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'the fluster of her cheeks. He could feel sweat against the palms of his hands,'
''causing her to breathe a lot faster'
-Flustered? Check
-Sweaty palms? *looks at her mouse* Check
-Breathing fast? Check
-Don't forget the heartbeat with extreme speed.
These 3 chapters could have been my death. I mean those symptoms seem pretty serious when you're actually reading something. Just reading. I'm sure I'll get a heart attack when continuing to read this story, but I guess it's worth it.
It's really good. I was so lost and got up in the heat of the moment *sighs*
When you wrote their heart raced, mine was too. When you wrote sweaty palms, mine were too. When I read breathing fast, I was sighing like crazy. It's sooo goood. Seriously from chapter 1 to this one, there has been this vibe to the story. When I start reading the chapters I immediately get into the story and have the feel it has to it. I'm not really explaining this well, but it's kinda late and my brain just got damaged by overflow of smexiness, so exsqueeze my french.
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