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vaishnavi

@vaishkreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

ommgg..amazinggg update..🤗😊

first rey thinkin its lust n kissing her..😲

n she slapping him which was expected.. n crying😭..shitt mann...

update soon ..cant w8..

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

OMG what was that?

How could Rey convince himself that it was just lust?

How could he do that...ridiculous...he deserved that slap!

wat will Rey do now...get upset with Kriya or realise his love for her

But i'm more interested to know how Kria responds to him now

This update was awesome...continue soon

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

fantastic parts👏👏

its not lust my dear buddhu rey🥱

oops dat slap😲

continue soonish😳

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Akansha1515

@Akansha1515

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

awsome update..

kriya slapped rey..

ab rey kya karega..

waiting for nxt..

loved this one..

update sooon..

thanxx for pm.😊

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

awesome update

amazingly written

thanks for the pm

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Reserved

Unreserved..

Whoa. what was that man? I mean, as I've said before, I'm pretty sure, that would've touched every single girls heart. it was so beautiful after all. every damn thing was beautiful.

the way you characterized her emotions, damn that was recommendable! i know you thought that this particular one won't win you so much of appreciation, and I definitely don't know about others, but for me, this chapter was one of the most beautiful things I've read so far.

And I definitely appreciate you for that. as much as I could.

It was so beautiful, the way penned down her sorrows, her pain, her sensibilities, I totally loved that.

And it was worth it you know, it was worth my appreciation, you are worth it. and I simply love you for writing that particular piece of work.

And finally finally! I get to know about the girls point of view, so she is NOT just playing along but did feel something.

Thanks lord!!

I love u and this work as well, and I love u more for writing this.

-your bookworm :)

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

jzz amazing..

Shenz..🤗

Beautifully portrayed...👏

i culd feel her pain..

culd imagine wat she was goin through..

such was d depth of ur words...

well story seems getting interesting..

hopefully Rey realises its LOVE...

makes it up..😃

do cont soon..

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Kria n rey are so sad

Rey khus ki feelings nai jaanta n he hurt kria

N poor kria hwas so hurt

Nice update

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Khyati

@So_Naley

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#110

It was just beautiful ! Such a mature and pure revelation of Kriya's innermost emotions !

You know,after the last update I was slightly taken aback by her abrupt reaction...

Sure,Rey was at fault but I didn't expect her to be such a pure soul!

Now, I am sorry I even let that thought flit across my mind!

She is a fiercely unabashed but extremely emotional girl !

I love that about her!

I really wanna see where the story goes from here!

Just keep writing and giving fast updates !

Makes me content for having read a good piece of work !

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