KriYansh Drabble Series: Tough Summer's Epilogue-pg58 #End!

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Rey and kria both are in so much pain

U decribe their pain n emotion beautifully

Noce update

Love it

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-Monika-

@-Monika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Awesome...

really nice update...

loved it..

Amazing..

update soon..

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

wowww...both the chapters were just wow...

too tooo good...

i just loved how she danced taking out all her pain...and how much hurt she was for trusting him...that pain clearly visible...i just loved that...

then came another wow moment...when Rey came to her... even after all the protests..taking her in his arms...even aftr she was spitting venom on him...

both the updates were just WOW...

no other word i can think of right now...

loveddd them...

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Khyati

@So_Naley

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Oh gosh that was intense!

And passion in a story draws me into it like moth to flame !

I am truly intrigued by this dynamic they share where neither is sure of the others emotions still they experience this deep yearning for each other!

Update soon ! I'll be waiting !

Love,
K

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

than for pm wow ek swath do update nice in d first one u beautifully painted her emotions n in d second finally rey understood his mistake love it update soon n pm m

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

fantastic updates👏

Kriya's emotions wer described beautifullyyy👏

she hurted herself

and rey s guilty of his actions

continue soon😊

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

I just read all d parts n I must say the way u started d story is way too beautiful. ..
Rey continously staring at kriya.. d way he felt...
Then he flirting wid her but she didn't protested n trusted him..
but what rey did next was really ridiculous. . I couldn't even imagine rey did that..
the way u showed kriya's feelings, pain was really amazing..
I loved It...