SanDhir FF: Of Broken Hearts (Chapter 20 (LAST) on Page 81)

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: frenzyy
Amazing! Read all the parts in one go.. Sameer is still in the picture - but randhir will take car of him.. Randhir is so soft and caring!

Yes he's still in the picture. Thanks! <3

Originally posted by: Piya1702
My Love for this FF deepens with each n every part...
but in this chapter,what i loved was the fact that u led SanDhir stick to morals...i love u for it!!!😊

Aww you are so sweet! I'm so glad you loved that! Idk about morals but it didn't make sense for them to consummate just because she begged for it. 😆 Thank you!

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: barauni
The last line, magnet n love... awesome!
Update update jaldiii!
Really cant wait!!!
Loved ur way with words too!

Love,
Nikitha.

Thank you so much Nikitha! Glad you like it! Will update soon!

Originally posted by: twni
read all the part love it very much

Thanks!

Originally posted by: namya
Superb!!!!!!
Awesome update
Update soon

Thank you!

Originally posted by: mjhtmayur
Ohh god 4 ,5 and 6 already updated ???? Read a together... now that was some awesome piece of work !!!!!!! Woohoo.. keep updating like this

Thank you so much! Yes I am updating really fast. Will try to keep the pace consistent haha.

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Saffi Sanam

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#83

Originally posted by: BrunoMars
OhwMy! This is a pleasant turn of events, commenting first on the thrird chapter and when receiving your PM -the next day- we're already at chapter 6! That's some speed you have there, it's poof! Updated. Poof! Poof!
Okejj, so: I absolutely luh your work. It's so well written the way everything is connected to something else, there are twists to every chapter, but not to keep the story excited -for one, because it simply doesn't need twists to be enjoyable to read, it was is, the way it is-, the twists actually make sense. Like Sanyukta trying to Randhir to sleep with her, because she wants him to be the first. It's has the logical touch to it, which I absolutely love and reflects that you actually thought this all through. Probably one of the best stories around.

Thank you so much! Yeah I was really in the mood to write yesterday - in fact, that's all I've been wanting to do even while I've been sleeping, but my writing tends to get choppy if I write when I'm dead tired. I'm so glad you're enjoying it! You're flattering me a lot right now haha. Thanks for that! I get motivated to write more when that happens. You're amazing! 😳

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dazzzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Wow you wrote 6 chapters within a day. Amazing. I'm really loving this ff. Read all parts in a go.
Please update soon.

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Irij55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Wow Awosame loved it

Edited by azina - 11 years ago

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: dazzzler
Wow you wrote 6 chapters within a day. Amazing. I'm really loving this ff. Read all parts in a go.
Please update soon.

Haha yes, I did! Thank you! <3

Originally posted by: azina
Wow Awosame loved it

Thanks!

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Chapter 7

**THIS CHAPTER IS RATED MATURE, IT HAS VERY DESCRIPTIVE SEXUAL SITUATIONS, READ AT YOUR OWN DISCRETION**

They spent the next few hours studying together, and took breaks to quiz each other, making sure the other one knew the information inside out. Randhir couldn't believe that his and Sanyukta's relationship had reached this stage. Never in his most blessed dreams could he have imagined that he and Sanyukta would study together and help each other out. For the first time, they were not against each other.

"I don't want to go Randhir," Sanyukta said with a pout when they mutually decided that it was time for bed.

Randhir smirked, sitting on the bed beside Sanyukta. "You don't have to."

She took his hand in hers and looked into his eyes where only honesty and dedication lingered. "Randhir, I don't ever want to go."

Randhir squeezed her hand with his and told her, meaning it with every bit of his soul, "You won't ever have to."

"But... what if we can't think of anything Randhir?" she asked him, fear written all over her eyes.

Randhir pulled Sanyukta close to him and kissed the top of her head. "We'll think of something Sanyukta. You won't have to marry that pig - I won't let you."

Sanyukta clutched the back of his shirt tightly with her fingers and looked into Randhir's eyes once again. "Randhir, I denied that I had any feelings for you until this year, but I knew I felt strongly attracted to you last year itself. I never told you and I didn't stop creating problems for you because I just wanted an excuse to be near you," she confessed.

Randhir smiled and held onto Sanyukta's shoulders, pulling her back. He stroked her cheek, making her tremble slightly.

Sanyukta confessed something Randhir had only guessed at. Her confession seemed so genuine and heartfelt too. He brought his face down and pecked her lips softly before pulling back and looking into her eyes once again. He didn't know why he cared about this girl so much, but he did.

Sanyukta slowly caressed his chest, making her way to the buttons of his shirt. She started to unbuttoning it one by one. After each one, she would place a kiss on the skin that she had just revealed. Randhir's heart started to increase the pace at which it was beating as she got lower and lower. Once she unbuttoned the last one, she kissed the skin right above his jeans, causing beads of sweat to form on his forehead.

"Sanyukta," he managed to get out, "What are you doing?"

He couldn't deny that he liked it, and she seemed to know that too as a smirk formed on her lips as she climbed onto his lap and kissed his lips with full force, pushing him flat on the bed. Randhir, taken aback, responded with equal force, savouring the taste of her soft lips against his own. They both opened their mouths right away to deepen the kiss, allowing their tongues to wrestle in each others mouths. Randhir could feel his body heat up as Sanyukta continued to kiss him with passion. What stamina, he thought to himself in awe.

Randhir caressed the top of her thigh and slowly made his way up her butt and under her kurta where his fingers made contact with her bare skin. He could feel Sanyukta shiver with pleasure on top of him. Randhir removed his hand from under her kurta and moved her hair to the side so he could unzip it from outside. With Sanyukta still on top of him, he looked into her eyes for a sign of hesitation, but all she did was smile at him, silently urging him to continue.

Randhir unzipped her kurta and turned them around so Sanyukta was at the bottom. He kissed her lips passionately again before planting kisses down her jaw, down her neck, on her collarbone, and on the sleeve of her kurta. He slowly moved the sleeve down so he could kiss her shoulder and the top of her arm. He could hear Sanyukta's breathing quicken, and his breathing was getting heavier too. Randhir kissed the crook of her neck once more, this time sucking on it causing Sanyukta to moan. She buried her hands into his hair. He loved it when she did that. Removing his head from her neck, he kissed her on the lips once again and she reciprocated with equal enthusiasm.

Randhir gently turned Sanyukta over on her back so he could see the opening of her kurta which revealed a fair bit of skin. Randhir started to plant kisses on her back, unclasping her bra in the process. He made sure to cover every inch of it, not wanting to miss anything. Once he was done, Sanyukta turned herself over and sat up, her kurta falling forward slightly. Randhir took hold of it and held it in place before it could reveal anything, making Sanyukta giggle.

"Randhir," she said with a smile, "I love you." Then she flung herself forward at him and kissed him feverishly once again, sliding his shirt off his shoulders in the process.

She pushed him back on the bed and purposefully sat on a spot that would make him feel the most desire. Her fingers brushed the skin of his navel gently before unbuckling his belt. Sanyukta pulled up the bottom of her kurta and removed it from over her head, causing Randhir to gasp. Sanyukta always surprised him, and today was no exception. Her bra fell loosely off her chest before she removed it herself, exposing herself to Randhir.

If Randhir thought that his heart was beating fast earlier, he was mistaken - his whole body was sweating by now, filled with desire. Before Sanyukta could do anything else, he turned the both of them around and grabbed her arms, holding them in place at either side of her body. Randhir started to attack the top of her chest with kisses before setting her hands free. Sanyukta moaned, her hands finding their way to Randhir's hair again as he kissed the soft skin above her breasts. Randhir allowed his fingers to caress them softly, his thumb brushing over her nipple, hardening it. His mouth kissed the skin around her nipple before his lips reached the nipple itself. Once he did, he gently sucked, flicking his tongue over it before he made his way to the next one. Sanyukta completely removed his belt while he buried his face in her breasts.

Sanyukta arched her back, digging her nails into his neck, urging him on even more as he showered her with kisses down to her navel. His fingers ran up the length of her leg and between, stroking her over the already moist cloth that lingered there. He could feel her throbbing down there. His gesture elicited a subtle moan from Sanyukta as she arched her back and gripped his bedsheets tightly. Randhir moved up her body once again until he reached her mouth. He kissed it with the utmost desire as she dug her nails into his back, turning Randhir on more than he thought he could ever be turned on.

"You are so hot," he whispered against her mouth, before proceeding to kiss her again.

Taking deep breaths, she turned them around so Randhir was lying on his back. Sanyukta trailed kisses down his tummy and allowed her hand to brush over the hard area of his pants, causing Randhir to moan in response. He closed his eyes as Sanyukta unzipped his jeans and rubbed him over his boxers. She started to plant gentle kisses over it, causing it to get even harder. "Sanyukta, don't do this to me," he groaned out loud, knowing that this was not going to get anywhere tonight.

But Sanyukta still persisted, pulling down his boxers and finishing off what she started. Once she was done and Randhir achieved his state of bliss, she climbed back into his arms with a blanket in tow and kissed the skin on his chest. "I love you Randhir," she told him, smiling into his chest. Randhir held her tightly against him and closed his eyes, a bright glow on both of their skin. "I love you too Sanyukta."

He adjusted the blanket over their bodies and they both fell into a very peaceful slumber.

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How was it? I don't write these scenes very often. Do leave your thoughts below. 😳

Edited by ilovepyaar - 11 years ago

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Kri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

SaffiDi! Oh my goshhh! I think this chapter made me fall in love with your FF even more!

I love the way you just flow from transitions and thoughts in your writing...

Now, you say of broken hearts... I have a bad feeling that this is going to end in her marrying Samir. Or she is going to sit with him and later Randhir won't be at the wedding or something... I don't know. It's scary...

Safffiii!!!! Update SOOON! WE'RE ADDICTED TO THIS!

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Saffi Sanam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: kri1
SaffiDi! Oh my goshhh! I think this chapter made me fall in love with your FF even more!

I love the way you just flow from transitions and thoughts in your writing...

Now, you say of broken hearts... I have a bad feeling that this is going to end in her marrying Samir. Or she is going to sit with him and later Randhir won't be at the wedding or something... I don't know. It's scary...

Safffiii!!!! Update SOOON! WE'RE ADDICTED TO THIS!

Aww that's so sweet of you! I was worried about your reaction to be honest haha! 😳 Were they too fast? It was necessary for the story to move forward because there will be a separation for sure, and if they were somewhat intimate physically as well as emotionally, it would have just made it seem like it mattered more (or at least in my perspective). Thank you so much! You're addicted to this and I'm addicted to your reviews! 😳

Edited by ilovepyaar - 11 years ago

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Kri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

Aww that's so sweet of you! I was worried about your reaction to be honest haha! 😳 Were they too fast? It was necessary for the story to move forward because there will be a separation for sure, and if they were somewhat intimate physically as well as emotionally, it would have just made it seem like it mattered more (or at least in my perspective). Thank you so much! You're addicted to this and I'm addicted to your reviews! 😳

Well, I mean, this is practical. I know Sanyukta wanted it anyways... and I guess guys can't really stop themselves. 😆 Lol, I realized that it was probably necessary for their relationship and to give importance to the chapters ahead (give importance that they need each other and they need to salvage their relationship). I can't wait for Chapter 8... I am scared but on the edge of my seat!

I know I didn't say it because it was totally implied... but that was extremely ... hot? 😳 There is not even a right word for it...