MG FF || HIS UNBREAKABLE VOW #3 || ON HOLD - NOTE PG154 || - Page 16

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TEASER

Maan painfully looked at her sitting on the bed, staring at the ground. Her eyes were swollen, her face pale with all the pain she had endured in the past one week. The one week that passed by was living hell for him, no matter how much he tried to talk to her or even go near her, he could see the fear in her eyes. She would simply walk away without a word, leaving him all the more guiltier. Maan sat on the far edge of the bed looking at her; the tears were still streaming down her eyes. All he wanted to do was reach his hand out to her and wipe those tears away.



Geet, please listen to me once.! Maan said in a painful voice. Though she didn't move but her tears became even more prominent as she heard his voice. Saying nothing Geet got off the bed and was about to walk away when he held her hand.

Not today Geet, please don't walk away. Do something, anything.! Talk to me, shout at me, slap me, punish be but do something. I can understand it's not easy for you but I can't take your silence anymore. Atleast listen to me once.! Maan pleaded, making Geet weaker.

I don't want to be anywhere near you. Let me go Maan. She said in a firm tone. His eyes closed in pain, but her words were clear, she didn't want to be near him. With a heavy heart, he loosened the grip on her hand, letting her go. Daadimaa's words rang in his ear.

Give her sometime bte, it's not easy for her. She had said when he worried seeing Geet all lost and silent. Her silence and lifelessness was killing him inside out. If time was what Geet needed, he would give it to her no matter how much he would suffer meanwhile but all he wanted was to talk to her, tell her the truth.

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Update coming up in the morning.!! Double updates..😳

Edited by ..AnushaGeet.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very sad one.. but i guess with the situation , its gonna be like this until the truth is out and things get in open...
cant wait for the double updates anu... 😳
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i think ye teaser past ka he ..i mean present me maaneet 3 years se seprate he .i think ye teaser k baad hi geet london gai hogi
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nice teaser dear
waiting for update
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painful teaser !!
but waiting
hope all go well with maneet ..
can't see them so broken
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i m back
painful teasers
will catch with previous updates soon
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😭 teaser

waiting for update
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teaser😭
will be waiting for the updates

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