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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Poor Geet ...how could maan decide he doesn't wanna marry her
Poor lassie is trying to be strong in front of family
Hoping he realizes what he's gonna loose soon b4 too late
Can't wait to see what happens once they meet again
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon
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Awesome

Geet asking for Maan daily. Kab tak her parents are trying to hide the truth.
Now she is desperate to talk to him. Calling but Maan didn't pick up. At last he called n declared his verdict which shattered her.
Parents trying to console her.

Eager to know wat she does in Delhi.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 6

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Geet reached delhi with her sister rajji... Mohinder & rano not allowed to her go alone ...

Now geet raaji leaving in her massi house...

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Rajji : di aap thik hai na

Geet : ha rajji

Rajji : di aapse kuch puchu

Toh aap bura toh nhi maanogi na

Geet : rajji mein teri baat ka kbhi bura maan sakti hu

Puch

Rajji : di in kuch dino mein kitna kuch badal gya

Par aapne koi shikayat nhi ki

Kya aapka mann nhi kiya

Aap jiju se ek baar pucho

Wo ase kaise piche hat sakte hai

Geet : rajji abhi tumne kaha

Kitna kuch badal gya

Aur abhi bhi tum maan ko jiju hi kh rhi ho

Rajji : di wo adaat ho gyi hai na

Isliye

Geet : rajji ab hume so jaana chaiye

Kal mujhe exam form bhi fill krna hai

Aur classes ke liye bhi baat krni hai

Rajji : di abhi toh aap puri tarah recover bhi nhi huye ho

Geet : ab mein thik hu

Zakhm toh dheere dheere br hi jaayenge

Bs waqt to nishaan jaane mein lagenga

****************

He pinned her to near wall from door side...

Geet : hatiye

She tries to go, but he blocked her path by placing hand both sides...

Maan : tikhi mirchi

Geet : am not tikhi mirchi

Maan : tum ho

He come closer to her & whispers to near her ear "I want to see you"...

He placed own palm on her cheek, slowly downing near her neck...

Geet : maan

He kissed behind her...going down ...then kissed on her neck...

She little pushed him...

Geet : maan

Mujhe jaana hai

Maan : itni jaldi kya hai

Geet : niche sb mera intzaar kr rhe honge

Maan : Maine bhi toh kitna intzaar kiya hai

Ab unki baari hai

****************

Geet seeing towards sky & sited on wheel chair...

Geet : maan mera intzaar humesha se lamba raha hai

Aur abhi tak khatam nhi huya hai

.

.

Rajji jo tumne mujhse aaj pucha

Mein wo har din khud se puchti hu

Asi kya kami rh gyi mere intzaar mein

Pyaar mein

.

Ha pyaar mein

Jbse is rishte ko smjha

Aapse pyaar kiya

Jo ek haadse ne sb kuch hila ke rakh diya

.

She touched her left cheek where burn scars blurred but visible to till.

Her back paining, she not applies ointment from past few hours...

On this accident her back injured fully and some portion of back neck & head also effected... Other parts of body also burned like hand, legs, little but face too, but here injury not deeply happen... god save her...due to back injury she not stand above few minutes...in starting she not able walk too because her backbone affected so badly...now she walk but not above five minutes...

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One month more passed, she recovering physically but mentally she stands on same place from past few months.

Now she concentrating on education, she want become CS soon... her whole day passing in study & in classes... her sister rajji also helping her ... her massi cares her as mother...

Rajji holiday ending date coming near...she don't want go but geet forces her ...

Rajji : di mein aapko yaha akela chodke kaise jaa sakti hu

Geet : rajji yaha sb hai

Massi hai, aur baki sb bhi toh hai

Rajji : par di

Geet : bs rajji

That's final

Tu jaa rhi hai

Mein nhi chahti

Meri wajh se teri padhai ko koi farq pde

Smjhi

Rajji : hmm

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One more month passed, today is geet birthday... she sited alone in her room... she misses her family ... she remember how rajji celebrate her birthday with full of masti...

She heard some noise outside her room ... she pick her stick and slowly - 2 go outside the room...here, room fill of darkness ...

Geet : yaha itna andhera kaise

Before she think more, full room lightened and her family stand in front of her...

Geet : maa

She hugged rano tightly...

Geet : maa I miss you so much

She cupped her face and wipes her tears...

Rano : ek bhi aansu nhi

She nodded...

Rano : di

Maa

Baki ki baatein aap baad mein krna

Phle cake cut kro na

Mujhe khana hai

**************

On geet birthday, full family go outside for dinner...

***************

Maan : zain not tell me

Tune usse abhi tak I love you nhi kaha

Zain : kaise khta

Usse apne saamne dekhke

Meri bolti hi bnd ho jaati hai

Maan : kya wo dikhne mein itni daravni hai

Zain : maan

Khabar daar tune aaliya ke liye ek bhi sbd galat kaha

Maan : oh toh uska naam hai

Aaliya hai

Nice name

Zain : she is so beautiful

Aur bhut pyaari bhi hai

Maan : hmm

Toh khde na

Tu usse beintahaa mohabbat krta hai

Zain : whi toh nhi kh paata

Khi usne NA kh diya toh

Mera dil tut jaayenga

Maan : nhi kahenga

Toh usse koi aur le jaayenga

Choice is yours

.

Zain & maan conversation going on, both lost in talks so much... in between maan collided with someone... before she fall , he protect her from hit ... Her face shining in like moon light...he makes stand on her feet...

Maan : am sorry

Wo mera dhayn khi aur tha

Aur mein aapse tkra gya

.

.

Zain : maan chale

Maan : hmm

Ha mein kya kh raha tha

Zain : aaliya

Maan : right

I love you aaliya

I love you a lot

Kya tum mujhse shaadi karongi

I promise I give you all happiness...

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see this updates too

MG - jaane dil mein kabse hai tu - part 40 on page 19 & part 41 on page 26 (6 june)

Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part. looks like maan collided with geet and geet will misunderstand his talk about aalia.

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