TR ss part 50 page 103 updated 4/7 - Page 47

awesome update
taani's outbursrt part was amazing
i like vicky he was so nice
i dun have any confusion regarding
ur story
i love ur ss

wow awsm update

Awesome update

Awesome update
What's going to happen now that Taani is leaving
update soon

Finally I read it u know I was so damm dying to read this stry I read it on fb n I was like I hav not read it thn I try to search for it bit could not get it 😔 but finally I got it from fb so happy n it's awsm stry I luv how u show tht taani is strong atleast trying to be n how rey miss her taayam convo at wedding rey got to know abt taani from aashi swayam how madly he want to see her meet her n he did wht his hrt told him to do he went to meet taani aww taani care for rey but too normal behaver but luv it taarey argument over food rey coming in her collage n thn meet her Frd n thn rey performance taani missing his performance taarey convo rey leaving taani going behind him thr heart touching convo finally taarey together n haaye taani came to Mumbai with rey to be with him she change her project gang meeting taani taayam meet again taarey kiss haaye 😳 luv tht luv tht locker room prt luv taani ans to tht girls n aww in bwt taarey cute prt luv taani idea to gang taani getting her project done rey jealous from shivam swayam understating taarey aww thn taarey date but taani tried rey care for taani thr kisses 😳 swaron fight again hmm taayam bond mast hai tey telling taani everything n thn taani meeting rey dad luv thr convo thn taarey hug infornt of rey dad aww luv Rey's dad idea wch taani understood but not rey taani going back 😔 abhi tho mila hai taarey 😭 anyways again taarey fight before going hehehe poor swayam 🤣 hav to stop thm n listen thm also luv tht tattoo prt also rey is mad taani telling gang abt thr problem nice luv tht ss smiling n talking gud taarey aww thr will miss each other so much I hope something gud happen anyways I luv ur stry u r amazing writer n yeah I somewhr felt like it's actually d3 track I mean like PM is writing it awsm plzz it's a humble request do PM me plzz plzz update soon plzz

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Great!
Rey & Tani's sarcasm were amazing!
Continue soon!

Nice chapter

hi all of u, am thrilled about 2 things- my like button worked this time!
and someone apparently posted this on FB- thanks a lot whoever it is for liking this.

also thnaks a lot lot for the feedback- for those who liked it as its going thanks/ for those who r confused umm im too at times😊

sorry for the late update- i had 2 sad and 1 bad idea - ive chosen the bad one as i couldnt bring myself to makr TR sad.
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part 41
recap- taani left for her college

few days later --Reys place /Taanis apartment- like Suvreen guggals if anyone has watched it- both on the mobile

"ummm" rey kissing the mobile "rey! " taani her voice also showing her blush

"tum blush kaise karsakthi ho taani, mujhe tho yeh feel hi aatha" he took the mobile off his ear, loked at it funnily and kept it back

"mujhe aapki voice se hi wo feel aathi hain!"

Rey grinning naughtily," yeh wo feel kya hain?"

Taani looking caught," rey aap..." he laughed happily," aap meri aise hi taang kheechthe rahoge tho main aapse baat nahin ..." false irritation

"no no.ab tho sirf baat hi bachi hain, wo bhi stop mat karo!" both smiled at their ends...," but taani," haan," im really missing you.maine jitna socha tha usse kahin zyaada .its like everyday mujhe lagtha rehtha hain kuch ...baaki hain, kuch kami hain and then realise hotha hain kit um nahin mere saath ..atleast mere paas "Taani s face changed but she couldn't say anything. He waited,"hello" umm," tum chup mat hojao. Kuch kehthi raho" no answer,realsisng she was missing him as well he tried changing the topic " okay tell me kya chalrahaan hain? matlab tumhaare project mein"

"jo wahaan karrahin thi wo ab yahaan kuch offices mein karrahin hoon but its easier kyunki yahaan dhoondna , intro karwaana sab college ke taraf se hotha hain, so koi bhi office mein takleef nahin hothi..aur company bhi hain..XXX , Natasha aur kuch aur log bhi aise hi projects karrahe hain tho..haan its easier aur zyaada enjoyable bhi.." rey realised how alone she must have felt here , he wondered- mujhe agar d3 ko chodke jaana padega tho main tho...i ll go mad shayad,she was still taling something her voice charged up and as he didnt reply," rey?" haan" mujhe laga aap sogaye. Actually sone ka time hi hain"

"no..waise bhi aaj kuch edits jo Sharon ne kiya tha usko dekhna tha..blah blah blah..." he took off explaining some thing the team was upto- (basically the team s doing classes and live shows like in the show- they are yet to have a big break for which they are trying to send their dances everywhere possible so that someone will finance their actual academy like in the serial)

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A few more days later- Reys place /Taanis apartment

"...but tumne kahaan tha ki tum yahaan aaogi" disappointed rey," isiliye tho main nahin aaya"

"im really sorry rey! I thought ki main weekend aasakthi hoon par yahaan college mein exhibition chal rahaan hai n aur main bhi organising committee mein thi, so main ..." she sensed his disappointment and ," main next weekend ..."

"next weekend hamara ek investor ke saath meeting hain and we have planned ki hum unke saamne performance denge and jo hamara classes hain unke ke bhi video dikhaayenge...students are also more ab tho weekend classes bhi hain" he replied irritated

"tho kya hua wo thodi na poora din rahega..."she said enthusiastically

"hum log ------jagah jaarahe hain to meet them " he snapped at her. she immediately kept quiet realsising that she wouldn't be able to go and his tone was so rude, he closed his eyes regretting his scream," sorry taani, im just..."

"nahin sorry tho main hoon , mujhe laga nahin tha ki..."

"leave it now" he cut her sentence

"sorry..." she replied tentatively and wondered how to cheer him up , putting on a false voice ,"rey kuch batao aapki is ..investor ke baare mein"

"kya batao? Hain koi ," his voice still cross," he wanted all our papers first! Dance ke baare mein tho poocha nahin but still we thought we can show him our dance and see if.."

"but rey agar usne danace nahin poochaa tho he wuld be only looking at you as business tho aap kyun unse..." she started seriously. He felt a surge of irritation at her words

"taani i don't need any advises now. we don't have much choices and i know what we are doing" he was more rude than he had ever been to her," please don't interfere"

The next day early in the morning-

rey on the mobile calling/taani on the mobile calling...after a while msgd each other - SORRY / SORRY- both smiled and msgd again- its fine/ koi baat nahin

Next night--- same scene of them on the mobile, both in good mood and smiling and talking

"... tum hamesha aise raho , cutely baat karthe raho"

"umm matlab aapko lagtha hain ki main cutely baat karne ke elawa kuch nahin karsakthi"

"maine aisa kahaan? " she laughed happy that they weren't fighting," all you girlfriends are like this, seedhe seedhe baat ka ulta motive nikaalne ki degree hain kya aap sab mein? Boyfriend ko samaj nahin aana chahiye ki kya bolna hoga kis time pe "

She laughed but then Her laugh stopped," all you girlfriends matlab...yeh aap kis girlfriends ki baat karrahe ho "

Seeing her show some possessiveness, he pulled her leg," jo bhi mere hain un sab ki.im so famous you know..everyone loves rey ..so rey also loves everyone " in the rey style showing off

"ha ha , rey i know u r joking "

"achha if you know im joking tho poocha kyun?" she frowned ," u don't trust me taani" he said acting like he was hurt

"oh please maine bas aisa hi poocha tha.mujhe pata hain ki aap aisa koi mujhe cheat karne ka kaam nahin karenge"

He smiled happily," i know ,meri himmat hi nahin hogi tumhe cheat karne ka" she smiled happily," kyunki mujhe phir swayam ko bhi face karna padega na " he continued pulling her leg. He smile replaced by a frown

"tho aap isliye kisi aur ko nahin dekhoge?"

"haan, swayam ki gussewaala lecture kaun sunega "

"rey! ...fine main ...aap...aapko jo karna hain karo..jiske saath jaana hain jao..main bhai ko batadoongi. Mujhe bhai ke liye jhelne ki koi zaroorat..."

"Taani stop," his smile had disappeared," don't say that again" she stopped in a huff ," u know i was joking, itni serious hone ki necessity hain?" she relaxed though feeling a little guilty," kuch flirting nahin karsaktha tumhare saath?"

"nahin...matlab sorry rey" she closed her eyes," i know..wo itne din se aap mile nahin ho tho ...im miss you rey..bohot bohot zyaada" he smiled feeling lighter," next time main teek se plan karke aanewaali hoon aapse milne" no reply," rey?"

"nahin go on sun rahaan hoon, " hugging a pillow ," instead of all these kaam ki baat hum dono ko aise hi rehna chahiye" she laughed but her mobile beeped a msg- she saw and then sighing answered," but mujhe abhi jaana hain , Natasha ka msg aaya hain and ive to see , kuch ..."

"don't tell me. Yeh kaam word sunne ke baad mujhe uch aur sunaayi nahin detha"

"sorry ab main jao?" "anhin" " please rey, i really..." " tho go, main call aise hi pakad ke baitne waala hoon" " rey please please please..." " okay okay...go.." she smiled," ..go"

"good night, sweet dreams" no reply -he cut the call. She looked at the balnk mobile and smiled- he was missing her so much...she had to complete her surprise for him soon

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After almost a month and a half- reys place

Kaka came in and gave rey a gift wrapped boxsaying," rey baba yeh courier aaya tha aapkeliye"

Rey looking up from his coffee mug and laptop took it saying thanks and mereliye parcel kaun bhejrahaan hain? and removed the wrapper . there was a box which had an antique watch and a CD holder with a note-

To my dearest rey with all the love in the world- hoping ki waqt rukh jaaye hamareliye ..mera first gift aapkeliye...aapki taani ki taraf se

PS- Waise mujhe thank you kehne se pehle CD dekhlena

He was surprised, she hadn't given him a hint of anything! He saw the watch and smiled broadly, took the CDs out and pulling out the one numbered 1 began watching it. it had an old photo of his and hers ( like when she first came in) and a voiceover of hers

Rey, aapko shayad yaad nahin hoga, aap mujhse pehle ek jhoot ki wajah se impress hue the- meri ek false CD dance ka. Remember? Hamare beech uske baad bohot kuch badal gaya hain rey , maine uske baad hamesha correct kaam arne ki koshish ki hain , aapki wajah se. Par yeh jhoot ko sach mein badalne ka wish tha. this is real-jaisa bhi hain real hain

and the music started- taani pretty much the way the original fake CD showed- except that she had really danced in this. dressed in a really short top and tights ( like crazy kiya rey) , she danced with grace to the relatively soft music that was playing. Her movements were continuous, in sync with music, her hands and feet swayed perfectly to the slow rhythm , her expressions inviting. There was no nervousness or hesitation whatsoever

( i wanted a video here but im pretty bad at those stuff and so couldnt get it- please imagine it)

he watched feeling multiple things at once, the three minutes transported him elsewhere"this was a completely unexpected surprise- the dancer in him first nalysed the dance - it wasn't bad/ it was good / it was more than good- she needed polish but she was definitely on the rightest track to dance

the boyfriend in him however took over by then completely- she was brilliant, it had taken her che mahine to get to this, 6 months of hard work with everything else she was doing. Most importantly she had broken the ice with dance. he was so proud of her . and he missed her more- he wished she was in front of him.

the mobile rang as if on cue- taani , he smiled and received it-

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Awww start main hi main blush kar
Rahi thi 😳 aww mob kiss are romantic
Aww taarey miss each other me too yaar
Let thm meet plzz but luv thr convo abt
Dance n how work is going on again fight
I like it 😛 taani surprise wow yaar amazing
I luv it miss taarey let thm meet plz n yeah
Romance also plzz miss thr romance thanks
For PM