Abhi-Pragya SS: The Twist in the Tale last part page 10

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Abhi-Pragya SS: The Twist in the Tale


Half the day had gone and Abhi had no idea where Pragya was. For all the insensitive things she had done through this one horrible year of marriage this had to be the worse. On top of that Daadi kept asking him when Pragya was coming back, he didn't even know that she left.

"Where is this girl." he said getting her voice mail after the 25th call.

"Bhai, Daadi's asking where that bhenji is." Aliya said coming into his room. He didn't know why but every time she said something against Pragya he felt like screaming and telling her to shut up, she didn't know Pragya like he did.

What the hell Abhi, what are you thinking. He didn't know what was wrong with him, for the past couple of months all he could think about was Pragya, and the worst part was he felt like protecting her against everything bad. He always felt his stomach drop when he said those cruel things to her.

"Mujhe kaise pata, Aliya woh pure din se ghar pe nahi hain. I don't know where she is." Abhi turned around wanting to sound like he genuinely hated Pragya. Any blind man would see the good in Pragya, and it was only a matter of a month when Abhi started seeing it himself. As much as he hated to admit it, he could see how Purab could fall in love with such a girl.

What the hell is wrong with me. Abhi couldn't believe what he was thinking.

"Tum, tum yahan kya karne aye hoon." He heard Taiji saying downstairs.

"Ab yeh kya naya natak hai." Aliya said as they both rushed downstairs to what the commotion.

"Purab?" Abhi asked confused, he was even more confused to see him with Bulbul.

Before he could react Bulbul came over and slapped him across the fact.

"What the hell are you thinking! Do you know who you just slapped." Aliya said in anger.

"Yes, I slapped a disgusting man who isn't worthy of anything, especially not my Di." Bulbul said in anger. "You married her to get revenge, what kind of lowlife does that." She said.

"Kya?" Daadi asked from behind them.

"Look Bulbul, you may think your sister is great, but all she cares about is money." Aliya tried to say.

"Just shut up! You are the master mind behind all of this. You should be ashamed of yourself using your brother to get your revenge. Is this how you both are trying to show your love to Purab, by telling him that you married the girl he loves. Is that how friends act!" Bulbul said not being able to control her anger.

"Excuse me, do you even know anything about the situation." Abhi said but Bulbul cut him off again.

"Sadly, you didn't try to learn the truth about the situation or you wouldn't have ruined my Di's life." Bulbul said.

"Abhi I tried to tell you but you wouldn't even listen to me." Purab said. "You ruined Pragya Di's life thinking she was the one I love, but it was bulbul all along."

The second Abhi heard Purab say Pragya Di he felt like the floor had shoken underneath him.

"Pragya Di, Bulbul?" Abhi couldn't even form a sentence.

"Pragya Di ne aapse shaadi sirf aur sirf Maa ki khushi ki liye kiya tha. She thought she'll learn to live with you and eventually try and form a relationship but you, you treated her like dirt." Bulbul said.

"Pragya was innocent." abhi said turning to Aliya. "You did this." He told her disbelief in his eyes as Aliya looked scared.

"No you are an equal part." Bulbul told him. "If you weren't so selfish you would have noticed that her part of the room is empty. You told her to leave didn't you, well she did and she'll never come back to you."

Abhi looked at them unable to focus on anything except the memories of the harsh words he said to Pragya, her tears, her attempts to explain. Bulbul pulled out papers from her bag and threw them at Abhi.

"Now please do her a favor and sign these divorce papers and set her free from you and your horrible family." Bulbul said.

"Please," Bulbul said, her voice breaking, "Please free my sister from this sham marriage. She deserves actual happiness. I don't know why people like you and Suresh come into her life and take away the meaning of happiness from her life, but please let her be happy once." tears started falling down her face.

Purab came behind Bulbul and linked his hand with hers, "Abhi, I know you did it for your sister and I know how much you love her. But I wish you tried to keep cool and found the truth instead of blindly believing Aliya. You've lost your wife now." And with his hand in Bulbul's he pulled her out of their house.

Abhi sank to the floor and looked at the divorce papers in disbelief. "Pragya?" he could only question himself thinking back to everything that has happened. Tuning out the commotion of his family members he stared at the papers, emotions running through him as he thought back to all the moments he spent with her. Their fights, their laughter, her beauty, her intelligence, her kindness, her innocence.

It was then he finally realized why he felt the way he had for the past few months, he had fallen in love with Pragya. And now she wanted nothing to do with him.

He was madly in love with the one girl who would never forgive him, well shit.


Hey everyone, this was a little OS that was running through my mind after today's episode. I hope ya'll liked it. Please do comment even if it is criticism. 😳😊 Hope ya'll enjoyed this open ended OS and if ya'll would like to read more OS/SS/FF please do let me know. Also if you would like PM's for future OS/SS/FF please add me to your buddy list😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it so much! Great job it writing the story with full on vividness and and emotion. Wonderful OS!
Please do continue this though. I would love to read some more!
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awesome os please write more 😊
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next chapter please 😆
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Loved it!! Well done my friend! 👏 It was great how in so few words you suggested such a strong picture of what their difficult year together was like. Aaliya's dialogues are just perfect for her character, and I love the image of Bulbul throwing the divorce papers at Abhi. PERFECT last line too - but it's the kind of last line that demands a next chapter!!! Please see if you can think of a happy ending for our Abhigya? This was delicious and fitting angst and thanks for it, but tell us how Abhi makes up for his mistakes! Hee hee. Thanks for posting!!
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beautiful os written
thanks
n a scared aaliya will be a treat to watch
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Amazing update. Do write more
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YAAAY ! I was looking from so long for another writing on them , and then you appeared !
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I really loved this a lot cuz it's really realistic , PLEASE PLEASE can you continue this ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it so much

Am 😭

Serves Abhi right

But could you please write a sequel where he tries to win her trust back

Leave it at a cliffy whether she comes back or not but want to see him try like anything to get her back

Then you can write a sequel to that too

Mujhe koi problem nahi hogi

PLease write more on Abhigya

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow nice but don't u think its kind of very fast and less interesting. Really yaar just within a month period i don't think so. Creatives don't work like that but still nice update want to read more on abhi pragya.

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