Swaron Os: One-Sided Love

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i really dont know what to say..this piece of writing was PHENOMENAL.. and trust me i aint exaggerating.
the way Swayam met Sharon was cute..Sharon discovering a new side to herself with Swayam was lovely.
Swayam taking her on a date to know her reply..his going blushy-blushy while being with Sharon was really cute.
the best part of the OS was the ending after Sharon broke Swayam's heart by telling him a lie..that she belonged to someone.
the ending lines

"my heart hurt so much..so..so much
the spring was over the clock has stopped and so has my life

whose one-sided love had it been? mine or his"

hats off to you..these lines just swept me off my feet.
thanks a ton for the PM.
cheers
Nishi

P.S. you have just earned yourself a fan.. :D

wow man its aswom...

swaron are soo cute...

nd ur last lines was aswom...

do write more

oh my God...
this is damn good yar...
both are in love bt shar just could not accept it..poor she...
thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: Nishi.Kss

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i really dont know what to say..this piece of writing was PHENOMENAL.. and trust me i aint exaggerating.
the way Swayam met Sharon was cute..Sharon discovering a new side to herself with Swayam was lovely.
Swayam taking her on a date to know her reply..his going blushy-blushy while being with Sharon was really cute.
the best part of the OS was the ending after Sharon broke Swayam's heart by telling him a lie..that she belonged to someone.
the ending lines

"my heart hurt so much..so..so much
the spring was over the clock has stopped and so has my life

whose one-sided love had it been? mine or his"

hats off to you..these lines just swept me off my feet.
thanks a ton for the PM.
cheers
Nishi

P.S. you have just earned yourself a fan.. :D

I really luvd it...SwaRon were too cute...
Last line ws very tochy...
keep writing

What a Perfect read...The piece was Phenomenal!!!!It sooths you it breaks you...
Sharon in that hospital bed found a new side to herself because of Swayam...Swayam was very cute here..He proposed her but didnt ask for answer maybe because he knew what her answer will be...The date where he ia BLUSHING...Awww...then finally when sharon broke hia heart...and broke herself...wow!!!The ending where she says she wants to spend her last days in her home...it really wrenched my heart...The choice of words the way you presented that last portion...It was Heartbreakingly Beautiful 😊
Congratulations...Very very very well done 👏

It was such a sweet OS. Heart wrenching and well portrayed feelings of Sharon.

dis is so so so nice... & painful... ur writing style is so perfect... keep it up...
thank u so much fr d pm... 😊
& keep writing... God bless

Oh god...i m speechless...numb...hatss off yaaarrr...
U r one such tremendously b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l writer...omg


Da end of ur OS...made my heart hurt me like damn...ufff...it was very well penned...

Ps...plz pm me ur work as dis OScompleletly earned my heart...