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Amy

@AmyChoco

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Aria..this is wonderful!! u do know how to write beautifully!! u shud write more often!! 👍🏼loved that khi finally realised the truth!!...and as for suggestions, read what u hav written many times b4 posting..the more u read ur own work, u will realise that specific areas need more tweeking!! the more u write...the more polished ur work will become!!😃

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dakshaavi

@dakshaavi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Good job aria. how I wish I could see this on screen .

Just want ragna together .

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mishti058

@mishti058

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Aria u r an amazing writer dear..

Wen i read prem name and that night, i stopped reading n was thinking whether to continue further or nt...then i decide to continue and i was happy with it..i loved it completely...plz continue soon dear..

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sharanya

@sharanya0011

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wow its awesome.. atlast pakhi and gauri got an eyeopening and rectified their mistakes by supporting rags and kalpi.. u have written it in beautiful manner👏...

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Thank you guys 😃

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: amy.r
Aria..this is wonderful!! u do know how to write beautifully!! u shud write more often!! 👍🏼loved that khi finally realised the truth!!...and as for suggestions, read what u hav written many times b4 posting..the more u read ur own work, u will realise that specific areas need more tweeking!! the more u write...the more polished ur work will become!!😃

thank you Amy ur help is required when it comes to me writing 😛