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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Because while he may no longer be the only one she shoots late nights with, he'll be damned if he won't stay the last one she says goodnight to.

I don't know why but i loved these lines..write more of these..please? :D

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Hey! This is your first piece of work that I have read and I cannot tell you how guilty I feel for not searching more for your work. This was beyond anything else I have read before. It was so real and yet so dreamy. I could quote your words back to you but that wouldn't make any sense because I'm sure they're imprinted on your mind already. And also because no one phrase or sentence is more worthy than the rest of being mentioned separately. They are all a league apart in a way of their own. There couldn't have been a better way to amalgamate the actors and the characters.

Just the way you subtly expressed each emotion that she felt was what got to me. And that picture of Param is funny, to say the least xD

Please PM me when you write more?

Arushi

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Tanya

@TashaForever

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

OMGEE.

No wonder this is the OS of the week.

No doubt it is Osum :*

You're a wonderful writer <3

Just now I read the other part.

God.

You're too awesome!

I am rushing to check your index now, I must!

Because while he may no longer be the only one she shoots late nights with, he'll be damned if he won't stay the last one she says goodnight to.

^^That btw, is my fav line :'')

It just gives me the feels!

<33

Please PM me when you update ANY work of yours, especially this :'')

*In awe*

~Tanya

Edited by TashaForever - 11 years ago

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elizabeth paul

@enigma1997

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

just one thing to say!!!!

GIMME GIMME GIMME MORE>>>>>

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

First off, I'd like to say I read both the parts shortly after you posted them. I was busy that time and didn't comment, because frankly I don't think a short comment would have done justice to this absolutely impeccable piece of work right here 😳

I have a habit of color coding fics when I comment, but I'm at a loss here. Quoting the whole fic and highlighting the whole thing will be pointless no?

The thought is amazing. Each and every line stands out. The starting&ending lines of both the parts are .. I can't think of a word. Honestly 😆

When it comes to fics like this, I wish I could write a better comment to truly express my love and admiration. But I can't, and I'm not gonna write crappy stuff just for the sake of it. 😛

And this too, though Tanya has already posted about it

Dil ye BeKarar Kyun Hai <3 || SH Chronicles #3 || [Fictions of the Week Segment :)]

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AMadhuri

@AMadhuri

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Awesome, Loved it 😊

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Kri

@kri1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Wow! I loved this... I am speechless right now! But I loved it ... A LOT... A LOT...A LOT!

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whinyteen96

@whinyteen96

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

This. Is. Bloody. Brilliant.

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

I loved reading every word of it and I love you! 😉

You know its fairly easy too scribble about the characters you see everyday on screen...but to write about the artists is not a child's play...It was mesmerizing how you described the blurred lines between facts and fiction...

Please write more...I certainly appreciate the effort!!! 😆

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Priya Das

@TheDreamyKid

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

You have no IDEA how much this touched me. The way you write has turned me speechless. I am literally thanking the gods [and Arushi] that I came across this fic and you today. Do I sound like I'm buttering you up? Don't worry, I'm not gonna eat you, despite your username (fried potatoes are love!). I am just going to tell you that you are awesome.

And, yes, I have a (healthy) obsession with the show Supernatural.

COMING BACK TO THE POINT. :P

Originally posted by: Couch_Potato

She's gotten into the habit of carrying a picture from his modeling days around with her. It is stashed away amongst movie ticket stubs, receipts, scribbled tissues and visiting cards that she keeps safe in her notepad. It serves as a keepsake (and sometimes, as a reminder of sorts) and a safety guard - although Param calls it blackmail - for when he takes his teasing a little too far.

THIS LINE was the most PERFECT way to start a fic. Ever. I cannot fathom why it resonated within me, but the moment I read it, I knew this fic would be really special.

She doesn't have to see him to know that now he's become Randhir Singh Shekhawat. Knows how his almost black eyes would have turned golden under the bright lights. Knows his body will be rigid right now, his muscles bunched up, tensed. He'll be standing taller (which makes his collarbone peek out from his carefully selected tee - he doesn't know this but she does). His hair will be casually messy, his lips parched and his voice will have a hoarse edge to it. Deeper, more resounding. She knows all this yet that's not what throws her off.

Woah there. Do you want me to die right now? I mean, it's not just what you described (which is hot beyond words :'O) but the way you did it. As mentioned before, you're a gem that I am SO happy to have come across.

She looks at it long and hard until she's convinced it's seared into mind and she can see it perfectly even with her eyes closed before hiding it away again until the next time.

Lately she finds herself looking at the picture more often than she cares to count.

Can there BE a better ending for this? I think not.

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