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Chapter 4

The sunlight poured into the library through the window, waking Randhir up first. Looking down at the beautiful girl on top of him, he smiled, remembering the events of last night. Picking up his cellphone, he glanced at the time - it was 7:15 AM.

"Sanyukta," Randhir said, stroking her hair gently. "Wake up. We have to be in class in less than 45 minutes.

At this Sanyukta shot up and rubbed her eyes. She got off Randhir and stood up, holding his shirt in her hands. Stretching his arms, Randhir stood up too.

"Good morning beautiful," he whispered, kissing her forehead.

Sanyukta smiled at him and held out his shirt for him to take. "Good morning sexy," she said, giggling.

Grinning, Randhir took the shirt from her and put it on. "This is the best morning ever," he told her honestly, grabbing her waist and pulling her close to him, just like he did last night.

"Randhir, my breath stinks, it's early in the morning - not right now!" Sanyukta said adamantly.

"I don't care," he told her, bending down to capture her lips with his. She kissed him back with hesitation, but eventually gave in and allowed him to deepen the kiss.

"Mmm," he muttered against her lips. "Let's study together tonight."

Sanyukta gently pushed him back. "No," she said firmly. "Randhir we have exams in two weeks! And you know if we study together, we won't get any studying done."

"Fine," he sighed, frowning.

"Anyways we have to go and get ready for class Randhir," she told him, kissing his cheek.

Then they both walked out of the library together before parting ways to go to their respective dormitories to get ready for class.

In PKC's class, they both stole glances at each other from opposite sides of the room instead of focusing on the material. Randhir knew he might have to pay for it in the form of his grades, but he didn't care - he still knew he would do well regardless of how much he paid attention, and he knew Sanyukta would too. She was a very bright girl.

After class, Randhir was sitting in an empty classroom with his head in his books, trying hard to focus on the material in front of him when Vidushi entered the room.

"Oh," she said dryly, noticing Randhir in the room. "You're here."

Randhir rolled his eyes and returned his attention to his textbook without replying to her. Vidushi sat beside him and looked over his shoulder at the textbook.

"Randhir," Vidushi started, "I need help. I need to be in the top 10 for the job I want Randhir - you know I'm poor and my family is counting on me."

Randhir slammed his textbook shut, and was about to get up and leave, not able to tolerate Vidushi's nonsense, when she grabbed his arm.

"Please Randhir, hear me out. I have something to tell you about Sanyukta too," she requested calmly.

Randhir looked at Vidushi with an expression of disbelief. "What do you want Vidushi?"

"I saw Sanyukta and Parth together," she said simply, looking like she pitied him.

Randhir felt annoyed with Vidushi's involvement in Sanyukta's life. "So?" he asked her.

"So they were really close."

Randhir felt the colour drain from his body when she said that - it wasn't that he didn't trust Sanyukta... he just didn't trust Parth.

"What do you mean?" Randhir asked, feeling the urge to know more.

"I mean they were close."

"How close?"

Vidushi moved her face closer to him, a few inches away from his face. "This close," she whispered, before moving back.

Randhir was going to snap at Vidushi and tell her to stop wasting his time when he noticed Sanyukta standing in the doorway with tears in her eyes.

"What the -" he said, "This is unbelievable."

He grabbed his book and ran out of the room after Sanyukta.

"Sanyukta why are you crying?" Randhir asked her, grabbing her arm to stop her.

"Randhir, Vidushi? You told me you could find sexier girls than me to kiss, so you choose Vidushi?" she asked, her eyes bulging with anger.

Randhir's eyes widened. "Are you crazy?" he asked her, grabbing her shoulders, trying to bring her back to her senses. "Sanyukta are you out of your mind?"

Before he could bring himself to say anything else, she pushed his hands off her shoulders and ran away.

Great
. Sanyukta doubted him over Vidushi. He couldn't stand Vidushi. One glance of her would put him off, and Sanyukta didn't have that much faith in him.

A few hours later, Randhir received a text from Sanyukta which said that she was coming to his room to meet him. Randhir bolted to his room right away to catch her there.

As fourth years, they were given single rooms. Randhir was grateful that he didn't have to share with Jiggy and Parth anymore because those two boys had to be the most annoying people he had the unfortunate pleasure of meeting.

Sanyukta was already standing outside his room as he approached. He quietly unlocked his room, allowing her in and locked the door behind her. Upon turning around, he realized that she was in tears.

"I'm sorry Randhir," she croaked, turning her face away from him.

Randhir took a deep breath and held on to her shoulder reassuringly. "Sanyukta, I can't see you cry - please don't," he told her warmly. "I'm not mad at you. I wish you trusted me right away and knew that I would never do that, but I don't blame you... you've only ever known the egoistic, chauvinistic Randhir Singh Shekhawat."

When she turned around her eyes were red and puffy, a state that Randhir didn't enjoy seeing her in. "Come on," he told her softly, wiping her tears with his thumbs. "Don't cry."

She cried even more. Randhir took her in his arms and held on to her tightly as she continued to cry. "If I ask you for something, will you give it to me Randhir, without asking me any questions?" she asked him through tears.

Randhir felt his heart start to beat faster, worried about what it was that she would ask him. But nevertheless, he knew that he would do anything for her happiness. "If it makes you happy, then I'll do anything Sanyukta - just ask and see," he told her as he rubbed her back affectionately.

"Make love to me Randhir."
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Oh my god...
U can't be serious...
U wrote all of it in a day...
It's absolutely brilliant ...I just can't believe it..
I LOVED IT...
Sry couldn't unres earlier...
But it was awesome...
Update ASAP...

Love
Ayesha...
Edited by Craziness123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Holy Crap! I just read all 4 chapters... the promo and beginning...

all within an hour. I LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT,...

Oh my gosh... the last sentence. That just made things crazy... PLEASE PM AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!

Another thing, on the next chapter, I know Sanyu says no questions. But if it doesn't change the plot, can you include Randhir being a little more responsible. I don't know. I mean, on other FFs... they just do it without thinking... I hope we all don't wish that for them, I mean, we want them to do it, but I hope Randhir just says something like are you sure... or make him think about her and the future. And then she can say yes... I hope you don't take this last comment in a wrong way. I just felt like it would just fit the development of Randhir if you include that part... Again, only if you feel that it is right and flows in your FF... And please please don't take it in a wrong way...
Your writing captivates all of us because it just flows so well and you depict the emotions so well!

ALL THE BEST AND CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE REST...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks, will do!
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Originally posted by: kri1

Holy Crap! I just read all 4 chapters... the promo and beginning...

all within an hour. I LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT,...

Oh my gosh... the last sentence. That just made things crazy... PLEASE PM AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!

Another thing, on the next chapter, I know Sanyu says no questions. But if it doesn't change the plot, can you include Randhir being a little more responsible. I don't know. I mean, on other FFs... they just do it without thinking... I hope we all don't wish that for them, I mean, we want them to do it, but I hope Randhir just says something like are you sure... or make him think about her and the future. And then she can say yes... I hope you don't take this last comment in a wrong way. I just felt like it would just fit the development of Randhir if you include that part... Again, only if you feel that it is right and flows in your FF... And please please don't take it in a wrong way...
Your writing captivates all of us because it just flows so well and you depict the emotions so well!

ALL THE BEST AND CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE REST...



Hey, thank you so much! All I can say is to just wait and watch. To reassure you though, I'll let you know that my stories are typically not predictable. 😛

I promise you though it wouldn't go the way you're expecting it to go because I've been building up Randhir's concern for Sanyukta over the last four chapters. I wouldn't let all of that go down the drain just for them to sleep with each other.

I would never take it the wrong way. Thanks once again, the next part is almost complete! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter Five

Randhir stared at her, a shocked expression on his face. "Sanyukta, are you okay?" he asked, wondering where her wanting to sleep with him came from.

He held on to her shoulders and looked her in the eye. "We'll talk about this when your emotional state is normal Sanyukta," he told her, wiping her tears with his fingers once again.

She shook his head and grabbed his shirt. "No Randhir, you don't understand. Please," she cried, her voice dropping to a whisper. "Please."

Randhir could sense that something was wrong. This was not the Sanyukta Agarwal he knew. This was not the girl who stood up for herself. This Sanyukta Agarwal was an emotionally vulnerable one and he didn't know why she was this way.

"Listen Sanyukta, you have to tell me what's wrong," Randhir told her, embracing her once again and stroking her hair. "I can't bear to see you like this, you know that. Tell me what happened."

Sanyukta just pulled her body back and looked him straight in the eye. "Randhir, just sleep with me goddamit, I want to lose my virginity to you!" she yelled out of frustration.

Randhir grabbed her tightly and nearly shook her. Where the hell was all of this coming from? He was starting to get frustrated himself.

"Sanyukta you have your whole life to lose your virginity. Stop making decisions at the heat of the moment," he yelled before letting go of her. "I don't want you to regret anything later on."

She started to sob once again. "Randhir - why don't you understand? I won't regret this for a second - I would regret it if I didn't lose my virginity to you," she managed to yell out.

Randhir was starting to get frustrated. He took her hand and sat her down on his bed, before he dropped down to his knees on the ground in front of her. He had to make her understand.

"Sanyukta, you wouldn't have even thought about this before today... this isn't something a girl like you can think of easily. You're telling me to understand? I'm telling you to understand!" he told her as calmly as he could.

Sanyukta pursed her lips and wiped her own tears away. "So I'm not attractive enough for you," she concluded, getting up.

Randhir grabbed her arm and pulled her back down on the bed. "You're the most attractive girl at FITE," he told her. "In fact, in my eyes, you're the most attractive girl in the world. There's nobody I'd rather sleep with Sanyukta. There's nobody."

She aggressively pulled him towards her. "Then why won't you sleep with me? You say one thing Randhir, but you won't act on it!" she yelled, her eyes tearing up again.

"Sanyukta," Randhir argued, trying to keep his patience. "I will sleep with you in a few years from now, I'll sleep with you in months from now, heck I'd even sleep with you next week, but I need you to be sure of your decision Sanyukta. It can't be an impulsive decision. You hated my guts 24 hours ago - if last night never happened, then we wouldn't even be at this stage!"

Sanyukta just let go of him and got up from his bed again, furiously wiping her tears.

"I give up Randhir," she said calmly. "I guess we wouldn't work out because you wouldn't do one thing to keep me happy."

Randhir stood up and grabbed Sanyukta's arm. He walked over to her and turned her around gently. "Why are you so insecure? You're not the same Sanyukta I knew," he told her, placing a hand on her cheek.

She let her face lean in to his hand until her lips brushed the hard skin of his palms. She kissed it softly.

"Randhir," she said, removing her face from his hand and looking him straight in the eye. "I know this is hard for you to believe, but I'm not insecure. I'm still the same Sanyukta you know. I'm just in a bad situation."

"Why Sanyukta?" Randhir asked, concern etched deeply on his face. "What happened?"

She rested her head on his chest and held him tightly. "Just forget it Randhir," she told him, "I just want to spend tonight with you. We don't know when this night might come again."

Randhir looked at her confused. "Sanyukta, you're seriously telling me that there is nothing wrong with you right now?" he asked her, taking in her crestfallen face.

Sanyukta sighed and looked down at the ground. "Randhir, I understand you don't want to sleep with me until I'm ready, and I really respect that, but I'm sure that I can't be more ready. I would never regret it Randhir," she told him, looking into his eyes. "I mean it. But if you don't believe me, that's fine."

Randhir kissed her cheek lovingly. "I never told you this Sanyukta," he said, pausing for a moment, his heart starting to beat erratically, "But I love you Sanyukta."

He could see Sanyukta's eyes brightening in front of him as he said the three words. "Randhir," she whispered, hugging him tightly, "I love you too."

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I love writing this and love reading your feedback! I'm shocked to see I've written five whole chapters in the span of less than 24 hours! 😆 You guys motivate me to write faster! Thank you! ❤️ Please do leave your thoughts, predictions, and anything else you wish to share! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Waiting for you to unres. 😆
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awsm😛luvd it❤️update soon
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Originally posted by: meenu1613

awsm😛luvd it❤️update soon



Thank you! 😊
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this ff is super awsome...
i love it...
pls continue soon

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