TS - When Tejawat kidnapped Paro note pg 8 21/6

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@bluemoon255

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

great start. waiting for the next part😊

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gretalewis

@gretalewis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Nice as the dialouges used were typical for each character!!! Yes a little lost and found scene will give us some outdoor shots and also put Rudra back in uniform and in action. CONTINUE PLEASE :)

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nerina

@nerina

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

interesting action packed read,,,so true to the characters...waiting for more.

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Rabia Shahid

@strings123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Lovely. waiting for the update

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Archie

@_SilverLining_

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

I soo want this to happen in the show!! Infact this is the one thing I have been waiting for since God knows how long now 😛 Hope it happens in reality... Do continue soon, eagerly waiting to see how Rudra saves Paro!

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Milii

@Milii

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Nice one 😃

I love the protective Rudra... pleeease update soon...

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Pramila

@-Pramila-

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

love ur story n want it to be real in drama also

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Amazing

Waiting for the next part

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just_juhi

@just_juhi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

wow!

Usually I don't read the FF's because of the whole translation/transliteration from Hindi to English issue. But this is really good!!! I can totally see this happening in the show... in fact I'd love to see it on the show!!! It would be a great way for Rudra to finally confess his feelings!!! 😃

Can't wait to read the rest of it. Have you decided how many parts its gonna have?

Edited by juhi611 - 11 years ago

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Shona

@shona.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: juhi611
wow!

Usually I don't read the FF's because of the whole translation/transliteration from Hindi to English issue. But this is really good!!! I can totally see this happening in the show... in fact I'd love to see it on the show!!! It would be a great way for Rudra to finally confess his feelings!!! 😃

Can't wait to read the rest of it. Have you decided how many parts its gonna have?

Thank u! Umm 3 parts as of now :)

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