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Posted: 11 years ago
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1st of all thanks a ton that u thought to write on Asholak😊...even i was finding some ff or os on them but couldn't find good ones...but it seems u have a telepathy with me😆😆 and u wrote and i read... i am really pleased to read this os😳...amazingly written...
the way u have described each thing...was really commendable...u pay attention to each small things...let it be Astha's shyness or Shlok's naughtiness...everything portrayed very well...
the update was really hot and sensuous☺️☺️... i hope u would continue and would make the coming updates more hot😉😉...keep it up my Chetan Bhagat...
Edited by krisrock - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Haye!! Likkuuu!!!
Awsum yaar!!
Tu toh is forum me bhi chha gayi!

Chuperb!😃

Thoda zyada hi...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: PoohLover

Liki that was sooo romantic ☺️..totally enjoyed reading it

Thank you for the pm and story 🤗


thank u soo much pooh! that was sooo sweet of u to come here and comment !😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
m thankful to each and every person for reading,liking and commenting on this FF. This is a spectacular response. Thank You soo much IPKKND EBP forum!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
loved it to the core...please write some more passionate os...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
soo intense and soo passionate...perfect title too...loved it...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Mind blowing update
Continue soon
Buddy me and if possible send pms of your future updates
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: krisrock

1st of all thanks a ton that u thought to write on Asholak😊...even i was finding some ff or os on them but couldn't find good ones...but it seems u have a telepathy with me😆😆 and u wrote and i read... i am really pleased to read this os😳...amazingly written...

the way u have described each thing...was really commendable...u pay attention to each small things...let it be Astha's shyness or Shlok's naughtiness...everything portrayed very well...
the update was really hot and sensuous☺️☺️... i hope u would continue and would make the coming updates more hot😉😉...keep it up my Chetan Bhagat...



Hey sooo sorry for the late reply! I just saw all the comments. 😃
Well, i am really glad that you like my stories soo much! You are a motivation! Thank u sooo much 😃
And i reallly like the fact that you also notice the way the write, what i highlight and all..really makes my day!
Thank u sooo much!
I hope i keep entertaining u like this only in the future too! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
loved, loved, loved it...
I'm actually drinking water after this ...
awesome piece of writing 👏
All emotions- shyness, love, desire and the intense passion were beautifully portrayed... Great job ..
Do keep writing more 👍🏼
P.S. Add me to ur PM list please 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
i can't comment🤢
my hands nd mind r not working properly☺️
it was sooo hooottt!!!☺️😳
thnx for sharing it dear 🤗

and ppplllzzz add me in ur buddy list
mujhey bhi pm karna 😃
Edited by nakaja - 11 years ago

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