KriYansh Drabble Series: Tough Summer's Epilogue-pg58 #End! - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

i will die coz of extra sweetness..
i mean..its nt lovey dovey yet still m smiling for nothing...feels like its gonna be supercute...bt i read ur reply to sm1 that its nt love at 1st sight...then what is it...sm dark story kya...???
jo bi ho wese...m gonna love it..
rey was literally checking her out...isiliye morning was hell bent on waking him up...i see...
update soon...
PS :..the girl is kriya only na..?? coz i cant find her name anywhere


Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Bol bol ke I am a bit tired. Main nahi bolti tujhe koi thanks.. you complained about sweetness ab jhel.. :P
*kidding, it was always planned*

But I am glad! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
i didnt complain...i loved it...dumb
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Bas.. my cell phone is about to die..
So rest all comments to replied later..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
the chapter was fabulous... finally some what sort his problem and gave a
solution but kriya is not got trap up in this escape hast where i think rey is a bit flirt
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85


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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
OMG shenzzz... this wasss...

i frigging loveddd it... meko malum tha sparks dono side pe hain... 😆

mosquito cream toh sirf ek bahana hai... asli mei toh Kriya ko Rey ke paas aana hai... 🤣


but seriusly...Kriya know how badly he gawks at her...still she had the guts to talk to him seductively...

i frigging loved that...


cant wait for further udpates... haha...loving it sooo much..!!!





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u didnt read that before...dont knw why thou 😆

i thought it was going to be a diabegic series... tune mere dil ke armaanoan ko aansuoan mei baha diya... :/


but i liked it too...

this was like..u know..how boys usually are..and thats what u showed...so yeah...i really liked it...

waiting for next installment... 😉
Edited by Effacious - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Oh my gawd it that just happened?
How could rey do that
Was it just lust
This is ridiculous
But awesome update
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
kriya slapped rey... omg...

this was freaking awsome...but ab rey kya karega...

hope he understand that its love not lust...

by kriya's reaction it seems like she is also interested...

pls shenz update jadi karna..

waiting is impossible..



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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
this was freaking awesome ^_^
sorry for not commenting earlier

achcha hai u didn't show kria responding in a positive way to the kiss
it was beautiful the way it was ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Hey...

I knw I have to apologise...

I am sorry for not commenting on the chaps before...

Buh i had a reason...I had not opened ur PM...

was a quite busy in something...so couldnt read this...

buh I promise to comment when I read the chappy...

comming to the story...

I read all the chaps in a go...

I loved the story...

KriYaansh first encounter was ausome...

Mosquitos the reason for KriYaansh first conversation...

Ausome chappy...

That Slap was expected...

No girl would take that thing Rey did...

He must not have forced her for that...Lust...

I dint like such behaviour of Rey...

buh do write soon...

wanna c what happens next...

Do PM me...

Love Aditi...

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