Swaron Os: One-Sided Love - Page 2

Hii I don't know you but I read your OS...its amazing story; I loved the way you narrated the whole story...the story was really nice...thank you for providing a good read to me...

Pratik...

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

What a Perfect read...The piece was Phenomenal!!!!It sooths you it breaks you...
Sharon in that hospital bed found a new side to herself because of Swayam...Swayam was very cute here..He proposed her but didnt ask for answer maybe because he knew what her answer will be...The date where he ia BLUSHING...Awww...then finally when sharon broke hia heart...and broke herself...wow!!!The ending where she says she wants to spend her last days in her home...it really wrenched my heart...The choice of words the way you presented that last portion...It was Heartbreakingly Beautiful 😊
Congratulations...Very very very well done 👏

LOVED IT TO THE CORE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!

I can't help applaud you enough for this phenomenal piece of writing. Never I imagine SwaRon like this..in love yet broken. I lived a perfectly beautiful yet heartwrenching journey throughout.

Originally posted by: Natsu__Dragneel

Thank you so much for reading and giving such a heart warming review in this oneshot

well this oneshot is based on a video that i watched but can't really remembered the name of that video

and the last line was actually like a question that i want to ask readers who are reading this oneshot that whose one-sided love has it been?

boy whose love never get reciprocated or a girl who love him so much but can't reciprocated to his feeling for her

there are many things that i wanted to wrote in this oneshot but i can't because of certain challenge i have with my little sisters

but i'm working on sequel so i can cover the part that i missed

once again thank you so much for reading and giving a review in this oneshot

count me in ur fans list

The OS was really deep. The words you used, the phrases.
really amazing. I enjoyed it.
Please do work on it's sequel.

Thanks for the PM.

i am out of words