Eik Ladki Thi.......... - Page 2

Originally posted by: samdabmb

i will particapate in this..


mine is
This is abt a gurl who always puts on make up and does nothing…..

Ek ladki thi Deewani se
Make up peh woh marthi thi

Purse lekar…aina pakad kar
School se woh guzar te thi
Ladkoan ko patana tha shayad use
Magar fir bhi darti thi

Ek ladki thi Deewani se
Make up peh woh marti thi

Chehre par red blush laga kar
Aankhoen par black eye shadow laga kar
Na jane kyun itni sajti thi

Har girlfriends ke boyfriends ko patana chah thi thi
Magar kisi se baat nahi karti thi
Poora din face par make up laga kar
Class rooms mein aathi thi

Na teachers ko patha tha na students ko
Yeh itna make up kyun laga thi
Har lunch mein or khali time Mein
Uske eyes or face or lips ko sajati thi

Ek ladki thi Deewani se
Make up peh woh marti thi

Jab bhi koi use pooche
Itna make up who kyun laga ti thi
Haath bandkar aur aankhein chada kar
Who palat jathi thi

Bas hum sonch the rahe
Yeh make up woh itna kyun laga ti thi?

Aur sirf main keh pati
Jane woh humse kuch chupa ti thi

"make up khula ho ya ho band"
Sirf face par lagta tha"…

Kaise kahoan main oh yaara..
" yay ladki bhi bahut ajeeb thi"

hey not bad!! 👏 it was really hilarious….. 😆 😆

Originally posted by: Mrs. SalmanKhan

Cool topic!
but yeh mere baas ki baat nahien hei

but would luv to read all the entries /=

oh u don't worry….nobody's gonna cut ur marks for this…heheh j/k 😉 😉

ya well…I m no poet either….but jus got my witty side out…………I m sure u can do it too…..


nice one vinu……u r too funny………………… 😆 😆

Originally posted by: mamis

Cool topic... will try to participate, even though my hindi is not that great

thanks…….dont worry…nobody's perfect….

Btw…u can even do it in english too…..or ny other language for tht matter....

n..here's my own English version….(pathetic I know😳….but its only a try…😉)



Once there was a girl…who was very silly
she only had one pblm that she hated billy…(cat) 😉

day n night she wud go out, with this fear..
that no matter wat comes her way….she never meets a bear…

now this is another poem that I tried to make
but my bad luck it looks so fake.. 🤢

so I tell myself to stop it then…
before nybody thinks I ve gone insane… 😛

but u guys don't take any tensions
jus come up wid ur own funny versions…

no not of me…but of this girl..who is silly
god knows what she does…but she still hates billllly….(cat)

😉😉😉

😆 omg awesome yaar will try participating

Originally posted by: Star_on_earth

thanks…….dont worry…nobody's perfect….

Btw…u can even do it in english too…..or ny other language for tht matter....

n..here's my own English version….(pathetic I know😳….but its only a try…😉)



Once there was a girl…who was very silly
she only had one pblm that she hated billy…(cat) 😉

day n night she wud go out, with this fear..
that no matter wat comes her way….she never meets a bear…

now this is another poem that I tried to make
but my bad luck it looks so fake.. 🤢

so I tell myself to stop it then…
before nybody thinks I ve gone insane… 😛

but u guys don't take any tensions
jus come up wid ur own funny versions…

no not of me…but of this girl..who is silly
god knows what she does…but she still hates billllly….(cat)

😉😉😉

Oh ok, thanks... will give it a try😳

Will like to participate.... its really fun....and cool though...... 😊 😊

Awesome topic, I loved reading them all 😆 The english version was funny too 😆

Ek IF tha deewana sa,
Jo aaye
Is deewane ki chaal mein phas jaye
Kisi ko jaane na deh

I'm pretty bad but i thought i'd give it a shot.

wow cool post ya! 😆 😆 😆

hey not bad azzy... 👏 a gud attempt...
dont tell me u actually liked the english version?? i thought it was pathetic.... 😆

newyas i m thinking of making a punjabi version too...wat say??? 😉 😉

n u guys...wat r u waiting for??? c'mon....i wanna see the game goin.... 😳

Star! This is awesome!!! 😆 😆 I will give it a try