your non acceptance kills me - ragna

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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is my attempt
thanks for reading my scriblings and encouraged me
please post your comments on this too





your non -acceptance kills me !!!!


your non -acceptance is the punishment for me !!!!

and this silence of your's kills me more


the pain of my life is more than the revenge

as you are apart from me


my body is apart from you

but my soul lives in and around you


your non -acceptance kills me !!!!


this pain kills me with in

how to over come this with out your

PRESENCE


you are my soul

you are my desperateness

you are my dreams


now every other things became

not more IMPORTANT THAN YOU


you are my dreams

you are my hopes

you are my aspirations now


as you are IMPORTANT to me


your non -acceptance kills me !!!!


your agony kills me

your silence kills me

your desperateness kills me


but cannot find you any where

but can find me with me


as your non -acceptance kills me !!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nicely written dearπŸ‘πŸ‘

U are referring raghav here ,, hainaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pookhi

Nice as usual.😊

i dont know your name but a big
THANK YOU
you read all my scriblings and commented on it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhanuli

Nicely written dearπŸ‘πŸ‘

U are referring raghav here ,, hainaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

thank you
to all those whose love is not accepted and especially foer our baba πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very beautiful justtt fabπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘v
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow there's cum a another talent in our forum nice job shriram i hope if dat ur name πŸ‘ u trully perfectly mentioned our majnu's condition πŸ˜† nice 😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditi37

Wow there's cum a another talent in our forum nice job shriram i hope if dat ur name πŸ‘ u trully perfectly mentioned our majnu's condition πŸ˜† nice 😎


thank you for appreciation iam sasikala
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sasikalasriram



thank you for appreciation iam sasikala


Ok hi sasikala im aditi n dear u have a gift keep continuing it πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one from raghav singhania point of view


just tell him to celebate if he really wants the one for whom he is singing this ode for

else

be with his po po forever
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShanUlas

nice one from raghav singhania point of view


just tell him to celebate if he really wants the one for whom he is singing this ode for

else

be with his po po forever


when i am silent reader i use to read ur comments its like nuclear bomb or more effective than thatπŸ˜‰
for raghav singhania if he wants to sing this ode first he has to sign the business deal to take my verses and to sing to who so ever he want...πŸ˜† if he sings to also no problem with meπŸ˜‰
so enjoy it ...
its for fun

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