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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thx for the pm. 

That sounds interesting. 
Ram and Priya falling at the first sight , and met bcoz of goons.  That's llovely.  Pls update the next part soon. 


thnx Malti di
hope u like the next one also
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shailST

nice update thanks for pm


thnk u very much
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zeenathsheikh8

Bdi badi baatein, Vadapav khatein?? yeh dialog tumne banaya hai kya??

nice update...


nope Ajaz Khan used it in Khatron ke khilaadi
so whi se liya
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Nice update 

Thanks fr pm dear 


thnx yaar Neel di
I ll update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rampriyarocks

Awesome update

Continue soon
Sorry for commenting late. Too busy


thnx Riddhs di
nd no need to say sorry
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jodude

continue soon,,😊


thnk you very much😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Waiting for the story to  unfold and for the next part. this is in teleghaphic mode. Loved it.



thnk u so so so much
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Nice preview pls continue soon


will update in a while 
so stay tuned
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Posted: 9 years ago

Finally Priya had to agree for Ram to drop her


Priya s narration:

Kitne ajeeb duniya hai yeh

the world knows THE RAM KAPOOR as an egoist ruthless entrepereneur

but yaha dekho he helped me

aur ek baar bhi aisa feel nhi karaya ki unhone mujhpar ehsaan kiya hai

kitne ajjeb hai yeh 

duniye inke baare mei itna ulta seedha sochti hai

phir bhi yeh kabhi apne aap ko defend nhi karte

so strange

mai hoti to pta nhi kya kar diya hota maine abhi tek media se


Ram s narration:

aaj peheli baar kisi ladki ko lift de rha hu

ajeeb lag rha hai


Their thoughts were broken by the ringing of Priya s moblie


Priya :haa maa


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.

kyaa 

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.

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ab kya karu mei

kya maa tum bhi

ohh god

acha mai kuch sochti hu

bye aur haa apna aur papa ka dhyaan rakhna


after cutting the call


Ram wanted to ask her that if she was in trouble

he wanted to tell her that he can each and everything possible to help her

but wait a sec

why is Ram doing that???

Ram was himself blank on why he had a sudden urge to help her out

this was the first time this was happening with him

He was concerned for Vikram Neha but never like this

Ram gathered all courage and hesistantly  asked her


Ram: kya app kisi problem

app chaahe to mai aapki madad kar sakta hu


Priya :nahi koi badi baath nhi hai


Ram was relieved that she was nt in ma jor problem

but still he was worried for her


Ram:par aap itni pareshaan sound kar rhi thi to I thought...


Priya was surprised she never expected a stranger whom she had met a few hours would be so concerned for her


Priya:woh actually maa papa ko urgently Delhi ke liye nikalne pada

to mere paas ghar ki chaabhi nhi hai

to mai yahi soch rhi thi ki mai aaj kha tehru


Ram:aap apne kisi dost ke ghar ruk jaaiye


Priya;mera koi dost nhi hai


Ram:koi bhi nhi


Priya:nhi kabhi waqt hi nhi milaa ki dost banaao

na mai kisi se dosti krna chaahti waqt ki kami ki vajah se'

aur na koi mujhse dosti krna chaahta tha kyuki mai kisi ko bhi waqt nhi de paati thi


then Something happened which left both of them surprised


Ram: will you be my friend??


Ram s narration:

kyu mujhe dukh huaa yeh jaankar ki uska koi dost nhi hai

kyu maine bina kuch soache samjhe dosti ka haath badhaaya uski taraf

yeh ladki THE RAM KAPOOR ke andar ke Ram ko bahaar laa rhi hai

isme kuch to aisa hai ki mere andar ka Ram bahhar aa rha hai


Priya s narration:

Peheli baar kisi ne meri taraf dosti ka haath badhaaya hai

jinhe mai abhi tak stranger keh rhi thi

wob ab mere dost hai

ajjeb hai yeh dosti

na waqt dekhti hai na jagah


Priya:haa


Ram:ok then

Hi Priya my name is Ram

Ram Kapoor


PRiya smiles and replies


Priya:Hi Mr Kapoor 

my name is Priya

Priya Sharma


Ram:Miss Sharma


Priya:please Miss Sharma mat kahiye na

aisa lag rhai hai ki mai abhi office mai hu


Ram:exactly my point


Priya: matlab


Ram:matlab yeh ki 

mujhe bhi nhi pasand aaya when you called me Mr Kapoor


Priya:arre par


Ram:par kya

mera itna short sa cute sa pyaara sa naam hai Ram

Ram bulaav mujhe


Priya starts laughing 


Ram feels a sense of contentment seeing her laugh


PRiya(still laughing):aap bilkul aise baol rhe hai

jaise ek chotta baby bolta hai

aap bahut cute lag rhe the


Ram s narration:

ajjeb hai yaar

isko haste dekh aisa lag rha hai ki maine Mt Everest se uche pahaad ko bhi climb kar liya

jo bhi ho yeh haste huee badi pyaari lagti hai

aur cute

mujhe Neha ne najaane kitni baar cute kaha hai 

lekin Priya ke muh se sunkar lag rha hai

ki mai scah mei bahut cute hu



Priya s narration:

Mr Kapoor

she immidieatly corrected her self

nhi Ram

kitne ajeeb hai 

duniya ke saamne itne sophesticated business man bankar ghumte rehete hai

aur yeha dekho andar se bilkul bache hai

kitna alag hai Ram  aur THE RAM KAPOOR


Suddenly it started raining


Ram(exited like a five year old who s surpriesed):wow baarish 


Ram opens the car window and takes his hand out to feel the drops


He then turns towards Priya


Ram:Priya tumhe nhi baarish pasand


PRiya:nah bilkul nhi 

kitna ganda ho jaata sab kuch baarish ke baad

sab taraf keechad keechad aur keechad

eww


Ram:baarish sab ganda nhi

sab saaf aur sundar karke jaati hai

tum baarish ke jaadoo ko jaanti hi nhi ho


Priya s narration:

Ram

koan hai yeh insaan

mujhe jab lagta hai ki mai inko samjh gayi hu

tabhi inka ek aur roop mere saamne aa jaata hai

abhi tek ek bache jaise exite ho rhe the 

aur ab dekho

Ram bilkul ek puzzle jaise hai

par mei iss puzzle ko solve karke rahungi


Priya:Bin mausam baarish humesha bura sandesha hi laati hai


As on cue Ram said


Ram:"Nahin bin mausam baarish kabhi kabhi kuch dekar bhi jaati hai


Ram:ek baar apna haath baarish mei daalkar dekho

tum samajh jaaogi ki mai kya keh rha hu


Priya slides the window down

and taked her hand out


Ram:mazza aa rha hai na


Priya:bahuth  

aap ne sach kaha tha 

there s a magic


Ram:Priya


Priya:ji


Ram:if you dont mind tum aaj mere ghar ruk jaao


Priya:arre aap kyu takleef le rhe hai

I ll manage


Ram:tumne mujhe abhi apna dost kaha na

to


Priya:but 

aapke family members mere baare mei kya sochenge


Ram:tum uski fikkar mat karo

mere ghar par koi nhi hai

tum mujhpar trust to krti ho na


Priya:haa 


Ram::to bas tum aa rhi ho


Priya:aap kha maanenge 

as you say


Ram:thats like my good girl 


TBC...


Hope you all enjoyed this one also

waiting for your comments


Anjaani






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Posted: 9 years ago
interesting update,,,😊

is story me to ram and priya's POV exchange ho gaya... nice...😃

continue soon...😊