AkDha FF*Teri baahon mei youn simath jaaon- ch 11 pg 130 (12July) - Page 63

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

part 8 n 9
awesome updates

thank u so much 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: endearingJJ

I am completly smitten with Jalal☺️ 😛...He is very Alpha but in a controlled manner😆
such an irresistible read..i think i will re-read this one😉


Thank you so so so much 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago


CHAPTER 10 :

Hello guys , i hope this update entertains you , all my tharki loving gang ( Bhavini , Preet Di , Anushka , Aisha ) this update is dedicated to you , Preet di now you gotta tell me GM activate hua ke nahe ?? Bhavini agar hua toh ... mujhay gift chahea 🤣
P.S . To all the readers , i am going to start a new SS ( Short story ) Its being different from the one's i've written till date , will post it by friday , i hope you all like that too 😳

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The morning come , a calm and silent sun takes it place replacing the beautiful moon and its romantic light and brightness .. God created everything with such beauty , isn't it ? moon comes , sun goes , sun comes , moon goes .. Birds were singing their beautiful morning song ..

The two beautiful love birds , who spent the whole night in love for each other , were sleeping peacefully , their bodies naked , they were still crawled in each other's arms , hugging .. but still sleeping ..

Jodha wakes up by the light which filled the room , she looked beside her and there is , Jalaluddin Mohammad asleep , she smiles , and blushes hard .. its such a beautiful view for her seeing Jalaluddin Mohammad slept beside her , in this way she could study his beautiful face ..

His lips are well sculptured , pouty and parted slightly .. and his shiny and clear hairs is a glorious mess now , she kept looking at him and she remembers her last night , in which they made unstoppable love ..

FLASHBACK :


Jodha is lying , Jalal is over her , staring at her breast .. he moves his mouth closer to them and closes his teeth around her nipples and his thumbs and fingers pull hard ..

FLASHBACK ENDS :


She blushes thinking this , she keeps her hand over his hairs and caresses them and again gets a flashback of that night ..

FLASHBACK :

He eases back with exquisite slowness . and he closes his eyes and groans and thrusts into her again , she cries .. " ahhh " ..
"More?" he whispers ? his voice rough ..
" yes " she breathes ..
He does once more and stills .. she groans , her body accepting all of it ..
"Again ? " he breathes ..
"Yes! " she replies ..

And he moves, but this time he doesn't stop. He shifts onto his elbows so that she can feel his weight on her . He moves slowly at first, easing himself in and out of her . Slowly , he speeds up , she moans and he pounds on. and she keep meeting his thrust . He took her head in his hands and kisses her hard , biting her lower lip again .. He shifts slightly , and feels something inside her ..

He hit again once more and empties himself into her ...

FLASHBACK ENDS :


She closed her eyes , thinking about it again , her mind couldn't think of anything else rather then this , she looked at him , his long lashes , over his face , as his eyes are closed , she move d towards his face and plants a sweet kiss on his cheek .. " I Love you so much Jalal " and she blushes ..
She kept looking at him , and get caught when he opens his eyes , and found Jodha staring him , he feels quite good and bright today , tension - free .. He sits on the bed , still nakes , Jodha too sit , and looks down , quite embarrased and feeling shy ..

"Good Morning Jodha ! " it was Jalal to wish first .. " Good Morning to you too Jalal " she wishes too .. Jalal looks at her and he remembers the last night sleeping time too ...

FLASHBACK :

Jodha looks at the blood on the bed .. she seems very shy , " don't worry " he replies amd clambers in beside her and pulls her in his embrace wrapping his arms around her and kisses her hairs gently .. and then both of them lies and sleeps ..

FLASHBACK ENDS :

" Hey ! " Jodha says , she founds him lost somewhere , she knew where he is lost , but teases him " where are you lost , man ? " .. He looks at her , and moves aside her , " lost in you ! " he murmur near her ear , and bites her ear , she closes her eyes with pleasure and takes the bed sheet in her hands and squeezes it ..

THE FOLLOWING BG MUSIC PLAYS :-



" Come .. lets have a bath " he asks , Jodha looked at him , her eyes widen , mouth drop opens " Bath ! " she exclaims .. " Yeah , together ! " Her eyes showed the shyness inside her and her cheeks were pink & red with blushing .. " oh god ! come on .. its fine " he says , dragging her in his arms ..

He leaves her in the bathroom , she stands by herself and stare at the bathroom , this place isn't new to her ,she had a bath in it , but alone and this time, she's gonna have a bath with Jalaluddin Mohammad , she've never thought of which ..

Both of them sit in the bath and gave a bath to each other .. Jalal takes the bottle of body wash and takes some in his hands and rubs his hands together creationg a soft , foaming lather .. And he started rubbing his hands over her neck and shoulder very gently , massaging firmly with his long , strong fingers . She moans .. His touch on her skin makes her heavenly pleasurable !

He moves down her arms then under them to her underarms washing gently . His hands glide accross to her breasts , and she inhale sharply as his fingers encircled them and his hands kneading them . Her body bows instinctively , pushing her breast in his hands .. then he glides his hands down her belly and stomach !

" You need bath too .. " she giggled , he nods and both smiled , she quickly grab the body wash and sqeezes some in her hands and rub them , she keeps her hands at his manly shoulder which were well shaped , his body was so masculine . she rubs her hands and washes him , then washes his entire body ..

She notices her touch was making his manhood a bit more long and hard , she smiled at her thoughts , Jalal pushed her towards him and she was now sitting on his legs , and her hands hold out his neck , he kissed her neck and with pleasure she groan and pushes her face up and holds his hairs , he groan too .. he then rubs his nose over her neck , her collar bone and she was breathing heavenlyheavy , her heart beat racing , the blood in her nerves rushing ..

" I can..take anymore ... " she tried speaking , Jalal understood , it was much for her , it was both of their's first time ... so , she couldn't take a lot at a time , she quickly washed herself and got out of bath , and so Jalal ...
They were now in their room , neatly dressed , their faces bright , eyes sparkling , who could say that they were the one's who have suffered a bad day yesterday , but for them the night was as wonderful , as joyious as it could be ...

" Breakfast ? " he asks , " Of course , I'm so hungry " she smiled , " I'm more hungry too .. " he replied in a sensual tone , she knew his meanings doesn't relate about food but about Love Making & sex ...

"Jodha ..." he said , moving towards her , he was getting emotional , she too moved towards him , he took her face in his hands , his palm's grabbing her head .. she was shocked by his sudden change of emotion , " what's wrong Jalal .. ?? " she asks ,she was really worried for him about his sudden change of reaction and mood .. " Jodha .. " he said again, his voice seemed to be speaking love , honor , dignity and purity , and nothing else rather then thing , he leaves her face and puts his right hand in his back pant pocket , and there , he represent a ring box in front of her ...

Jodha's eyes were widen , " Will you marry me ? " says Jalal , kneeling down and taking out ring from the box , it was a silk box , its color was red , and the ring was so beautiful , it was truly deserving for this ultimate beautiful , young princess ... It was a diamond ring , the diamond was shiny and sparking ...

" Jalal ... " she said , kneeling down too , a lone tear escaped her eyes , Jalal's eyes were teary too , Jodha moved her right hand forward ... smiling , crying , happy , emotional , senty .. both of their's emotions were undescribable ... " Yes , i will ! " she finally spoke ..

" Oh god ! " he was so happy , his happiness knew no bound , he was not sure about this thing , he wasn't sure if whether Jodha would say a YES ! or a NO ! .. But he still thought that it wouldn't be better if he gets late ..
Hurriedly , he puts on the finger in her left hand ring finger .. and as it was in her hand , she straighten her hand to have a look how amazing does that ring look in her hand , and there , the tears rolled off her eyes ..

Both of them hugged , squeezing each other .. they were on the floor , in each other's arms , crying , smiling , giggling .. " I LOVE YOU " Jalal whispered in her ear .. " I LOVE YOU TOO .. " Jodha too replied , smiling ..
" I've been crazy for you since I saw you Jodha ! " he expresses his feelings ... Jodha gets up from his lap , and looked up in his eyes , and holds his head with her palms , " Me too .. " she smiled , and moved his head forward to kiss , and soonish , there was a beautiful kiss .. A True Love kiss , he was biting her lower lip , sucking it harder , lickling her tongue , tasting her smart mouth again .. and so she was not less at all ... she hold his hairs to make him more wild. and to turn on herself wild too ...

She broke the kiss to breath .. " Are you gonna keep eating me , or have breakfast too ??? " she asking laughing .. Jalal too join her in laughing " of course ! " .. he looked at her , and keeps his right and over her cheek and caresses it " You look wonderful while smiling " at her compliment , she looked down and gaze him through her lashes .. and hugged him once again . and kissed his cheek ..

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage...

So , i hope , ab koi nahe kehga ke this was a short update right ? 😆
Edited by ---Mehak--- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u for dedicated the chapter to me 😆

Wow Mehaku another awesome chapter 👏
U r the SR queen yaar...u describe everything so nicely...I loved it!!
Haaye Jallu ne propose kar diya aur Jo ne YES bhi keh diya 😳
Wonderful 😃
Aise hi mast mast updates deti reh...aur humein enjoy karati reh 😆
Edited by rishbala3018 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank U so much ... for dedicating this chapter to our gang... and u mention my name😳 me blushing ... it's an honor... love U Mehku

Mehek... omg !!! isse to sirf gutter mind nahi sab activate ho gay😳😆 Yaar ab to muje mere 10 saal full on experince ke baad bhi tujse tip leni padegi sr ke bare me... Kya likha hai... Maar dala... me to sach me mar gayi... I feeling sad for Preet... usne yeh padha hoga... aur uska pati ghar pe nahi... par Friday ko uska kya hoga😆 Sach Me U DESERVE SR QUEEN TITLE... ur writing is so passionate and the best part not even single line i felt vulgar... what a commendable writing... yaar... Tu sach erotic writer ban gayi hai😆hum ka gm activate karti rahe... hume ache ache tip deti rahe... ab to muje SR chapter ke liye tujse tip leni padegi... I am really speechless and blushing😳😳😳 U deserve five start for this chapter ⭐️
Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg passionate romantic update
loved and enjoyed it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

omg passionate romantic update

loved and enjoyed it

Thank you so much Rima 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waah waah .. mehaku ... kya baat hai ... hit pe hit chapters de rahi ho meri jaan ... pehle toh fifty shades & now this one ... omg !! SR Queen ban gayi ho tum toh 😆 ...
Btw brilliant chapter mehak 👏... ye toh complete full fledged hot SR chapter tha yaar including the last one ... i just loved it ... & the next thing i loved was jallu proposing jo ... OMG mein mar java !! that was the most emotional moment yaar !! 😭
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Thanks for the pm dear nd the update was too awesome hot 👏 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it... u made my day with this chapi dear.. love u...continue soon...

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