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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: alex754
Oh god this story is soo intriguing
I am very excited read the next update
I am loving the tense relationship btw kriyaansh
And how does she know his name when he doesnt know hers

wow!! I never knew this would intrigue a reader to his extent.

I hope it continues.

Thanks anyway!

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Meghna_kriyansh
it was awesum dear such a naughty interaction between them n kria tou rey se b tez nikli pehele he uska name pta kr k ayi thi or rey ka bus chalta tou usse vaise he pakad k dekhta reheta...
Haye i love this story vry much... Continue soon...

Thanks! Meghna.. I can help him stand with her for the whole night.. But I wanted to keep something for the rest of the updates. So maybe you will see that later or maybe not. ;P

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: princessSonia
anku phir se first..*pout*

never mind..

Awesum shenz..

m kinda getting addicted to this..

loved d whole update so cant specify one thng in particular...

naught ness wid sweet ness
well done..

do cont soon..

OMG! I am glad to hear that. I am glad to have made you addicted to this. I hope it remains the same throughout.

I am updating sooner ;)

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: arshafan94
Wow now this was something.
i loved the way both flirted with each other.
i don't mind staying in your arms, what a dialog.
it stole my heart.
the way you showed the flirting was so so good.
Loving the story.
update soon.

Even I loved that line.

Great that you are loving it. Thanks a ton!

Updating :*

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
res...
yess..this is the 3rd tym m gona be the 1st one to cmnt.. patting my back
okay so mene hi bola tha abt sweetness..bt hey that was a positive cmnt...i was loving it.
so naughty ness begins now.. the sweet chapters are spicy too...
loved this kriya...daring bold nd to the point...
i loved this particular line a lot
" I
don't mind spending the entire night here in your
arms, but my legs surely do." ...
feisty...
coming to reyaansh...he is a big flirt...though i love the character...
gd mrng se gd nt...achi hai...
wonderful update..
take care of ur health plz...🤗

It is not about you. It is me. I can't handle over dose of sweetness. So I would say you people got to bear the next :D

Thanks! Hope you like the next as well. I am taking care of my health, or else Mom wont spare me :|

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Neeraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Rajeshwari_KR
Thanks for the update...surprised that it came so soon!

Rey Shamelessly checking her out...hmmm now I know y the sun rays were determined to wake him up

She just left with a GM...expected her to burst out a bit...I mean after being called a monster by her bro...the response was too gentle

Loving the love struck Rey...and she kind of knows it!
At the end even she stole a glimpse of him...looks she's falling too
Amazing one...keep the updates coming soon

Well I would say expect the unexpected when its this one.

And I will keep this upated sooner than expected.:)

Kria is a bit different here. But loads of shades ofher character to get revealed. So I say stay tuned.

Updating in some time :)

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: arshafan94
Wow yet another perfect update.
loved every bit of it.
continue soon.

Thanks. But I believe there is always scope for improvemet. And so does this one.

Glad that I could make you love every bit of it. And I hope to continue to make you love the coming updates as well.

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Neeraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

C 3

chalo name toh pata chal kria 😆😆😆

NIce update likeddd

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: lovely7010
Shenziiieee...I just love it...there's no scope for disliking it...it is absolutely mind blowing...loved both the parts...aww Rey the lover boy...loving it...waiting for next...Thank you so much for such an awesome gift... :*

Mannu, I am really glad that you liked it. And I will try that you keep liking it.

Though this isn't like a proper gift but still You are most welcome. Kaam chala lena isse :*