OS:No Words ......Anjaani LAST PART Pg 15 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Awesome os ram ko hoga love at 1st site with priya hayeee n pls continue soon


thnx Dhristi di
will update as the writer updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: jodude

nice start...
love at first sight!!! interesting😊😛😉
continue soon...😊


thnk u very much!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

Interesting start😊
Love raya's intro!!!
Continue soon and thanks 4 pm!!!


thnx yaar Pia di
I ll update as the writer updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

Good intro of characters
so Ram has fallen in first meet with Priya
continue soon thanx for the pm


Even I think Ram has fallen for her
now lets see
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: akilagoud2

superb os
continue soon
nxt time pm me


will continue sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

short and sweet

Thanks for the pm


thnx yaar Neel id
the writer can only try big updates but cant promise
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: zeenathsheikh8

Cool intro, update soon...😊


thnk u Zeenath di
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: anupam_dil

nice start😛

thanks for pm
continue soon


thnk u so so much Veena di
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Priya s Narration:


God m again late

why is this CEO staring at time

does he stare the one s who are late

He s cute

Priya stop it

you are here for a meeting

not for calling MR CEO cute

so just concentrate


Vikram :Now Ms Sharma

so shall we begin


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After the meeting


Vikram :see the meeting went so smoothly

and you were so scraed


Ram :yupzz

but their CEO

cant she be puntual

you know what she was late by a minute

I wonder how she became the CEO


Vikram: wait a sec

THE RAM KAPOOR talking about a girl

thats strange

so do you feel something special about her

tell me buddy

tu bole to baath aage badhaau


Ram:no need

it was just that I noticed


Vikram: ya ya noticed

THE RAM KAPOOR just notices the girl

not talks about her

kuch to gadbad hai


Ram:will you stop it or..


Vikram:Or or what

what will do you??


Ram:remember day before yesterday you had lied to Neha that you had a urgent meeting

but you were with me at the club watching the T20 finals


Vikram :yaar mai to mazaak kar rha tha

tune to seriously le liya


Ram:better now


Vikram :ok

will meet you tomorrow


Ram:yup

meet you tomorrow

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Ram s narration(driving towards home)


Had a tiring day today

but finally cracked the deal

Priya she has a good business sense

wait a sec did I just call her Priya

I dont call my colleagues or associates with their name except Vikram

leave it


Then Ram saw something unusual

some goons were running behind a girl


Ram s narration


I have seen that girl somewhere

wait a sec that girl s Priya

I need to save


Ram got down from his car towards the goons


Priya s narration:


Ohh god please help me these goons

woh koan hai jo yha aa rha hai

kuch saaf dikh nhi rha

yeh baarish uff


wait woh aadmi yhi aa rha hai

kahi woh bhi in goons ke saath to nhi mila hai

ab mai kya karungi


arre yeh to MR CEO hai

yeh yha kya kar rhe hai'

kahi meri madat to karne nhi aa rha hai


Ram came towards


Priya understood that he has come to save her so she just hides herself behind Ram

Ram also didnt understand that why he came out for HER

and Priya was blank about why she trusted him

and what made her believe that he has come for HER


Ram :himmat kaise hui ek ladki ke saath badtameezi krne ki


Goon1: kyu lagti hai woh teri

biwi hai girlfriend hai


Ram: tujhe agar isse meri biwi samajhna hai

to samajh

meri girl friend samjhana hai to samajh

par khabardaar gar iski taraf aankh utha kar ke dekha to

mujhse bura koi nhi hoga


Goon2:badi badi baathe vadapaw khaate

kya karega


Ram:kya karunga bataata hu


Ram picked up his phone and dialed some no.


Ram:Hello commissioner


hearing the word commissioner

the goons ran off


Ram turned towards Priya


Ram :aap theek to hai na


Priya :haa

thank you


Ram :aap yha akele


Priya :actually meri car servicing mai gayi hai to

I thought ki ghar paidal chali jaaungi


Ram:ohh

If you dont mind mai aapko ghar chod du

waise bhi its getting late

aur shaayad baarish bhi ho jaaye


Priya:nahi aap kyu takleef le rhe hai

I ll manage


Ram:Please I insist


TO BE CONTINUED...




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Hope you all liked this one

waiting for your comments

Anjaani


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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Wonderful Update Dear
Very well written 👏
I love each & every lines😊

Specially i like this dialogue
"kuch to gadbad hai"
My Favorite ACP Sir's Dialogue
Thanks for Adding this dialogue

Continue soon
Thanks for the PM 😊

Edited by rosinagoor - 11 years ago

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