AsYa SS-The Boundaries That Separate Us Chapter 16 Updated Page 101 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Linsie

ooo good luck for your exam...

will wait ... 😃


thanks darling!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Hey good starting ...
I 'd love to read more ...
Pm me if possible ! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: ASYA4eveAAA

Hey good starting ...
I 'd love to read more ...
Pm me if possible ! 😊

Okay I will pm you! :)
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tapasidas

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Pakka on 28th or 29th April!!!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm waiting for an update! :)
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HALLOOO!!! Nah this isn't Najma's Halo Khala! Chillax. So here I am, super duper late as always. Forgive me for that. So everyone remembers what this SS is all about? No? Umm...it's okay, just go back to the first page and re-read the introduction again. Done? All right, you can proceed further.

Preview:

One day, when Dilshad was sitting before the TV, the landline rang. Dilshad lifted the phone to her ears & cried out:

ZOYAAA!!!

Chapter One

It was a cry of happiness...amd motherly love. Though it had only been a month, it actually felt like ages since the last time she had talked to her bechari Zoya. She asked in a halted voice:

Zoya..tum..tum sachmein Zoya ho na?

Yes phoophi!!! Main sachmein hi Zoya hoon! How are you? Aapko pata hai main aapko kitna miss karti hoon?

Zoya said on the other side. Dilshad smiled.

Kitna miss karti ho?

Itna miss karti hoon...itna miss karti hoon...ki I can't explain ki main aapko kitna miss karti hoon!

Dilshad burst out laughing at her words and her serious tone at the othe end.

Hum bhi tumhe bahut miss karte hain Zoya! You don't know aab ye ghar poora ek haunted house ki tarah lagta hai!

Allah Miyaan! Aisa mat boliye Phoophi! Achha aap batayiye aap kaise ho? And Tamatar dieting karr rahi ke nahin?

Hum log thik hain Zoya, bus tumhari bahut yaad aati hai. Najma of course dieting karr rahi hai!

Both of them laughed. After slight hesitation, Zoya asked in a careless tone:

Aur haan Jahanpana ki promotion hui ki nahin?

Promotion? Kaisa promotion Zoya?

Aare mera matlab hai ki abhi bhi same akdu hain...ya thoda badal bhi gaye hain? Like thoda soft-hearted you know!

Dilshad smirked.

Sach kahoon?

Of course my phoophi jaan!

Jahanpana aur bhi akdu ho gaye hain!

Really? Oh my god Phoophi! Par aap darna mat unse, okay? Unhe bass dikhawa karne ka shauq hai! Huh!

Dilshad smiled in amusement.

Zoya tum kaisi ho?

Main...main toh humesha ki tarah khush hoon! Zoya Farooqui has no worries ever!

Zoya...main tumhari Ammi toh nahin ho sakti. But tum mere liye Najma aur Asad jaisi hi ho. You can share anything with me. You know that, right?

The line stayed silent and after a while, Zoya spoke up in a choked voice.

Phoophi I still can't believe it that my Abbu is gone. Appi Jeeju bahut samjhate hain...but mera mann nahin lagta. I miss Ammi...I miss you Phoophi...

Meri bachhi!!! Ro mat...Dhire dhire everything will be alright!

Phoophi I am going back to India. Mujhe wahaan aapni real family se milni hai. May be I have a brother or sister...Koi toh hoga mere Abbu ki family ka!

Dilshad didn't want Zoya to be so sad. She knew it would be better if Zoya didn't meet her Abbu's family...because no one would accept her there. But she didn't have the heart to say it to Zoya...and yes may be she was selfish, but she wanted Zoya back!

Zoya you talk to your Appi and Jeeju first, okay? You are always welcome in this house. Aab yeh tumhara ghar hai...tumhari family hai! Thik hai? Agar bhi India main koi na ho, we are always there for you!

I love you sooo muchhh Phoophi!

I love you too meri bachhi!

Okay I will talk to them and tell you, okay? And I am sorry I didn't call before. Actually I didn't feel like...

I understand. It's all right.

Thanks phoophi. And tell Najma I love her. And MrKhan too...I mean...err...don't tell him I will be back to irritate him. This kaneez would love to surprise her Jahanpana Six Packs herself!

More like shock him!

Yesss!!!

They laughed, said Allah Hafiz and ended the call. After cutting the call, Dilshad shook her head smiling thinking of how Zoya said 'her' Jahanpana Six Packs.

After two days, Zoya called and informed Dilshad that she had finally got her Appi-Jeeju agreed to let her go to Bhopal again. Later that night at dinner, Asad was surprised to see his Ammi and Tamatar excited about shopping. He thought about it sitting in the garden drinking dark and bitter coffee. It was the first time after Zoya's leaving that they were so happy again. He was intrigued but hadn't asked anything. Nonetheless he was happy to see the smiles back on their face. And then he looked down at his coffee, and was hit by a pang of hurt in his chest. He missed Zoya. So so much. He gulped down his coffee in one go and went back to his room to work back on another of his company's projects. Once back in room, instead of working...he found himself stalking Zoya on Facebook. After one hour of going through her photos for the umpteenth time, he shut off his laptop shaking his head. This girl made him do so weird things. He wasn't in his control anymore. Rather his heart wasn't in his brain's control anymore. He reminded himself that it was dangerous, and hence he should stay away from her thoughts. She meant nothing but a museebat magnet. That got another set of memories from Mangalpur flashing before his closed eyes...and lost in her thoughts, he didn't know when he drifted off to sleep.
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A/N : Turns out like all your predictions were wrong. Guys come on, stop wishing for so mean things for our adorable Asad's more adorable Zoya! :P


I have some network problem at the moment. So the index and the title would be updated later.

Now time for your likes and comments!


Love,
Preeti <3


Edited by FaultInMyStars - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Awesome prt
Ooohhhooo kaneej wapas aarahi hai to trouble her jahapanaah six packs loll

Aaww dillu najma mssd her so much after she left
I m sure asad too :-)

Nd asad searched for her on fb...
Nccc...

Nc start..
Luking frwrd fgir next prt

Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Hmm surprising

Me gt 1st place

Not bad gowtuuu

Yipppeee
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gowtu

Awesome prt
Ooohhhooo kaneej wapas aarahi hai to trouble her jahapanaah six packs loll

Aaww dillu najma mssd her so much after she left
I m sure asad too :-)

Nd asad searched for her on fb...
Nccc...

Nc start..
Luking frwrd fgir next prt

Continue soon
Thanks for the pm



Haha congratulations for being the first commentor..but lemme assure you there is no competition 😆

And yup...kaneez is getting back to trouble her Jahanpana. And everyone missed her a lottt. Yup he stalked her on FB. :P

The next part will be up by tomorrow evening!

And thanks...m glad you liked it. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
That was an awesome update..
I did think something must have happened to her..
Finally Kaneez is back to irritate her Jahapanah..
Asad thinks about her too..
Do update soon.. Will be waiting!