Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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Aadhya

@AadhyaAashutosh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Hi ritu

awesome update 😃

lovely banner 👍🏼

aah!!!! the sweet childhood of sakshi & arjun...i never get tired of reading them 😳

so sakshi still believes in him

another cliffhanger!!!!!

thanks for pm & cont soon 🤗

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Ritu i hate u
i hate u 4 stoping at this point
plz yaar continue soon
before u go to another vication

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: kunchu
Hey Ritu
What a good way to begin my day
Abhi its 5am n I'm in a bus stop waiting for nxt 1 hr
So your story was d first pm I opened
Banner is too cute
What pleased me more was the glimpse of the cafe
The way you bind the matter in present with memories of past is just great
This update theme was trust n you had just the perfect fb for it
Cycling(my nightmare) nvr cud learn it myself
I cud have helped myself with a friend like him
Mai pic is perfect
Again cliffhanger
Cant complain as its my trademark too
Continue soon
PS: postman ne firse chori ki

Heylooo Helna🤗

those first few lines made me smile..hawww 5 am bus *bows* mere se toh 6 baje nahi utha jaata lol😆

thank you ooo much for the comment - it means a lot!😳

haha same here actually..my dad taught me cycling kinda the same way..although he let me go loool😆😆 but then otherwise i wouldnt have learnt😆

Originally posted by: ugababe
Amazing as always...

And so smart with those cliffhangers

I shall like always wait and hold my breath for the next part...

Khushi

Thank youu Khushi 🤗

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
Awesome update didi.
Loved it.
U gave the combination of past and present beautifully.
Loved the flashbacks.
And the banner is awesome.
Mai is so sweet and cute.
U also gave us a glimpse of the cafe.
Really loved it.
U made my day.
Con soon and thanx for PM..

Thank youu Easha🤗

awww i m glad i made your day 😳

Originally posted by: NainaSM
huh 😡abhi bhi suspense bataya bhi nai ..😕..jaldi batao kyaa hua ?👍🏼

hahahaa dont worry, intezaar khatam hua😉

Thanks for the comment🤗

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
nice update but i am upset with u for stopping where u stopped 😡
nice banner and finally face for maai 😊
awww flashback was so sweet arjun teaching his titlee how to cycle not letting her fall
he promised i will never let u fall will always be with u and he kept his promise until that fateful day
when he thought that coz of him maai died but he still came back when he thought that now she cannot manage alone
sakshi's and her maai's last convo was also revolved around arjun maai's last words r so true always listen to ur heart and now after knowing the reason of arjun's disappearance titlee is doing just that
thanks for pm and pls don't make us wait for the next part

Thank you soo much Shefalii🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
Loved it
The Banner was lovely
The FB was too cute
Loved Small Arjun and Sakshi
Sakshi's trust in Arjun is unbreakable
Still didn't get Why is arjun responsible?
interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Thanks a lot Shravaniii🤗

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
awsome update...
love it ...
past and present everything is perfect...
now wanted to know suspense...
plz con.soon...
amazing banner...

Thank youu Gausiya🤗

Originally posted by: Humzy
wow awsm update
very beautifully written
the emotions and feelings were portrayed fabulously
saakshi and her mums convo was lovely- very emotional as well near the end
continue soon

Thank youu Humairaa🤗

Originally posted by: PoohLover
Rituuu rituuu 😳

Ah i just love the banner...the yellow color...sooo bright and full of life...the banner totally suit the story 👏

Ah i soo love the update...i really had tears in my eyes reading this part

"he puts her arms around both of us again and kneels down to our height. "Because he is your friend. And friends never let you fall. And if you do, then he'll be there to support you. Always. Haina ACP Arjun?"
"Always." He extends his hands towards me. "Main humesha tere saath rahunga. Ab toh chal. And I promise that I won't let you fall."

This is not only a paragraph but one of the true definition of friendship ❤️

This was truly very emotional...it was an update where there was the happy face of sakshi who finally learned how to cycle but for me it was all emotional..i dunno any update on friendship makes me all emotional...paagal hoon i guess 😆 😆

The last conversation of sakshi with her mom...another emotional part..this is truly soo sad...you never know when its the last time you talk with someone and see that person!

Omg how could you stop like that rituuu 😲

You better updateee soon huh 😈 😈

Fantastic update...you really have that talent to write with the right words and convey the right feeling and meaning..kudos for that 👏

Thank you sooo much rituu rituu 🤗 🤗

Bharuuu🤗🤗🤗

orange font special for my story kyaaa😳

hahaha tune approve kiya hai acha toh hona hi hai naaa😛

awww..thank you sooo much ❤️ yes yess that's friendship 😳

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Arrrggghhh...After reading note I thought this update vll contain the most awaited part...but u CLIFFHANGER...😡😡😡😡
Anyways Awesome update...

Nice banner...👏👏👏
Sakshi ignored him to annoy him...😆😆😆
Sakshi turned from her words when Arjun asked Maai for cycle ride...😆😆😆
Arjun promised to never made her fall...😃😃😃
Sakshi learnt cycling from Arjun...& Arjun never made her fall...😃😃😃
Sakshi is confused how he is responsible for her mother death...so m I...😕😕😕
LOL...Sakshi wanted to go on mount climbing & Arjun withdraws her name back...😆😆😆
Sakshi can't remain angry from him for a long time & Maai knows that...😆😆😆
There was something with Maai's last words...
Sakshi wanted to know why he held himself responsible for Maai's death...

What a wrong point to stop...😡😡😡

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thank you sooo much Sneha🤗

hehe the wait is over!!😛

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: PrincessSassy
Di waise update toh awsum that but is Tarah ap he update kyon chor dia ab jaldi jaldi next update chahiye

Thanks a lot!😃

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Beautiful update
loved their flashback scene
lovely banner
continue soon

Thank youu anita🤗

Originally posted by: jia03
ye kya? abhi bhi nae btaya! :(
lovely flashbacks...
awesome update! 👍🏼

hehehe thank youuu Jia🤗

ab bataoungi na😛

Originally posted by: shreya09
Rituuu 😡
phir se aise jaga pe atak gayi 😡
u better update soon this time !!!! Samjhi 😈
very nice update it was 👍🏼
but i am still waiting to know why Arjun blames himself.
jaldi jaldi update kar. long wala. waiting. 😳

hahahaaa sorryyy..chalo ab update kar rahi hooon!😛

thank you sooo much shreya🤗

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97
very nice update.
written beautifully.
flashback was awesome.
thankx for pm.
cont soon.

Thank youu Parii🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
U know you are a sweet heart.

I would admit it here, yellow was never the color that was in my favorite list but your banner made my perspective change for the color & to top it the short & sweet quote of "Forever with with" in it was like the cherry on top of the cake.❤️
Your character "Maai" was exactly the way i have visualized her.So full of life & larger than life spirit.Her smile says it all.😃🤗

For an update like this you get a big bear hug
Someone has rightly said, "I trust you" is a better compliment than "I love you" because you may not always trust the person you love but you can always love the person you trust".

This is so true & with "I want you to know something Arjun. I trust you. I always have." coming from Saakshi might have boosted spirit in Arjun to say the truth.In short,he won half of the battle that he was fighting with himself.

P.S:Itne cute & adorable flashback deti rahogi then i might become greedy you know.😆
P.P.S:For the second time,you have cliffhanged on a crucial point ritu😡

Hailaaa itni tareeefff😳😳 Thank youuss hai jiii😃

hahaha dont worry, i will put in lots more FBs 😉

Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital
Oh god..!!! How could you stop at this point Ritu...
Better you update soon dear...

I loved this update...
As always it was really beautiful..especially the FB parts...
I loved Sakshi's convo with mumma...

Waiting for the next update...
Thanks for the pm...

Thank youuu Anjali🤗

hehe yes yess updating😃

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Lovely Banner.. very cute
Awwwsssmmm update
Loved it
Flashback was as always Supper Awwwsssmmm...
Beautifully written...
Cont sooon
Thanks for the PM

Thank youuu Nikita🤗

Originally posted by: AadhyaAashutosh
Hi ritu
awesome update 😃
lovely banner 👍🏼
aah!!!! the sweet childhood of sakshi & arjun...i never get tired of reading them 😳
so sakshi still believes in him
another cliffhanger!!!!!
thanks for pm & cont soon 🤗

Sooo your name is Aadhya? Damn i kept on calling you Pavithra lol😆

achaaa yeh sab chodoo..thank youuu for the comment! it means a lot😳

Originally posted by: Areesha566
Ritu i hate u
i hate u 4 stoping at this point
plz yaar continue soon
before u go to another vication

hehehehe sorryyy..not going on another vacation lol😆

thanks for the comment! hope u like the next part😊

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Heylooo! I am back with the much awaited update! So many threats and angry faces last time lool😆

Achaaa chalo you read on...Um.. it got me a little emotional (even though it's my story) so might be worth getting a box of tissues!

DELETED.

This was the last sad update I promise! And this isn't the end of flashbacks, just so you know 😉

Do leave your comments and likes!

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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Khushi

@ugababe

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Can't wait can't wait can't wait for the next part...

I literally cried with Arjun. He's pain is so acute and his guilt...

Only Sakshi can heal hi heart now.

Update soon!!

Khushi