SwaRon OS: Breakfast Date.. Contd :P

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

amazingg update

tis was one hell of a update

in one word beautiful

swayam's feelings were beautifully penned

it made me grin wit him

all in all a very well formed pleasing update 😛

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

excellent girl!!
loved it:D

thanks for the pm.

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

It was really beautiful. i am so called that you continued it.

the small small beautiful scenes were touching.

and the OS was well penned 👏

loved it..

thanks for the PM

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Beautifuly penned Mihika. I read the both part together & its gave me a magical swaron-ish essence ehich we are missing in show for long. I loved the part of Swaron's individual monologue, sharon's embarrassment, swayam's hesitation, swayam's letter part.
lovely OS as always. Thanks for pm 😊
-Sreeparna

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

That was really nice :)

I'm happy you continued it

I loved how Swayam carried Sharon up to her room

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

before i comment i would like to thank palak and veronica for making you update this OS..😆
this update was pleasing to read..brilliantly written..
i have mentioned before how i am in love with your style and i would like to do it again - i LOVE your style
best thing about the OS - the characters are never out-of-character..(i hope i made sense)
anyhow it was bang on!
loved it..
thanks for the PM

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try2149

@try2149

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

its really amazing.

i liked first part n this one is ossom.

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fanista

@fanista

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

awww so awww soo cccwwweeettt iiittt wwwaasss

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sanchiswaron

@sanchiswaron

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Mihi its so sweet 😃

I'm waiting for your next work

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@Slayerkajal

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Read both parts ...its amazing..
Really really loved it ...
After long time some thing like this get to read...
It was so swaron-ish...
How much i love that time...really badly missing it..
But your os is such a bliss to read as i am so frustated with show...
Thanks for writing second part after so long time...as you hadn't write it than i had never get opportunity to read it...
Write more more and more...