FF: Kuch tum kaho kuch hum kahein.p11pg17

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Heres the index: Part 1- pg1, P2-pg2, p3-pg4, p4-pg5, p5-pg6, p6- pg9, p7- pg10, p8- pg12, p9- pg14, p10-pg 16, p11-pg 17

Hey, after reading all ur beautiful FF I want to start my own.. its not gonna be long at all.. let me know if I should continue and if u guyz like it k.. o and I don't know the education system in India so please forgive me,…

Kuch Tum Kaho Kuch Hum Kahein

Jai Walia- 26, handsome business guy, does not like all this flirting business and has never gone out with any girl, likes to be single and is waiting for that perfect girl to come in his life

Bani Dixit- 23, very very very beautiful and shy, just graduated from college and is now in search for a job, she is also waiting for her charming prince to come by and take her

Sahil Walia- 20, jai's youngest brother and very flirty

Rano Dixit- 20, Bani's youngest sister and best friend

Pia Walia- 24, Pushkar Walias wife and jais bhabie,

Pushkar walia- 25, younger then jai but fell in love with pia so got married before him..

Massi- 56, jais massi, very upset with jai and wants him to settle down already so that she can die in peace fulfilling her sisters dream.. looking for a girl for him and goes searching practically everyday, looks in his office everyday to find a girl..

Part 1

The scene starts with Massi doing Puja at walia mansion and Bani at her own house hoping that god listens to her prayer so that she can get a job and support Ranos bills,.. she was lucky that her dad had saved up for her college education so she didn't have to worry about working.. the money was enough for her and rano to live until she finishes college.. now that shes done she has to go job searching… Well we all know wat massi is praying for.. lolzz.. today is interview day at WGI so Massi is definitely going.. by the way massi is educated so she usually does 2 things, looks for a bahu and works with jai, pushkar and sahil at the office.. the more the better the earlier they get to go home…

Walia House

Jai: Massi you do remember today we have to look for a new Secretary for me since Mrs.Dutt passed away

Massi: yes jai.. I remembered, that's why im all ready to go…giving him a hopeful sneaky smile…

Everyone leaves for the big day today

Dixit House

Bani: Rano, im going, and get up its time for school, ur starting college in 2 months so u better get up and look for a good college for urself..

Rano: Di, let me sleep, mrs.Kakadh said we don't have to come to class today since shes not gonna be there herself, and my next class isn't until 12.. so plzz let me sleep.. and di, good luck.. I hope u get the job.. (giving her a smile and a peck on the cheek)

Bani: thanx, I hope so to.. (giving back a worried smile)

WGI

Jai: so far everyone seems very laid back.. this is gonna be a long day

Massi: don't woryy jai beta.. we will find someone good for this job

Bani:(taking a deep breath) May I come in sir

Jai: yes, come in.. (slowly looks up, sees a girl wearing a beautiful blue colored churi dar, with matching bangles) thinking shes hott and the song "bohut khubsoorat ho" is going on in his head..and just then the wind started blowing Banis hair making her look even more innocent and beutiful

Masi: wats your name beta

Bani: B Bani, maam.. my name is Bani Dixit… and heres my resume

Masi: (has a smirk on her face thinking my search has ended, just a couple of questions and I get 2 in 1) Beta how old are you and wat do you want to do..

Bani: I am 23 and I need a job because my parents passed away and I need to work to pay for my sisters education.. we are alone in this world,, (saying it a little sad and shyly since jai was there just staring at her mesmerized by her beuty)

Masi saw this and coughed to get jai out of his daze: jai beta wat do u think

Jai: after taking a deep breath: Masi wat ever u want, it's a yes from me, I think she is quite capable (hmm without even looking at her resume.. good jai.. abhi yeh haal hai toh baadh mein kya hoga…lolzz)

Massi: well bani I think ur very much capable for this job also, therefore u can start from today or if not then from tomm, o and u can call me massi

Jai looked at massi surprised because massi never lets employee call her massi, its maam…but he was happy massi hired bani because he just couldn't get enough of her beuty…

Bani: ji, erm, I would like to start from today if u don't mind massi ji…

Massi: no I don't mind at all.. let me show u the work u r to do..(pointing at jai desk) jai can u plzz show Bani around the office and the other employees first and then show her wat she can start on (Massi said this with a wicked smile)

Jai: ji massi, chalein Bani

Bani: ji, ji sir(lowering her gaze because she was shy on jai looking at her so intensely)

Bani was then introduced to Sahil and Pushkar… Sahil who was trying not to flirt seeing the eye massi was giving him and well Pushkar thought Bani looked very familiar, how, he did not know himself.. maybe she was one of Pia's friends so out of curiosity pushkar asked

Pushkar: Bani r u from Mt Abu

Bani: ji sir I am, I just came her a couple of days ago.. y sir

Pushkar: do u know Pia Singh now Pia Walia

Bani: Yes sir I do, shes my best friend from Mt Abu… sir how do u know her

Pushkar: there u go, that's y u look so familiar, pia is my wife, she showed me pictures of her close friends and family from Mt. Abu

Bani: really, sir if u don't mind can I ask where she is, I would like to see her after work

Pushkar: if u want I can call her here

Bani: that would be great, thank u soo much..

Pushkar: don't worry about it, plus shell be happy to see u here, and u don't have to call me sir u can call pushkar

Bani: ok

All this while jai was just in a daze thinking wat just happened.. Massi who was listening was thinking good pia janti hai Bani ko,, no my work is even more easy… sahil whom after seeing his brother jais reaction to every Bani action understood everything and got why massi was holding him back from flirting with Bani…

Preview: Massi asks Bani to come to their house after work since pia left her cell home and went shopping, this way she can also catch up on her old friendship, and bring her little sister rano to see pia as well…

Plzzz let me know wat u think.. If it seems like I copied some stuff from ur FF's then forgive me.. and if u have any ideas let me know.. this is my first FF so plzz don't run after me with ur belans if I suck.. lolzz.. I know a lot of u love to use ur belans a lot.. lolzz.. if its boring let me know

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*Guli* thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Masi!!!!!😆 she cracks me up!!!😆 she got her bahu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........

awesome job!!!!!!!!.......

loving it plz cont soon!!

as for ideas... you just write what u think is write!!!😉 cuz if i give you ideas... thats a long list! cuz my mind never stops working!
Edited by *Guli* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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reserved ****
seems lovely so far
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Lovely start hun! 👏
Pia is Jai's Bhabi from the start itself?! That's gr8!! 😃 😃
Maasi goes to the office too? Cool! 😉
Jai is left speechless at first sight! 😉
Haila Maasi's soo wicked 2 in 1 for Jai! 😆 😆
But why Bani so shy??
Do continue soon...

V.
Edited by Vedo - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx everyone, il probably update part 2 by tonight.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome job!! 😃 ..seems to be a JB story!! 😳 👏 ..continue soon!!
mayurmaaneet thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah it is, with massi being very slick in playing match maker 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start dear 👏
first part seems very interesting cant wait for the next part
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start...loved the intro...lol...jai is so struck with banis beauty...lol...🤣....saach mein...abhi se yeh haal hai toh baad mein kya hoga...😉...omg...massi is too much...match making at the office...'you can call me massi'...yeah...that was subtle...😈😈😈...we are all with you massi...cant wiat for next update

JAZ

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Posted: 18 years ago
#10
absolutely amazing
luved de start,jai already smitten by bani n masi de matchmaker,perfect.
continue soon

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