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hey guys to all those who don't know me this is kirti
i tried to write an os. this is first attempt plz read. hope u like it.
Not So Ordinary
"what is he waiting for?God knows when he'll propose me.i mean i wont say no.then why is not asking"saying this kiya was walking to and fro in her room.
suddenly she bumped into someone."ouch!kd, what r u doing here?and y did u come through window.my house has a door and mom is not at home now.so you can use that."
kd:"kiya relax.and iam used to window now plus i dont know the way from the main door to ur room."
kiya rolled her eyes."u r impossible.why did u come now?"
kd:"chicklet im planning to rob others house so thought of practising 'climbing' from here.nice idea right? obviously i came to meet my gf"
kiya:"really never seen ur gf before?"
kd:"actually i wanted to talk to u"
kiya:"talk about what?"
kd:"u know i was planning to propose u but i dont know how. so thought i'll ask u"
kiya(thaught):"wow now mr. mastermid is asking his own gf how he'll propose her.what more could i xpect from my stoneface"
kd:"kiya what r u thinking?"
kiya:"nothing"
Saying this she turned around and was about to go.but then kd held her hand and went on his knees.kiya turned back.
kd:"i never understood the feeling of being loved.nor i knew how to love someone unconditionally and do anything for her.before i fell 4 u i wanted to live but for my family,i wanted to be the best but to prove myself.but now i want to do it 4 u too,to make u proud.when u r with me i feel as if life is not difficult but beautiful and i enjoy living this beautiful life.and i want to live it forever.so miss kiya gujral will u let me live that life forever by marrying me?"
kiya was just staring at kd all this time and said"ye.."
kd:"NO"
kiya:"huh"
kd:"ha i mean its a bit too classy and ordinary. who says all this lecture while proposing"
kiya still couldn't register what happened just now.
kd:"actually we are not those filmy couple right?"
kiya:"right"she went and sat on the sofa.kd followed her.
kd:"then i thought what if there will be some separation of us and then our proposal.but then no chance of separation right?"
kiya was staring at him.she could go out of control any moment.
kd:"kiya say something na. what to do?btw whenever something happened between us for the first time was after a fight"
kiya:"and how is that?"
kd started playing with kiya's fingers:"remember our first dance"
kiya(a bit relaxed and smiling):"main sharabi, both of us were angry"
kd:"right and our first hug in the jungle"
kiya:"but i wasn't angry then"
kd:"well i was actually till before that"
kiya:"ya and the first time u took me in ur arms"
kd:"in washroom and our date"
kiya:"ended up in a fight"
kd:"phir toh fights hi tha"
kiya(laughing):"ya right and our first kiss too"
kd:"next ab ho jaaye kya?"he leaned towards kiya
kiya:"shutup kd"
kd:"u never understand my emotions".kd made a puppy face.
kiya:"ya right thats why im still ur gf"
kd:"fine and our proposal is also there in the list"
kiya:"yes our propo..proposal and how is that?"
kd:"ya u were not angry with me now"
kiya"ya i was angry with u now but.."kiya checked her finger and saw a ring in it.she looked at kd.
kd:"so how was our not so ordinary proposal"and he winked.
ok i dont know how it turned to. but do leave a comment even if feel its bad😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its awesome dear
a perfect gift for Kisha fans
funny, light and romantic
loved it
Keep writing


lots of love
Madhura
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was awesome yaar
beautifully written
KiSha are awesome as always
keep writing
Take care

Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
omg kirti
its awsome 👏
Kd ko sirf window ka raasta pata
And than their extraordinary proposal.
So wanted this kinda proposal for kisha but ...
loved it
keep writing more n more ..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kirti dear beautiful os👏

it was funny as well as romantic luved it❤️
kd ko kiya ke room mein sirf window se ana pasand hai🤣
& when kd sliped the ring in kiya's finger mujhe bhi jan na hai😆
keep writing dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Kirti.🤗
I Loved it dear.
It's awesome.
Keep writing.
Lots of love.



Edited by priya1101 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhuras_Rule

Its awesome dear
a perfect gift for Kisha fans
funny, light and romantic
loved it
Keep writing


lots of love
Madhura

thanks a lot madhura
glad you liked it
your comments mean a lot for me
i will write more
Edited by kitze - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdesire

That was awesome yaar

beautifully written
KiSha are awesome as always
keep writing
Take care

thanku so much
glad you liked it
will surely write more
thanku
Edited by kitze - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prince6495

omg kirti

its awsome 👏
Kd ko sirf window ka raasta pata
And than their extraordinary proposal.
So wanted this kinda proposal for kisha but ...
loved it
keep writing more n more ..😉

was waiting for ur comment
thank u so much
glad u liked it
poor kd door se aaya hi nahi😆
proposal i noe😭
will surely write more
Edited by kitze - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: viagomes

kirti dear beautiful os👏

it was funny as well as romantic luved it❤️
kd ko kiya ke room mein sirf window se ana pasand hai🤣
& when kd sliped the ring in kiya's finger mujhe bhi jan na hai😆
keep writing dear 😃

thanku so much

glad u liked it
kd window se aaye v also want that na😉
aur ring ka toh kd hi jaane
will write more

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