Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: PrincessSassy
Di fata fat update kro plzzz

Done🤗

Originally posted by: jia03
Awesome update!
you stopped at such an important point... update fast! 😊

Thank you Jiaaa🤗

haha updating today - lucky you lol😆

Edited by ritu_24 - 11 years ago

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Heylooo🤗

Yes yes I am sure you are impatiently waiting for this part! So, I will let you read on before you curse at me for updating so late and then rambling on about it😆

Oh oh and I made a bannerrr😃

P.S - Might want to keep a box of tissues ready

P.P.S - Aisha, since you wanted to see Maai, I just ended up putting her face into the banner 😃

DELETED.

Yes, throw the jootas at me for stopping here again😆 I am sorrryy but you've to wait again for the next update! I bet you didn't expect that last bit though did you?😉

Chalo, hurry up and leave your comments!😃 (ab update kiya hai toh comment toh banta hai naa🤪)

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Hey Ritu

What a good way to begin my day

Abhi its 5am n I'm in a bus stop waiting for nxt 1 hr

So your story was d first pm I opened

Banner is too cute

What pleased me more was the glimpse of the cafe

The way you bind the matter in present with memories of past is just great

This update theme was trust n you had just the perfect fb for it

Cycling(my nightmare) nvr cud learn it myself

I cud have helped myself with a friend like him

Mai pic is perfect

Again cliffhanger

Cant complain as its my trademark too

Continue soon

PS: postman ne firse chori ki

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Khushi

@ugababe

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Amazing as always...

And so smart with those cliffhangers

I shall like always wait and hold my breath for the next part...

Khushi

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Awesome update didi.

Loved it.

U gave the combination of past and present beautifully.

Loved the flashbacks.

And the banner is awesome.

Mai is so sweet and cute.

U also gave us a glimpse of the cafe.

Really loved it.

U made my day.

Con soon and thanx for PM..

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

huh 😡abhi bhi suspense bataya bhi nai ..😕..jaldi batao kyaa hua ?👍🏼

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

nice update but i am upset with u for stopping where u stopped 😡
nice banner and finally face for maai 😊
awww flashback was so sweet arjun teaching his titlee how to cycle not letting her fall
he promised i will never let u fall will always be with u and he kept his promise until that fateful day
when he thought that coz of him maai died but he still came back when he thought that now she cannot manage alone
sakshi's and her maai's last convo was also revolved around arjun maai's last words r so true always listen to ur heart and now after knowing the reason of arjun's disappearance titlee is doing just that
thanks for pm and pls don't make us wait for the next part

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Awesome update
Loved it
The Banner was lovely
The FB was too cute
Loved Small Arjun and Sakshi
Sakshi's trust in Arjun is unbreakable
Still didn't get Why is arjun responsible?
interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon