TS - When Tejawat kidnapped Paro note pg 8 21/6 - Page 4

As I've said before, you have a way with words. What I like about this, is that it sounds believable. I can imagine Paro not giving up, I can imagine Rudra just crashing in, ready to save Paro. And I can Imagine Tejawat acting all ruthless and desperate at the same time.

Loved it beautifully written..both the parts were amazing. Wish u were the writer of this show or they take hint from ur story n show it in coming episode..this would be truly amazing to see yaar..great work.

Originally posted by: gretalewis

Ah! Finally she called him Rudra!! Am do bloody sick of this Major Saab shit! Its like calling ur boss saab n all!! U always called him by his name! Tejawat also calls him MS!! So wherez the diff!! Hahahha nice part 2 ! Only thoda built up to her saving wld have worked''

Originally posted by: cryscaralagh

As I've said before, you have a way with words. What I like about this, is that it sounds believable. I can imagine Paro not giving up, I can imagine Rudra just crashing in, ready to save Paro. And I can Imagine Tejawat acting all ruthless and desperate at the same time.

I can't wait till Part III. And the hindi in it, sounds so on point! It reads like a script :)

Originally posted by: Ramv31

Loved it beautifully written..both the parts were amazing. Wish u were the writer of this show or they take hint from ur story n show it in coming episode..this would be truly amazing to see yaar..great work.

Precap is truly absolutely lovely..it's about time he pour his heart out to paro..aww..

Great job once again..thank u n pls continue :)👏

Nice update...aakhir ye din show mein kab aayega!!!
Waiting for the final part. Update soon 😊

Lovely story
Waiting for part 3

Ok so I typed the whole update only to lose it before I could post it :( in no mood to type it up again now

Originally posted by: shona.

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Ok so I typed the whole update only to lose it before I could post it :( in no mood to type it up again now