{Manveer OS} BEWITCHED! - Page 2

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg

Lovely os. Love it. Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Hii navi :D Hey Saira😃
Suprised to see me ;) EXTREMELY😲
Okay I did not read th OS Now THERE ... I'm NOT surprised😆.don't be angry sorry I'm not angry😊.
I have lost all interest in manveer :(

That's sad ... even if I try , I can't get Uday out of my head😕.
Anyways. Now that u r wondering what I was doing on this forum then I was stalking YHM writer What's YHM😕? and eneded up here and just was looking at the first page and saw ur OS
I did not read but the length shows u put in a lot of effort Yep - I put in tons of sweat and blood into it😆.
So hats off to the effort , dedication and time ... and thank u for such kind words😳.
And amazing update ( I know its amazing because I know u write beautifully ;) ) Good answer , Miss Flatterer😉.
Byee now :* Bye ... come again😃.

Originally posted by: annabh

Hey jiji, Hi Anni😃.
Woa that was an awesome
One Shot Thank u so much 🤗 .
you are extremely good at fairy tale too Awww, thanks (it was my first and last attempt😆)
Loved the story a lot ... & I loved your comment😳!

Originally posted by: Lovelydrops

superb loved it...

Originally posted by: ..IshqShava..

I just read the first part...it was so cute❤️ Thank you 🤗
You made DS into a hobbling old witch🤣 Very befitting, right😉?
Jainandini is as wicked as ever...😡 Yep, totally evil!
Manveer are so innocent like children, but only until their marriage😉 wonder where Uday disappeared to?😲 He's temporarily dead😉.
(Im yet to read the second part...i'll post another comment tomorrow after i read it, hope you don't mind😳) Of course I don't mind😃.


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just read the second part...it was so Enthralling!! Really? (thanxx so much )Magic wands, stealing a still beating heart, glass caskets...wow, really loved it👏👏 Thanks Vibha😃.
in the end, both villains were obliterated successfully ⭐️ We didn't want 1 lingering around😉.
awesome story...keep writing more of them👍🏼 If time permits😃.
(you brought Virat alive here...well done😛) Awww, u noticed.

Thank u so much for this beautiful comment Vibha 🤗 ... you always give such a detailed analysis, which is ever-so-inspiring. Love you for that ❤️.

Originally posted by: andy.a

Cute os
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Hi navi, Hi Andy😃.

I thought since my gift came some 6 months after my birthday, I would comment after 6 months on my next birthday, rofl Hawww😲😲.

Got scared na!!! 🤣🤣 THAT was not FUNNY Andrew😉. I came to comment within a week!!! See how punctual I am!!! You're a day late😉.

Hey Everyone - after REALLY long time I'm posting an OS.and you made me wait for years!! Are u a DOG 🤣? I tried something different this time ... I was always VERY FOND of Fairy-tales😳,me tooo!!!!We are so alike! and I wanted to write my own. Not sure if it's worth WASTING 15 VALUABLE MINUTES on😕, but I'm sure the person whom I wrote THIS for , will surely like it😉!well, you know , i... i... i...
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loved it sooo much!!!! Thank God! scared you 1 day you will stop my poor heart, for sure.

HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY ANDY 🤗 ..thanks so much navi, bw you are suffocating me, loosen the hug a bit!!!.No - I don't want to 🤗. hope u like your 144-days-delayed gift 🤣. i did not like it, but i loved it!!!!❤️ I'm sooo happy.

I must the say the starting was magical!!!😳 Even uday's birth had a magical touch!!! He's special na😉. I must say when you first said mrinalini was evil , I could not believe it... well it was pre joaw 5 days and DS was a strong character who took wise decisions, but now I am happy that she got killed!!! It felt so great especially in the post joaw5 period!!!😳 I figured that much😆.

Jai is always evil na!! but I must say only she can act like an evil incarnate!!! 😆 You're right.

The way you described the starting just reminded me of my childhood when my father would say fairy tales to me!!! It was good to be back to the old days!!!😃😛 ... which wasn't THAT long ago , as you're still a child even now😉😆.

Well, "the wicked witch of the west" was a good line, and it reminded me of a convo we had months back!! Ahhh yes - the WIZARD OF OZ.

Manyta and her broom reminded me of sabrina!!😃 Awww - I used to love SAbrina. The way the broom helped her to get uday's heart was great!! Coming to the heart, which delayed the update for 4 months, you really got a good way to get the heart back!!! and you made jai do the dirty work and kept manyta's hands clean.. bw, where exactly did you purchase the heart? Via olyx.com?🤣 How did u know😲?

Finally manveer got rid of jai!!😳 I was so happy that time!!! I can imagine😆.plus now since uday knows magic is gona add spice to manveer's life!!!😳 Yep☺️. Fairy tales always have that happily ever after factor that makes them sooo popular!!! Yeah ... that everything will work out perfectly.

And here too you made uday romantic, blush!!! 😳He was naughty even here!!! THAT comes automatically in MY writing😆. And manyta, thank god, she has some brains here, because I was mad at her after joaw... good girl !!!😉 She ... or me?

Anyway I must say I really loved the os (do I have a choice, 🤣, Sure u do. joking) do dream more and write more!! I don't think so. I love fairy tales, especially when they have a navi factor in them!!! So , u better FRAME THIS 1 and keep as it's my FIRST and LAST.

I did not get any pm😭, Ooops sorry. though I resed before he he he!!!!!😳 I knew you'd find it BEFORE I pointed it out to you😉.

When are you updating the next os navi, waiting for it!!! After OCY😉.

Love you❤️ Love u too.

Awww Andy , this comment was so worth the wait. Loved it sooo much ❤️. I'm so glad u enjoyed the OS ... your opinion mattered the most , as it was specially written for you!

Originally posted by: capriya

Hai Navina, Hey Priyanka, awesome story! Thank u 🤗 .Thanks for the PM. You're welcome!