{Manveer OS} BEWITCHED!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute os
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Hi navi,

I thought since my gift came some 6 months after my birthday, I would comment after 6 months on my next birthday, rofl

Got scared na!!! 🤣🤣 I came to comment within a week!!! See how punctual I am!!!

Hey Everyone - after REALLY long time I'm posting an OS.and you made me wait for years!! I tried something different this time ... I was always VERY FOND of Fairy-tales😳,me tooo!!!! and I wanted to write my own. Not sure if it's worth WASTING 15 VALUABLE MINUTES on😕, but I'm sure the person whom I wrote THIS for , will surely like it😉!well, you know , i... i... i...
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loved it sooo much!!!! scared you
HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY ANDY 🤗 ..thanks so much navi, bw you are suffocating me, loosen the hug a bit!!!. hope u like your 144-days-delayed gift 🤣. i did not like it, but i loved it!!!!❤️

I must the say the starting was magical!!!😳 Even uday's birth had a magical touch!!! I must say when you first said mrinalini was evil , I could not believe it... well it was pre joaw 5 days and DS was a strong character who took wise decisions, but now I am happy that she got killed!!! It felt so great especially in the post joaw5 period!!!😳

Jai is always evil na!! but I must say only she can act like an evil incarnate!!! 😆

The way you described the starting just reminded me of my childhood when my father would say fairy tales to me!!! It was good to be back to the old days!!!😃😛

Well, "the wicked witch of the west" was a good line, and it reminded me of a convo we had months back!!

Manyta and her broom reminded me of sabrina!!😃 The way the broom helped her to get uday's heart was great!! Coming to the heart, which delayed the update for 4 months, you really got a good way to get the heart back!!! and you made jai do the dirty work and kept manyta's hands clean.. bw, where exactly did you purchase the heart? Via olyx.com?🤣

Finally manveer got rid of jai!!😳 I was so happy that time!!! plus now since uday knows magic is gona add spice to manveer's life!!!😳 Fairy tales always have that happily ever after factor that makes them sooo popular!!!

And here too you made uday romantic, blush!!! 😳He was naughty even here!!! And manyta, thank god, she has some brains here, because I was mad at her after joaw... good girl !!!😉

Anyway I must say I really loved the os (do I have a choice, 🤣, joking) do dream more and write more!! I love fairy tales, especially when they have a navi factor in them!!!

I did not get any pm😭, though I resed before he he he!!!!!😳

When are you updating the next os navi, waiting for it!!!

Love you❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww...😊
navi di...
it was such an ossum os...👏
loved it to the core and the concept was fabulous...😃
u wrote it so well...👍🏼
loved it alot...😳
DO WRITE MORE FAIRYTALES...😆😉
LOVE ANU😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely os. Love it. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hii navi :D
Suprised to see me ;)
Okay I did not read th OS don't be angry sorry
I have lost all interest in manveer :(
Anyways. Now that u r wondering what I was doing on this forum then I was stalking YHM writer and eneded up here and just was looking at the first page and saw ur OS
I did not read but the length shows u put in a lot of effort
So hats off to the effort , dedication and time
And amazing update ( I know its amazing because I know u write beautifully ;) )
Byee now :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Navina!!

Beautiful OS. I didn't know..you can write such fairy tale. It was truly wonderful.

"Jainandini"..as usual was the devil in disguised. "Mrinalini..died"..Thank God.

"Manveer lived happily everafter"..was fantastic. And finally "their sweety cute kids"..were the show stealer..

You must write more of these kinds Navi.. You are AMAZING AT IT. LOVELY!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey jiji,
Woa that was an awesome
One Shot
you are extremely good at fairy tale too
Loved the story a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honey-FLAB

awww...😊

navi di...
it was such an ossum os...👏Thanks Anu 🤗 .
loved it to the core and the concept was fabulous...😃 I'm so glad u enjoyed it!
u wrote it so well...👍🏼 Awww, thanks dear😳.
loved it alot...Embarrassed
DO WRITE MORE FAIRYTALES...😆😉 Naah , I think 1 in this life-time is enough 😆
LOVE ANUEmbarrassed
Thanxx so much for the lovely comment 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nash..

Hey Navina!! Hi Nash😊

Beautiful OS. I didn't know..you can write such fairy tale. It was just a small try. It was truly wonderful. Thank u so much😃.

"Jainandini"..as usual was the devil in disguised. Very befitting for her😉. "Mrinalini..died"..Thank God. Exactly😆.

"Manveer lived happily everafter"..was fantastic. And finally "their sweety cute kids"..were the show stealer.. I decided to bring VIRAT here😳😆.

You must write more of these kinds Navi.. You are AMAZING AT IT. Awww, thanxx for the compliment😳. LOVELY!!!
& thank u for the wonderful comment 🤗 .

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