kisi ko bhi pyara ho sakata hai RagNa

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heres a brief summary of the story.

As a baby, kalpana mom died. She was raised by her dad, sister and brother. As she grew older she started looking like her mom, body wise. She loves to eat and make food. At school they tease her and call her names because of her weight. But with her families help she will get through difficult times. Not only will she change she will find love as well. She will show them that love is possible even for a fat girl.


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Chapter 3 on page 2


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New Characters to this story


Hema


Juhi


Akash


Vijay


Raj



Chapter 1


Scene 1

The scene starts with vitthal talking to his older daughter Hema.

"Kalpana still not awake yet?" he says while seating down.

"K' pit. This is her normal schedule." She says while making breakfast for her family.

"Hm Pitaji. She's done this so many time." says pakiya vitthal older son.

Just when he was about to sit down, he heard Mere Khwabon Mein playing.

"There she goes again, with that music." Says vitthal

Vitthal puts butter on his toast and starts eating.

"Well she's awake." Says pakiya

Scene 2

Kalpana woke up from a wonderful dream. She dreamt of her sole mate, but she couldn't see his face. Only the figure, she had on her blue bunny pajamas and a white tank top. She walks towards her stereo and played her favorite song mere Khwabon mein, then she starts dancing to it while preparing herself.

Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye

Kalpana jumps on her bed, and dance.

Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye

Then she falls on her bed and roll around.

Usse Kahoon Kabhi Saamne To Aaye

She then grabs her pillow hugs it while wiggling her foot in the air.

Kaisa Hai Kaun Hai Vo Jaane Kahan Hain

After that she got on top of the bed and grabs her stuff animal. She pretends to talk to it, while searching for someone.

O Kaisa Hai Kaun Hai Vo Jaane Kahan Hain

Then she jumps off the bed and goes to the bathroom to brush her teeth.

Jiske Liye Mere Honthon Pe Haan Hai

When she was done, she closes the bathroom door and come out with only her towel on.

Apna Hai Ya Begaana Hai Vo

Then she picks out an outfit to wear, throwing stuff everywhere.

Sach Hai Ya Koi Afsana Hai Vo

Then she puts it on the bed and twirls herself.

Dekhe Ghoor Ghoor Ke Yuhin Door Door Se

She stops and remembers the way his eyes were shaped.

Usse Kahoon Meri Neend Na Churaaye

Then she blushes and squeals, jumping up and down.

Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye

She walks to the bathroom again, leaving the door half open.

Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye

With her back towards the door, she moves her towel side to side.

Usse Kahoon Kabhi Saamne To Aaye

Then she looks at herself in the glass. Teasing the mirror she pulls her towel down a little bit, showing her shoulder.

Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye

She drops her towel, showing her bathing suit. Then she smiles and get in the shower. And close the curtain. Ending the music

When she was done, she went downstairs. When she saw her family eating she smiles.

"Good morning dad." She says smiling up to him

"Good morning, my kalpana." He says hugging her back

"Where is Juhi?" she says while sitting down.

" sh-" pakiya says not finishing

"I'm here, kalpana" she says

"Kalpana, how many time have I told you to eat more food." Says vitthal

"With how she is, she doesn't need to eat anymore. She should give her plate to Hema." She says making Hema cough

She glares at Juhi and says "now what do you mean by that."

"You know, you've been eating a lot lately and you're probably still hungry. You don't want to starve yourself an-"

"Juhi I think that's enough." Says pakiya

"But honey." She says

"Enough!" he says with authority, making Juhi stop

Kalpana put her food down, and signs. Vitthal notice this and says "what's wrong kalpi?"

"I'm not hungry anymore." She says while getting up.

"Then I'll drop you off." Pakiya says

"But honey, you said after breakfast we'll go do grocery." She says

"Ah yes... I forgot." Says pakiya

"It's ok Bh', I will walk."

She needs the exercise anyway thought Juhi

"Kalpi.' Says vitthal

"I know, I didn't forget." She says walking to her mom's picture and praying on it.

I hope I have a good day today. She says

Ai please continues to watch over me. And give me the courage to fulfill my dream. She Thought while praying. When she was done she walks out the door and walk to school.

Scene 3

A very important man was at the airport, he calls his mom and she picks up.

"Mm I don't see the limo." He says

"Did you call him?" his mom says while making breakfast.

"Hm mainn" kiy th, l"kina vaha nah uhy"

"Let me try B"." She says putting him on hold.

She dialed the limo driver number and fired him.

Then she calls another driver to pick him up.


"Don't worry B", another driver is on his way." She says

"Thanks mom."

The limo arrived in no time and Raghav walks in it. While sitting he was looking at some documents. Turns out the company he left under his cousin was doing poorly.

I knew I shouldn't have let him do it. He thought

He calls his cousin raj; he waited until he picks up. When he didn't he tried again, still not getting him he angrily throws the phone.

"Raj when I get home I will deal with you." He says

Meanwhile, kalpana was having a bad day. First she started sweating, then she step on dog poo and now she smells like one too.

This day couldn't get any worse." she says.

As soon as she said that, a limo passed right by her and splashes the mud puddle on her face. Great she thought.

She enters her school, and everyone turned to look at her. Some had disgust on there face while others were laughing at her, just when she was about to turn a corner. Raj and his friend Pakhi block her way.

"Awe man fatty you smell." He says holding his nose

"Yah, who allowed you back in this school." She says

"My name is not fatty, its kalpana." She says determined

"You hear that guys, she's sticking up for herself." he says mocking her

He puts his hand on her shoulder and squeezing it.

"Who would ever date someone like her? "He says to the crowd

"I wouldn't, she's too chubby." Someone says

"She's dark and ugly." Another shout

"She's not even considered a girl." Another says

"What a trash." Another says

Kalpana stayed quiet the whole time, as they insult her. She would not cry in front of them. She bold her fist, digging her nails in her skin to hold her tears.

"You hear that fatty, not only are you poor. No one love you." Pakhi says

"You're wrong." She says

"My family loves me an-." She says not finishing

"You guys hear that, her parents love her." he says then he gets closer to her face.

"Are you sure their not pretending. I mean who would accept a daughter like you." He says

"She was probably switched by birth or her mother cheated." Some one says

Kalpana looks at the guy that said that than she says "you must really hate your family to say that. What did they do abandon you." She says angrily

"You fat bitc-."

"Stop!." Raj says then he turns towards kalpana

"Let's show fatty how much she's not welcome here." he says evilly

The girls grab kalpana arms then they started ripping her sari. Kalpi tried to break free but they were too strong. Pakhi grab a scissors and cut kalpi long hair. Until it's really short. Kalpana screams, telling them to stop. Pakhi puts the scissors in her face to scare her. Quickly kalpana grab her arms and bite her, making her screaming.

"Jn" d!" she says but kalpana still didn't let go until the girls let her go. Once they did she ran to the entrance screaming help.

Scene 4

Raghav got out of the car, heading to the school when someone bumped into him. And the first verse of Har dil jo pyar karega started playing.

Oh oh oh oh oh, oh oh - 2
Oh oh oh oh oh, oh oh oh
Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh, oh oh oh oh oh - 2
Usse hasna bhi hoga, usse rona bhi hoga

Kalpana stares at Raghav; she was mesmerized by his eyes.

Usse paana bhi hoga, usse khona bhi hoga

Raghav on the other hand was confused. He wonders who she was and why she was on his favorite suit.

Subha shaam tanhaai mein aahe bharega

I have seen thoughs eyes somewhere but where. She thought

Har dil jo pyaar karega

He turned his face away, when he smelled something bad.

"Is that you smelling?" he asks

Har dil jo pyaar karega, har dil jo pyaar karega

Kalpana quickly snapped out of it and sadly shook her head. She blushes feeling embarrassed.

"Get of me." He says pushing her

He looks at his design suit and saw mud stains on it. Then he turns to her angrily

"Do you know what you just did?" he says making her look at him.

"You have ruined an expensive American suit. This was Calvin Klein." He says

Kalpana was going to say something when she heard the girls coming. Putting her hands together she begs Raghav.

"Please sure, please help me." She says with tears

The girls finally came out and when they saw kalpana they approach her.

"There she is." One of the girls said

Raghav looks at the girl face, she was pleading with him with her innocent eyes. The same eyes he had when he was a kid.

Flashback

"Someone please help us!" said an 8 year old Raghav

Grabbing on to his dad, he looks at him and says "Pit, saba kucha hka h j'"g."

People ignored them. Even when he asked to use their phone to call the ambulance, they ignored him. He searched for twenty five cent and used that to call his uncle.

But all it says was the line was busy.

Raghav quickly ran back to his dad to make sure he was breathing.

"Just hold on baba, I will get help." He says putting his father down.

He ran to the nearest hospital and walked in there crying for help. Blood was on his shirt. Everyone quickly check the boy to see if he was injured.

"I'm fine, but my baba is not." He says

One of the doctors told him to lead the way. When they got there, they saw an older man stabbed in the stomach. He was half-breathing. The doctor quickly got out of the ambulance to help him. They put him in the ambulance and took him to the hospital.

When they reached the hospital, they took him to the emergency room. There they operate on him.

Raghav waited, until the doctor came out. When he did, he shook his head.

"I'm sorry son, but we couldn't save him." He says making Raghav cry

The doctor tried to pat the boy but he ran away. He ran all the way to his house. To tell the man he considered uncle. When he reached the house he saw the door half opened,

Just when he was about to enter he heard sahil confess to killing his dad. He also heard his wife Neetu saying they kept his mom in a mental facility.

"All that is left is to get rid of Raghav and get his properties." He says

Raghav back away from the door and ran. He didn't know where, but he ran far away from his house.

End of flashback

Scene 5

"Please sure.' She says

Raghav was about to help her when he saw the person he was looking for.

Raj saw his cousin and cursed. He walks towards Raghav and says

"Raghav..Your back."

Raghav gave him a stern look then says "I should have known you would be behind this raj. "He says looking at the girl and his suit.

"Since I can't blame this girl, you will be responsible for the damage on my suit." He says taking it off and giving it to kalpana.

Kalpana looked confuse. Then she thought does he want me to wash it? Or pay it back?

Raghav looks at the girl, he saw her confusion. So he says "put this shirt on, your fat is hanging out." He says just when she was going to thank him.

He's no different from raj. She thought while putting the suit on.

When the suit was on, it felt tight. She forcefully tried to make it fit but she only ended up ripping it. Raghav glared at her and says to raj "this will cost you, greatly." He says then he walks in the limo follow by raj, but before he closes it he looks at kalpana and says "you will pay." Than he close the door.

Everyone laughed at her and Pakhi says "you are so gonna get it fatty, not only did you run away, you also dirty and tear his cousins suit.

Everyone walk away from her. Not wanting to be jinxed.

"God, what have I gotten myself into?" She says

To be continue...


Chapter 2

Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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Why did u make kalpi fat she isn't anywhere near being fat.
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Everyone give the story a chance. its new and fresh. if you guys are worried about kalpi being fat then dont worry about it because she won't be for long. so just think positive.
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Ok but man those ppl r mean I hope she gives it back to them.
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Chapter 2


OK let me start it off by properly, introduce myself. My name is kalpana vitthal Jadhav, during my childhood years. I've been bullied. Well you already know, so raj and his friends constantly bullied me and I would always lie to my family when they ask me what happened. But one day my sister in law read my diary and found out the truth, she told my dad and he came to school with me and we talk to the principle, he wouldn't listen to us because money talks. When raj told me I was gonna pay he really meant it.

Scene 1

Flashback

The next day kalpana walks to the school, not knowing that raj, and his friends were waiting for her. As soon as she reached there they kidnap her. Three guys pick her up and took her to the bathroom. "Please let me go, please." She says

"You hear that fatty is begging us to stop." Says paki

They put her head under the sink and turned the hot water on. "Now fatty, oink like a big and we might let you go." They said kalpi made the pig noise, making them laugh.

They turned of the water and took her to raj, he was on the rooftop. When they reached the top, kalpi could see two chairs and a table. They put her in the chair in front of raj and tied her up. "What are you doing? Please stop." She says scared making raj smirk

"Kalpi, kalpi, and kalpi you know I really like you." He says looking at her

"You act so innocent, but you hurt me. Biting paki and running to my cousin, getting me in trouble." He said touching paki arms

"You brought this on yourself. What have I ever done to you?" she says with confidence

Raj thought about it and says "nothing, your presence makes me want to puke." He says

"You are an evil child; lord Shiva will not forgive you." She says

"Shiva? He doesn't exist to me because I am my own god." He says cockily

He opens the food and made her smell it. Disgust could be seen in her face.

"You like it; I bought this especially for you." He says

"If you want me to let you go, you have to eat it." He says making his friends smirk

Kalpi didn't know what to do, she wants to leave but her mind was telling her to not eat it.

She quickly made up her mind and started eating the whole thing, ignoring the taste. Once she was done, raj brought another one. Making her eats it, when she was half way done he says "you like it, it was especially made for you. What your eating right now is dog food." He says making kalpi drop her spoon and spit the remaining food in her mouth. Everyone continues to laugh while she tried to remove the taste from her mouth.

They untied her and let her go, while laughing and calling her names. Just when she was about to walk out of the building, paki and her friends grab her and took her to the bathroom. There one of them slapped her and the other grab her legs and remove her underwear.

"No, what are you doing? Please give it back." She says

When they saw the underwear they started laughing "she wears granny panties." One of them said and everyone else laughed. They took kalpi underwear and put it next to the flag, making the whole school see it. Then one of them announced that kalpi put her underwear up there. Everyone started whispering.

Kalpi feeling sick walks out the building tiered. Just when she was about to walk out the school her vision started blurring and she saw someone that looks familiar walk right pass her.

"Kamla-ma!" says paki making kalpi turn her head around she looks at the lady and realize she looks like her mother.

"Ai!" she screams making the whole school looks at her. Especially Kamla, when she saw who it was she was shock. Paki looks at Kamla and says "you know fatty Kamla?"

"No paki, I've never seen her before." She says making kalpi sad

"You are my Ai, I just knew it." She says sweating and feeling sick

"She said she's not, so leave my Kamla alone fatty.' Paki replied

Feeling dejected she walks all the way home. When she reached her house and was about to walk inside she fainted. Pakiya who was coming downstairs saw kalpi on the floor. He quickly he rushed to her, calling her name to wake her up. When she didn't reply he called the ambulance. Vitthal came from work when he saw the ambulance taking at his house. He saw them pick someone up and realize that was his daughter.

"Kalpana?" he says rushing to the scene

"What happened to her? Please tell me." He said to one of the medic

"When she came home she fainted." Says pakiya

What could have happened to her? He thought while climbing in the ambulance.

Scene 2

Vitthal and the rest of the family were waiting out side. They were waiting for the doctor to tell them what's going on with kalpi. When he came out, they rushed to him.

"Please doctor; please tell me what's wrong with my daughter? He says begging

The doctor looks at his list and says "she's eating something bad and we found a nail in her stomach." he says showing the picture. Everyone gasp then pakiya says "will she be alright?"

"I did a surgery on her and removed the nail so everything should be fine." He says making the family calm down.

"One more thing, I saw some bruises on her arms and face. Do you know about that?"

Vitthal knew where she got it from but he staid quiet.

"Well all I have to say is she needs to eats healthy food. No more junk food." He says

"Ok doctor." He says

"See every time I tell you guys she needs to stop eating, you guys make me seem like the bad guy. Now look what has happened to her." Said Juhi

"Enough Juhi, this is not the time to hear your lecture." Says Hema

3 weeks past and kalpi still didn't wake up, Just when they were about to give up and go home. The nurse came to them with good news.

"Mr. Jadhav? Your daughter is awake." She says

The family rushed to see her. When they reached there, they saw her sitting up.

"Kalpi!" they said

"Papa? What am I doing here." she says

"You, fainted when you came from school. The doctor said you ate something bad." He says with tears. Kalpi remembered what happened at school then she remembered seeing her mom. She turned to her dad and said "papa, I saw mom at school?" Shocking everyone.

"You must have been wrong, your mom is dead." He says

"No dad, she wasn't dead she was alive." She says

"Kalpi it must have been your imagination or you saw someone that looks like her. It happens a lot." He says making kalpi give up.

"You're probably right, papa."

"We were so worried for you kalpi." Says pakiya

"Yah we thought you died or something." Says Juhi earning a glare from Hema

"What she meant is, we thought you would not wake up today either." She says

"I'm fine now, so you guys can relax." She says

After that incident, my dad decides to home school me, because they were worried about me. They didn't want the same thing to happen again. While I was home schooled Hema helped me exercise. She became my new trainer. Pakiya would run with me everyday to motivate me and Juhi would make sure I eat salad and drink water. Even when I tried to eat chocolate she would take it from me and eats it her self.

All of this was for my benefit. When the year ends I was a new person. A new face and I loved it.

Scene 3

Raghav was working on stuff in his room when his mom came in.

"Beta, why don't you stop working and come eat breakfast." She says smiling

"I can't mom; I have to correct the mistakes raj did on the company." He says while typing

"Come beta, your work can wait." She says grabbing his arm and pulling it.

Raghav gets up and follow his mom, he stops at his dad picture I will find my proof on them and I will get my revenge. So you can rest easy but for right now please bare with it. He thought

While they were eating his mom brought up the topic about marriage.

"So Raghav, when will you start thinking about marriage?" she asked

"I don't have time for that mom."

"But son, I've brought you so many girls to meet and you rejected them. There has to be someone you like? Or a girl you prefer?" she says making Raghav think

"Well if I did, I would want a girl that's happy." He says

Mean while vitthal and his family were fixing breakfast. When they heard dhoom theme song.

"Kalpi's awake." Hema said while bringing the food.

"Even after her change she's still the same." Vitthal says

"That's good papa. We would hate to see her sad the whole year

Elsewhere

"A girl that's happy? I've showed you some. I even offer that umi girl but you turned down there parents offer." She says

"They never let me see her, besides I heard she's married to samrat. So she's out of the picture." He says

"So you're just looking for a happy girl?" she asks

"No. a girl who's also intelligent, and bold." He says

Elsewhere

Kalpi looks at her picture with her diploma in her hand she couldn't believe she graduate in school, even after thoughs days. She wiped her tears and went to her closet, her music blasting so loud that the neighbors started complaining. She heard yelling in her balcony so she went downstairs to see what the problem was.

"Vitthal, your daughter has woken the whole neighbors with her music." One of them said

"Manda you should know kalpi already. She's been doing this for ever."

"Well we've had it." she says

Kalpi comes to her and says "Manda, I should have known, how many times will you bother us huh, first my nephew, now me." She says poking her. Making her move back

"Should I tell everyone what you've been doing every night?" She says making Manda sweat a little.

"W what are you talking about kalpi?" She says

She looks at everyone and says "Manda has been giving our information to one of the rich people. I saw her myself talking to them and getting money from them." She says

Making everyone turn to look at her "is that true?" they said

"She's wrong, who do you believe me or her?" she asked

Then kalpi smiles "I have the proof on my phone, do you want to see?" she says

"Its fine everyone, turns out it was the other neighbors playing the loud music." She says quickly escaping. After Manda left so did everyone else. Pakiya came up to kalpi and says "is this true?"

"No brother, I made it up." She says not knowing that it was true.

Manda walks away from them and cursed "I will get her for this." She said before going to her house.

Meanwhile

"So you want all thoughs quality in a girl." She says

"And don't forget caring and can cook, like you mom." he says

"That's fine and all, but you're forgetting something else." She says making him look at her and what is that? "He asked

"A girl that can love you for who you are, and would do anything for you." She says

Raghav smiles and grabs there plates. He walks to the kitchen to wash them. His mom comes next to him. "I already have someone like that." He says

Curious gauri says "who is it?"

"You, mom." he says making his mom hit him.

Scene 4

"So a year past and here I am. "She says while looking at the high school kids.

"Bullying is wrong, when you bully someone, not only are you hurting them. The past will come back to get you." She says finishing her presentation.

The teachers and students look at her. Admiration could be seen in their eyes. Kalpi smiles and left the stage. The teacher walks to her and says "that was a wonderful presentation kalpi." Thank you for doing this for me." She says

"No problem Karenna, I would do anything for you. After all you are my best friend." She says

"You are very brave, every time I hear your story I always cry. How can human beings hurt each other like this." She says

"That's the perks of being fat. They see someone different they attack." She says

"Anyway Karenna I have to go, I have a job interview at this house."

"You finally got the house maid job?"

"Yeah, my dad told me my mom use to be one. So this just will make me be closer to her." She says not knowing it's true

"Ok then, good luck." She says

Kalpi walks outside feeling good, getting that out of her chest made her feel like a weight has been lifted from her shoulder. She took a taxi and when she reached her destination she got out. Looking at the big mansion she reads the sign "Mr.Singhania. I guess you're my boss." She says looking at the mansion

To be continue...


Chapter 3

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dear...how many stories u have?...once updating edit ur post title and mention part updated and page too...it ll easy for everyone😳...pls update that village story soon(sorry forgot the name)😊...
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Chapter 3

Scene 1

She press the button and someone answers "yes who is this?" she person says

"My name is kalpana Jadhav and I've come for an interview." She says

"Hold on" he says pressing the button and making the gate open. When kalpi entered the place she was amazed by how beautiful it was. When she entered the house she could see people lined up waiting to start their interview. She got in her line and waited. She was nervous but she didn't let the other girls no that. They waited about twenty minutes when Raghav appeared. He was wearing casual clothes instead of a suit and tie.

He looks at each of them, analyzing their appearance. Then he asks for the profile, he read some of them and shook his head. This will be easier then I thought he said in his head then he asks each of them to put their stuff down. The butler came and brought cleaning stuff for them to hold. Once it was distributed he told them to follow him, there he puts them in teams. Kalpi in team 5 introduce her self, when no one answer back she let it go.

"This tasks you guys about to do require team work. I will assign each team to their area to clean. Which ever team cleans the best will stay while the other will leave." he says before telling them to follow him. The first room was the bathroom, he assigned it to team 4, the bathroom was muddy and dirty all over. The toilet sit was up and you could see pee stains on it. Some of the girls gag seeing this. The next room was the bed rooms, Raghav made sure it was dirty. A big gum was on the ceiling, clothes were everywhere. Juice was spilled on the white carpet and the bed had so many toys and junk food under it.

"This room goes to team 2." he says making the girls gaps

"This room is a mess, how are we gonna clean all of this?" one of them whispers, Raghav hearing this says "if you have a problem you can leave now." He says making the girls stay quiet.

This continued until Raghav stop at the last team, "this team 5 is your cleaning area." He says looking at each girl. Some of the girls hope that it's no where near like team 1 and 2. They shivered thinking about team two areas were the laundry room. No one has ever seen so many clothes that were so dirty. The room had liked 4 big baskets full of dirty smelly clothes and they only had one big washing machine.

Raghav opens the garage door and everybody held there breath, when the door was gone they gasp. Some of them almost fainted. There in the garage was so many art works and statues. Not only that it has so many bicycles and computers that were really old.

"I want you guys to order this stuff, and make sure they're clean. If any of these brake you guys will be disqualified." He says before leaving

Scene 2

Hema was talking on the phone to her doctor, because she still hasn't told her father about her pregnancy. She remembered her wedding day, she was dressed so beautiful. Everyone was happy and so was her family. She remembers sitting down waiting for her soon to be husband Vijay. When he came he was wearing regular clothes and he and his family came to her family. She got up to see what's going on.

"What's the meaning of this Vijay?" said vitthal

"I will not marry Hema." He says shocking everyone including the guest

"Why not? You guys agreed to the wedding and I thought you loved my daughter" he says, Vijay looks at Hema and then says "I found someone else Hema, I can't go thru with this because I love someone else." He says making her cry

"You can't do this to her Vijay? We all saw the love you had for her, why are you breaking my daughters heart." He says

"I'm sorry Hema and vitthal." He says walking away from them. Once they were outside Hema ran towards Vijay holding her wedding gown. She stops in front of him begging him not to leave her then she puts her hand on her stomach saying "what about this Vijay, our life that's growing. You can't walk away from this" she says still crying

"You promised me that you would help raised him. I can't do this alone" she says holding his shirt. He brushes her aside and walks in his car, when he sat down he says "that thing is not mine; you probably cheated on me and tried to use me to get my money." He says shocking Hema

"What are you saying Vijay, you know you're the only one I slept with." She says

"Excuses excuses you think I don't know about the rumors at school, you wh**e. How many guys did you slept with after me huh 4, 5 or is it 10" he says

"Your wrong Vijay, you know those rumors are not true. Every time I come from school, I'm always in the house helping my family out and going to work." She says

"ENOUGH WITH YOUR LIES!!" he yells then says "you are despicable women. I will not hear any more of your lies." He says about to close his car door when Hema held it.

"Please Vijay don't do this to me, please" she says

"I need you, this baby needs you" she says falling on the floor, hugging his leg.

Kalpi, juhi and pakiya heard everything, they were completely shock.

" I knew she was hiding something from us, didn't I tell you pakiya." Says juhi

" enough juhi" he says

"I can't believe he did that to Hema" says kalpi watching as Vijay removes her hands from his legs and closing the door on her, making her bang on his window. He scroll his window down and said "do us all a favor Hema abort that baby, I don't want it and I know you wouldn't be able to take care of it, so abort it." he says before starting the engine and leave, Hema still on the floor screaming his name to come back.

"VIJAY! VIJAY!" she says on the floor, kalpi and pakiya rushed to her side and hug her. Vitthal came out and took her back inside.

Ever since that day I haven't seen Vijay she thought

"Hello, Hema you still there" The person on the phone said making her snap out of her day dream.

"Sorry akash, what were you saying?"

"I was saying I sent your baby picture and they should be coming today." He says making Hema drop her phone

"Hello, Hema?" he says

"Hello, I'm still here akash." She says talking to him not seeing Juhi walking to the door, after hearing the bell ring. She opens the door and the mail guy gave her the mail, looking thru it she was searching for any mail for her when she saw a mail from the hospital. Making sure nobody saw her she opens the mail and saw baby pictures and bumps. She smiles evilly, and puts everything back in the envelop, after words she went to vitthal room and put all the mails on his bed.

"This place was getting to quiet, it's about time drama start." She says very low before walking away.

Scene 3

Kalpi and her group were trying to divide the work. Everyone got their own task to do.

They remove all the stuff outside and then they started cleaning the garage its self. After they were done they grab the hose and wash the bikes and all the stuff that needs to be washed. Then they let it dry in the sun. Once they were dried they wipe any dirt that was on the computers and other stuff then they started putting it in the garage.

Raghav was in the surveillance room, observing each team. He was quiet impress on team five; they were working as a team. The rest of the team were arguing and doing it independently. Raghav made his decision and told his butler to call them back. When they all arrived he says "unfortunately I saw something that I didn't like so the team that is staying is team five" he says making them jump with happiness. The other teams were disappointed they really thought they did well. Once they were gone Raghav look at team five and say "now the last test is individual. I will time each of you 2 minutes to fix my bed and make me breakfast, I will tell you want I like and if you can't memories it then your gone." He says then started explaining his meal, how he wants it done and other stuff.

He start the clock and every one ran. Kalpi went to the room and fix the bed then she went to the kitchen and started working on the food. Some of the girls were trying to remember what he said while other were freaking out. Kalpi calmly work on the food. After she was done she took it to Raghav. He stares at her, her confidence still high. He ate the food and was amazed. Everyone came out and he made his decision.

"Ok everyone the interview is over. The one who will be my maid is kalpana" he says

"Me?" she asks

"Congratulation I will see you tomorrow kalpana. He says before walking out.

To be continue...

Preview

Kalpi was cleaning the house the next day when raj walks down the stairs, making her froze. She remembers another flashback where he almost cut her fingers off. Elsewhere Hema search for the letter in the mail when she didn't find it she thought that akash didn't send it. Vitthal comes to her and show her the pictures demanding that she tells the truth.

"Raj, I will get you. I promise I will teach you a lesson that you would never forget." She says watching him talking on the phone.


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Nice story. Continue to write. Pm of what will happen next. I would love to hear about it. 😃
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Nice story:) Can u pls pm me when u update??pls:)

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