KriYansh Drabble Series: Tough Summer's Epilogue-pg58 #End!

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

"Dance" : The Perfect element to express feelings...

N as for KR , it is toh must 😉...

In this case it was for Kria ...

Very well depicted Di 👍🏼...

Trust kiya tha usne , ignore ki uski 'Lust-Ful Eyes' & what did he do , uss idiot ki baatein sunn k trust tord diya 🤔...

Well!! Waiting to know what happens next 😊...

N did u consider my advice 'bout the accident thingy? 😳 🤣

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

atleast inform me ki update kr diya...
hurt kriya is unbearable for me..i love her so much that i want to strangle evryone who hurts her
rey need to know what he has done..bt itni bi kya jaldi hai..muje maza aa rha hai..
kriya ke anklets rey ke bi fav hain...how sweet...no..nt sweet..cute..
b.d.w..kriya kis song pe dance kr rhi hai..??

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

hmmm.. so finally uh kept ur promise.

of giving an Drabble series of KR...

Nice... i loved the concept

and the fact too of regular updates..

superb story... <3 <3

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Annwesha

@sakura20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

awesom... 😛
hope rey realises his feelngs soon dt itz luv & not lust ...

Edited by sakura20 - 11 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

It was good, pretty good.

I liked it.

I liked the way she's resisting his touch and yet wanting it, and even the way he's suffering.

No, I'm not going to shout at you for that, because that is necessary, other wise the girl won't be justified as said before.

I like the way you write. its really well, especially the way you portray emotions

I love that.

I like it when he calls her "kriyaaa" and she tries to remain unaffected.

I want you to go into more depth, love this chapter though. I'm loving the entire thing actually!

Now I gotta go sorry,

and sorry for the short comment, I cant type so much. :P

Bye Bye!!

-Bookworm :)

Edited by Painted_Sky - 11 years ago

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Annwesha

@sakura20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

luvd d update...
d angry kriya & d guilty rey...
awesom 😛

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David

@arshafan94

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Wow.
loved the way you described her pain, her suffering, her love.
Rey's guilt and his helplessness to see her in the state he left her was beautifully written.
loved the flow of emotions throughout the two chapters.
Amazingly written.
Update soon can't wait for the updates.

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Akansha1515

@Akansha1515

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

awsome update..

totally loved it..

i really lyked u potreyed rey and kriya's emotions..

now waiting for nxt update..

thanxx for pm..

amazing update once again..😊😊

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trishika rajput

@trishikarajput0

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Amazing update...👏loved it...😃

kriyaansh were in pain...😭

kria wanted to be with her and in the same time he wanted to be away from her...

she has fallen in love with reyaansh...and no one can change the fact...

she was having a heartbreak...and the pain can be seen through dance...😭

and rey was also hurted because of the consequences he had done...

and he has not the courage to face her and tell her sorry...

she knows that he meant the sorry from his heart but she just ignored it...because she is having much more pain than him and she can't forgive him easily...

the blood in her legs is nothing in front of her heart break...

and rey knows it...

will she able to forgive him...

will rey realise that he truly loves him...and its not lust for him...

what will happen...

so many questions but I will have to wait for next update to know the answers...😕

waiting for next update...

thanx for pm...

continue soon...😊😊😊