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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
wow! that is totally different from what i expected. waiting eagerly for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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different approach ...would love to see where it goes
cant wait...thanks for this new story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intresting start cont soon tanx for pm
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Interesting one this also like the frist i read that in one go must say it was nice
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Part-1

She walked in the building with two men in tow still in same clothes from morning.

It was 7:30 a.m. in the morning and the men behind her trying to stifle their yawn, sign of their incomplete sleep, but dare they complain, to get kicked in their butts.

They hid their eyes behind the sheds to save their burning eyes from harsh sunlight reflecting through the glass windows and kept walking still she stopped before their destination.

She threw the door open, and the man dozing in the corner on the floor dragging his knees closer gasped, jolted out of his slumber.

She stood on the threshold gauging the man from head to toe and then turned to the other men behind her. Her one eye gesture made them step back and she stepped in the room closing the door behind.

In the mean time the man had straightened up and now standing on his two feet. He looked confused seeing the girl before him. He didn't except them to send a woman for him.

Did they think that he can be tamed by a pretty girl when their men failed? He snorted, but nevertheless didn't forget to leer at the petite attractive thing before him.
**
She too didn't miss the suggestive glint in his eyes and the corner of her lips twitched in a faint smirk, before she took off her shades. She pushed them in one of her side pockets and slowly advanced towards the man.

He stood tall in his place not moving an inch holding his ground; his eyes had an inviting light. He just wished if this would have been his den then he wouldn't have wasted a second discovering what lay beneath those layers she had wore to cover her luscious body.
**
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(the song I was listening when I wrote this)

She stood before him keeping a little gap between her legs as him, looking into his eyes.

A mere second had passed before he felt the blow right where it hurts the most. She had dragged one of her knees up with the speed of lighting and it had made a painful contact with his phallus before he could save.

In the next moment he fell on his knees on the floor grabbing the place with both hands swearing loud,

BI*CH!

Her smirk only grew.

Unable to bear the shooting pain he started rolling on the floor still curled in a fatal position screaming in pain and cursing her at the same time.

She didn't mind rather she pressed her killer hill on his hands, guarding his member still and pushed it mercilessly making him scream some more, his eyes closed and scrunched in pain.

F*ck YOU!

He cursed and opened his eyes only to find her pointing a pistol on his head, but as his horrified gaze met his cold pair of almond orbs, they started trailing down his body, her hands following the track with the pistol.

His eyes too followed the slow movement of her hands and he gasped in terror as he found the gun pointed where he was already hurting terribly.

She released the lock and his eyes shot up only to meet hers and what he saw freeze his blood, it wasn't a just a threat.

He gulped; after all she is not the pretty petite girl as she looked like...
**

The sound of gun shot made the men standing outside jump in their places making them come out of their drowsiness at once.

And in the next moment the door, they were guarding flew open.

She came out tucking the gun in her jeans .

"He is ready to speak" was her one sentence information, before she started walking out, but she paused for a moment and without turning added "take him to a doctor when you are done." and she left.

The younger man among the two peeped in the room curiously only to find the guy sprawled on the floor writhing and rolling, painting a perfect picture of distress and pain. Blood oozing out from his thigh where the bullet had scratched his flesh little deep, the shot intentionally missed, inches away from his member.

He shook his head, well you cannot expect less when Khushi is in action and he grinned on his own thought before he slapped the other guy hard on his back who was still dozing and said loud near his ears "Time to wake up Abhay baby" and strode in the room in hurried steps before Abhay could repeat his action and hard him whimper and curse "NK you bast*rd."

(introducing NK)

NK's grin only widen as he crouched down beside the guy and said feigning sympathy feeling anything but, "Oh poor... poor James, aren't you my favorite, mate? So tell me how can I bear your pain? But what to do, she said not to take you to the doctor until you speak, so will you?"

The man only nodded furiously whimpering in pain, making him chuckle, when Abhay walked in the room and sat down on the only chair in the corner and said only one word, "Speak"

(introducing Abhay)

**

Arnav walked inside of Shantivan, only to stop by his elder sister, Anjali Jha, for him his DI.

"Chotey"

The stern call made him close his eyes fearing what he may face when he turned. Bracing himself for the painful interrogation session he turned to his right where his Di stood holding a platter in her hands, where a lamp still lit.

As soon his sheepish eye met with his Di's narrowed eyes, they darted towards the grandfather clock behind him and then back to him, questioning him without voicing it directly, where the heck were you whole night?

Arnav too checked his watch to find the time, 7:30 am and gulped before drawing sweet smile on his face as he launched himself to action of cooling a now fuming Di.

He took hurried step towards her and hugged her to his side and said in a cajoling voice, "Wo Di, you know how I am... he paused to check her face, which hadn't soften a little... didn't notice when the time flew while working and when I checked it was already 1 in the morning so thought if I come back home I will only disturb others sleep so I slept in my private penthouse in the hotel."

He again checked finishing his half true explanation and this time relaxed seeing her looking little convince.

But Anjali Jha nothing if not direct, and especially with her brothers, "Hope your late night hard work doesn't involve any girl... seeing Arnav opening his mouth to protest, she held her hand out for him to shut his mouth... I know you Chotey and know you very well to not see the lie you are feeding me, but I have no problem with your night escapades, till you come back home and I don't need to answer or rather lie to Dadi."

Arnav scratched his back averting his eyes from her sister, embarrassed being caught so easily.

Anjali couldn't help but smile at her little brother's red face. She took a pinch of sweet from the offering before placing the plate on nearby stool and handed him.

Arnav without a word gulped the sweet and then looked into his Di's smiling eyes and relaxed.

Anjali hooked her arm with his brother and started walking towards the stairs, which will lead them to their rooms upstairs.

"So who is this girl that you go to meet at night?" Anjali asked plainly.

Arnav's head shot to his side only to find her smirking smugly at him...

"Well not hard to guess that it is the same girl you are meeting for quite some time now. You will stay out on particular nights and morning you will return wearing the goofy smile and lost look on your face... she chuckled seeing her brother's bewildered expression... it doesn't happen with every girl , and not every day with ASR, of all people who will know this better than me."

The last words were spoken so softly and affectionately that Arnav's eyes stung. He gave her a watery smile before letting her know that she had guessed it right, "If everything goes well you will meet her soon."

The sun would envy the brightness on Anjali's face when she said overwhelmed "So finally my Chotey have found a girl for him... she gulped the lump... I was so looking forward for this day and I hope to meet this mystery girl who have made her place in Arnav Singh Raizada's heart, soon." With that she kissed his forehead and turned to go to the kitchen to bring his morning coffee not hearing the whisper that followed after her statement,

"Mystery girl... chuckle... indeed."
**

Hello,

Sir he will go to see the new site near Dwarka, around 10.30 in the morning before office. Only the driver will be there with him and a security guard.

Ok, good job. Any change let me know.

Sure Sir.
**


Not sure how would you guys react to Khushi's character, but I would only suggest to wait for the coming parts for more revelation🤔
Edited by Moumita_2014 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
i have yet to read an ff where khushi has a strong avatar like this. Its something I have always wanted in a female character . continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Well, that was an interesting Khushi!
Female Bond with an iron fist!
Should I say Modesty Blaise???
Arnav caught out by Anjali easily!
So somebody is after ASR!
Lovely update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Excellent part.
Khushi is indeed an unstopable force. Waiting to know more about her character.
Anjali id happy that arnav has fallen in love.
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Waiting how shocked A is going to be when he see's K inaction...😆
Love u'r K , not a one who cries buckets 😃
Edited by Snoowfall - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
awesome update. loving this khushi


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