I abs**tely love that. <3 Exactly! SanDhir are still hot, no doubt. But it's a personal thing where I start losing interest in a couple once they both fall in love, or if even one of them goes the lovey dovey- denial way. And thing is, ki you don't even know with VidArth. There is no saying they'll get together, and yet, it won't matter, because they are a couple who to me come under the "sinful" tag. ;)

Coming to the one shot, simple yet amazing. I love the song <3. You're going down, I'm yelling timber. :') You have an amazing choice in songs, I will say that. (excluding you-know-who). You've always been my inspiration and you know that and every one shot proves to me that I made the right choice. The concept isn't too extraordinary but the way you put it is. You better move, you better dance! <3 Yeees, I love that song! And thank you!
I'm not only flattered, but also honoured that you think of me as your inspiration. <3

It goes so well with VidArth and I don't think this would suit any other couple, maybe just Gauri-Yudi, but that too is maybe. You know, this Parth might just pull off a Yudi-esque impression. But the Vidushi in this won't pass for Gauri. Gauri is the Queen Bee. She'd go and wreak havoc and not quietly leave like Vidushi. :P

This Parth somehow gave me the Nihaal vibes. You get me? And Vidushi, ah, she's one sexy biatch. I love how he recollects everything, not at a time, but step by step. I guess this is how it is supposed to be? :P I loved whenever he said shit, the poor guy. xD A leeetil, yes. :P Poor guy, not-so-indeed. ;) :P

Just a thing, did you have to add that he was naked? ☺️🤣 It kinda sorta made me laugh and blush at the same time. Blush because of you know what and laugh because I'm imagining if this happened in FITE, what would Randhir's reaction be. Sorry, got out of track there. I surprised myself. I'm never this vocal about sex while writing. At least, definitely not with fanfiction. But VidArth are so raw, unke liye hide-and-seek type language nai chalegi.
It's AU, re. But yes, Randhir. He'll probably be blushing and secretly imagining Sanyukta and then mentally scolding himself for it too. :P And Sanyukta will probably just drop down. :P

I absolutely loved how you ended the one shot with her name. Makes you crave for more, let makes you feel it's complete. I don't know how you do it Katniss, but you just do. Arigatou!

This is brilliant as it always is. Keep writing more and you know I will always comment. :) Yeah, I got an idea for another VidArth piece and maybe a SanDhir one too. Let's see, how my schedule works out.

-Rue ;) 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dayum, do I get you.
I kinda sorta ship VidArth too :P / And I don't even like Vidushi.
Okay, and first off - I'm pretty sure I've read Flabbergasted sometime, even the name stuck :)
And this one was pretty good too! :3

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