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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21

PART 5

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All are

& maaneet first mulaqat

previous part 4 on page 61

Aqwosm chpter
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Posted: 11 years ago
very very very very very very very very very interesting and intriguing
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
So maans back
N geet fainted
Wondering what happened in past
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet reacted to maan
i hope she gets well soon
I hope they meet soon
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PART 8

Maan reached hoshiaypur with family and own birthday, his inauguration the charity hospital & school...

Whole day pass in function...and at night family rested in house...

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Arohi : aaj ka pura din chla gya

Aur uncle ka phone mil hi nhi raha

Kaise pata lagenga

Geet kaha hai

Daadi : maan ab khud geet ko dundenga

Supriya : maa wo kaise

Daadi : kal hum delhi jaa rhe hai na

Bs waha ek surprise ready hai maan ke liye

Arjun : kya daadi

Daadi : thoda wait kro

***********

Daaimaa : sahib geet ko hosh aa gya hai

Malik goes to her room, seeing her...

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Malik sit near to her...

Malik : beta ek baar firse bol

.

Is ghar ko dekh

Bejaan ho gya hai ye

.

Ek waqt tha

Yaha teri awaaz gunja krti thi

.

Beta kuch toh bol...

She whisper "dad"...her voice is so low but her dad understands or listen whisper too...

Mailk : aapne suna

Geet ne dad kaha

Daaimaa : ha sahib

Malik : aap doctor ko phone kriye

Daaimaa : ji

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Doctor : Mr. Malik dheere - dheere geet phli ki tarah bolne lagengi

Usne itne saal khamoshi mein bitaye hai

Aap uski phle se bhi jyada care krni hongi

Usse stress se durr rakhna honga

.

Thoda sa bhi stress uske liye dangerous ho sakta hai

.

Dheere- dheere uski diet hume normal krni hongi

Mailk : hmm

Wo ab thik ho jaayengi na

Doc. : Mr. Malik maine aapse phle bhi kaha tha

Jis din geet humari treatment ko respond krne lagengi

Wo recover ho jaayengi

.

Now she responding

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Malik : geet beta

Ab aap bilkul phli ki tarah thik ho jaayengi

.

Daaimaa : sahib mein geet ko soup pila deti hu

Malik : nhi..aaj hum khud apni beti ko apne hath se soup pilayenge

Daaimaa : ji

Mailk : aap bacho ko andher bej dijiye

Daaimaa : ji

**********

Malik : geet ye mehar hai

Aur ye abhi

Geet give questioning look, she not knows both children... in these five years she lives, but she not knows or nor feeling what's going on around her...

Wo jee toh rhi thi

Par har ek ehsaas se mahroom thi wo

Malik : geet beta

Tumhare bache

She firstly touched her belly, and then sees towards both...

Mehar : nanu mom humse pyaar nhi krti

Malik : nhi mehar

Abhi- abhi tumahri mom lambi neend se uthi hai

Abhi : nanu lambi neend

Malik : ha beta

Ab mom tum dono se baat karengi

Abhi : schi

Malik : ha

Mehar : mom

Mehar come close to geet & asked "mom aap mujhse baat karongi na"

Geet nodded.

Mehar hugged geet tightly by waist & rest own head on her chest... geet felt little modesty she hugged back or not...

Mehar : mom mere sath school chalongi na

Malik understand geet condition and interrupt the mehar.

Malik : tumhari mom jb puri tarah thik ho jaayengi

Tb tum dono ke sath har jgh jaayengi

.

Par usse phle hume inki care krni hongi

Taki ye jaldi thik ho jaaye

Abhi : nanu aap tension mt lo

Mein hoon na

Mailk : ha

.

Jaayo ab dono daaimaa ke sath jaayo

Aur so jaayo

Mehar : nhi

Aaj hum mom ke pass soyenge

Malik : par

Mehar : nhi nanu

Aap humesha asa krte ho

Aaj hum yhi rahenge

.

Hai na mom

Geet sees her eyes full of hopes & happiness... she don't want destroy the happiness of both children...she nodded.

Abhi : ab mom

Ne ha kr diya

Aap jaayo naanu

Both children cuddled both side of geet...left side mehar & right side abhi...

Malik : par

Daaimaa : sahib

Aap zara sib hi tension mt lo

Mein rhungi geet ke pass

Dono bache bilkul pareshaan nhi karenge geet bitiya ko

Malik : par geet

Daaimaa : sahib

Geet betiya inke sath waqt nhi bitayengi

Toh wo ab bhi us ehsaas se durr hi rahengi

Jo iski zindagi mein 5 saal phle se aa chukka hai

.

Mailk : khi geet ko stress huya toh

Daaimaa : sahib

Geet inke sath rahengi

Toh jo sawal uski aankho mein

Apne hi bacho ko leke

Wo khud hi dhere - dhere durr ho jaayenge

5 saal sahib

Maa ke hote huye bhi bache bina maa ke rahe hai

Maine mehar ko kbhi itna khush nhi dekha

Mailk : hmm

***********

Maan lay on bed & lost on his birthday day five years back...

.

.

He remembered geet call, she nervous, tensed & excited too while talking with him...

Maan : kya baat hai shona

Geet : maan mujhe aapko kuch batana hai

Actually kuch nhi

Bhut kuch

Maan : bolo

Mein sun raha hu

Geet : ase nhi

Maan : fir kaise

Geet : maan mein aapka ghar pe intzaar kr rhi hu

Please aap jaldi aana

Maan : shone

Bs ek meeting hai

Uske baad sidha tumahre pass

Geet : hmm

Maan : geet tum thik ho na

Geet : hmm

Maan : asa kya batana hai tumhe

Jo itni tensed ho

Geet : maan mujhse koi galati ho jaaye

Toh aap maaf kar donge na

Maan : wo toh galati pe depend krta hai

Geet : maan bola na HA

Maan : ha shone

Mein tumse kaha jyada din naraaz rh sakta hu

fir tum manati bhi toh kitni achi stlye mein ho

geet : maan

She blushed...

Maan : shone bye

Client aa gye hai

Geet : bye

.

.

Maan : galati nhi thi woh geet

Gunah tha

Galati toh anjaane mein hoti hai

Par tumne jaan buzkar sb kuch kiya

.

Uske liye mein aaj tak ?????

He stopped in mid... he really not forgives her to till date...

.

Gussa tha mein

.

Khi na khi aaj bhi hu geet tumse

He don't want think more on this...its only give pain... He closed both eyes and tries to sleep...

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And another side, both children slept peacefully in mother embrace... But sleep so far from geet eyes too...


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Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

😃

thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome ud👏
Geet confuse to see her kids😲
but kids r so much happy 2 see
their mom and sleep with her
y maan not forgetting wat happen
their some MU create by some one
daadi planning something😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet is back now..
I hope ki ab sab theek ho jaaye
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Posted: 11 years ago
was she in coma? meher was so happy seeing her mom responding to them for the first time in 5yrs. what was maan talking about? what she did in past?
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it
geet is back
hope everything goes well
awesome update

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