Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132 - Page 9

enjoyed part one, nicely set up the story and characters. but yep, interesting twist, now i'm also wondering if it's dhruv that needs rescuing from sheesh mahal or akash 🤓

ASR is here... 😳 Dhruv and Aakash.. 😲 Hope Khushi will convince Aakash to call Arnav.. And what problem is Dhruv in now?

Seriously, I can no longer wait to know how it is going to go from here. Brilliant idea 😊
Very nice description of the business and Akash and Aman.
Love the fact that you thought of having Dhruv in the story and I love Arnav ❤️

quite intriguing start !!! loved it.. 😃

Crisp, intriguing, racy.. Very interesting Inspired. All the guys downloaded already with Aman and Mohan. Loved that busy business man.. Very vivid, lively.. Eager for the next IS.

seems that they got him
as in dhruv
his own dadi is doing all this
and for what money
pathetic some people are
seems dhurv is coming outta his drugged state
why else is he looking more alive and reactive to his surrounding
this dadi i tell ya
she is asking for trouble
dont tell me that malliks were trying to pull the wool over raizadas
well they are gonna pay for it
khushi is more astute than these peeps thought
she is good in observing
of course she believed them when they said he had an accident
when nothing could be further than the truth
hope she can help out dhruv
lets see shall we

Wow just read the prologue, this promises to be a terrific read.
Thanks for the poem., it is beautiful.

Looking forward to catching up with the rest of the story.