TR ss part 50 page 103 updated 4/7 - Page 45

Hwww 4 mnth ka kaam 2 week mai kr diya aur ab use jana padga..

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awesome but i am bit surprised can't understand where taarey relation is going

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hi thanks for replies and likes...
two things- taani finished her project of 4 months in 3 and a half , not in 2 weeks - i think it wasnt clear..not so imp just to clarify..
i got mixed feeling like its made sense and then where is it going type--and ive got a little confused.😊 after that. please give me ur feedback though.


part 40

Next day swayams place- swayam and rey sitting on the sofa talking, bell rang...rey jumped up and went to open the door- taani smiled

"kitne dher lagadi? Kahaan thi? " rey started scolding her

"aap yahaan kaise? Sorry , VP sir se milna tha..busy thi..kuch documents aur books lautaana tha shivam ko "

"shivam ke saath ..." his jealousy sprang up immediately

" rey! Phir se shuru mat hojao" swayam was torn between enjoying the fight as a friend and interfering as a brother " bas 10 minutes milna tha unse aur phir main aashi ke saath ..."

" ya tho shivam ya aashi! tum apna last day yahaan ka aashi ke saath spend karrahin ho?? i mean seriously yeh dosti kuch zyaada nahin hogaya? and me like a FOOL , tumhaareliye maine quickly sab kuch... .. finish karke aaya tha, meetings, rehersals sab... taaki thoda tho time mile tumhaare jaane se pehle...aur tum ..." he turned to swayam,"swayam next you know yeh girls gaarahin hongi yeh dosti hum nahin thodenge ..." he sang.she got angry and shot back..swayam kept grinning

"rey aap itna sarcastic kyun ho?...mujhe pata tha kya ki aap wait karrahe ho?bataya bhi nahin aur ab sunaa rahe ho..aur subah se kitni baar phone kaata hain aapne mera? Aur ab mujhe blame karrahe ho..aur .."swayam came standing between them trying to get a word inbetween ," aur kya dosti par copyright hain aap dono ka? agar main aashi ke saath gayi bhi tho kya bada problem ..."

As rey opened his mouth to retort back swayam closed his mouth with his arm and looking at taani- TAANI CHUP ...she was a little taken aback and rey struggled to make himself free. She looked at rey and her angry disappearing said,"bhai ...aaram se"

Rey smiled and swayam said," okay but dekho tum jao aur fresh hojao .please go" as she looked at rey again," no... baad mein .now go"

He left rey once she went away ," Kya karrahaan hain rey? Aise? Fight karna hain tujhe jaane se pehle? Cool it." and then ," sorry wo...zor se pakda tha?" went to sit on the sofa

"arre nahin ..but yeh tumhaari sister ..." and followed him to the sofa again," she s ..." and continued his cribbing session to poor swayam who was saying," nahin rey aaj usse bhi bura lagrahaan hoga.."

After a while

"bhai chai" gave him a cup and dumped another cup on the table in front of rey. He looked at it and just as she turned held her hand and stopped her, she shook her hand free and went back to kitchen

Swayam pretending that nothing was happening ," tho rey main kya kehrahaan tha, humein yeh sochna chahiye ki students aa kyun nahin rahe hain..."they heard a mocking laugh from the kitchen

"aana chodo , yeh socho ki jaa kyun rahe hain" and both sat sipping the tea for a second quietly and heard the laugh from the kitchen again..( the place is the one where you can see the kitchen remember?!) , they turned to taani who was looking at them sipping her chai from the kitchen

"kya? Tumhe hasna hain tho yeh bolke haso ki kyun has rahin ho" swayam was getting irritated

"ab aap bhi shuru hojao.." and getting up came in as if ready to fight and stood in front of them," kitne din se yahin baat ...students kyun nahi aarahe hain? kyun jaarahe hain? kahaan jaarahe hain? and same answer- kyunki unko koi sachha interest nahin...( imitating rey) hhnunnhh..jaise ki real interest sirf aaplogon ko hain" she made a face.

rey," kya? Kya ? kya kehna chahthi ho? "

"haan taani seedhe seedhe kaho.." swayam stood up

"agar seedhi baat inki samaj aathi tho yeh apni dad ki baat nahin samajthe kal?" rey looked confused , trying to remember what she was saying and then said," oh please that! Taani we are not doing business , u should know ki dance is not business for us" he said as if surprised that she didnt know it.swayam looked from one to another.

Taani shook her head and turned away but rey stood up and blocking her way said ," agar saaf baat nahin karsakthi tho start bhi mat karo "

" Teek hain suno... " she started her attitude was like u asked for it, "dance business nahin hain par running an academy is...agar kuch wor nahin karrahaan hain tho apne khudh ki weakness dhoondna chahiye ...thats what your dad meant..like kabhi apne matlab apne team ko dekha hain? sabke classes? For Eg..bharat ka class dekha hain aapne? Ek step dikhaathe hain aur phir gaali shuru---" she shook her head ," aur nil...jo bhi gilrs aathe hain, unse flirt karthe hain - koi bhi irritate hosaktha hain ...rinni, har step ko Sharon bhabhi se poochke sikhaathi hain, tho students kyun seekhenge unse? Aur Sharon bhabhi- unki rudeness aap dono ke elawa koi seh paaya hain? kisiko unki perfect steps nahin dikhthi ... unka gussa dikhtha hain zyaada.." she stopped to take a breath.

rey stared at her completely impressed by her outburst and not able to actually ask her anything while swayam stared completely irritated by her sudden outburst..she continued

"aur aashi itni friendly hain ki koi bhi usko seriously nahin letha..khudh sochlo, aise teachers aapke rahenge tho aap koi bhi class attend karoge? Seriously loge? " rey shook his head suddenly admiring her clearness ," waise mujhe koi farak nahin padtha ki aapke dance class khule ya academy but haan jab har waqt aap log yahin bolthe rehthe ho ki saara mistake students ka hain tab aap hi stupid lagthe ho" both guys had by then stood up , staring at her and then looked behind her..she looked at them and turned back- caught sight of the whole team standing and listening to her rooted to their spots.

She turned to rey and to swayam who both looked like they were thinking how to settle matters and felt nervous...screaming in front of bhai and rey was one thing but poori team- hey krishnaji aakhri din tha aaj yahaan

as expected, bharat came forwards saying in his typical way," tu in dono ki kaan bhar rahin hain?hamare khilaaf? " she shook her head and tried to move a ste , banged to rey. Rey held her arms supportingly while swayam started ," bharat..aisa.." and rey said," we were.." but

"aur main?" came in Vicky s voice suddenly cutting across swayams ,"tumne mere baare mein kuch nahin kahaan" everyone looked at him wondering what he meant , he came towards her, pushing bharat out of the way," side please...hato yaar'" pulled her from reys hands , made her sit on the sofa and sitting on the floor in front of her, said," bolo"

Taani looked at rey and swayam," maine kuch aisa hi kahaan...kya boloon?"

Vicky took her hands which were on her lap and said," jo bhi kehrahin thi, mere class ke baare mein bhi kaho" Amar came from the other side and sitting next to Vicky added," meri bhi"

The rest of them looked at each other and swayam smiled slightly at rey..." mujhe nahin pata, maine comment ya taunt nahin kiya, im sorry ...sorry aashhi, Sharon bha..rinni, ...bhai.." and looked around helplessly. Rey moved to her but Vicky held his one hand up stopping him, rey stopped Vicky listen

Vicky repeated dramatically now both his hands holding hers again, "bhabhi ji please bolo" ,and pretending to cry " please " making her blush badly and feel embarrassed

"Please aap chodo.." trying to get her hand away," okay .. Jab aap apne style ke elawa kuch bhi sikhaathe ho tab aap confident nahin lagthe..bohot obvious hain " and as amar tried snatching her hand from vickys, she hurriedly pulled her hand back and said," aap itne shy ho ki aap kisio bhi sikhaane se hitchkichthe ho par jab sikhaathe ho tab effective hotha hain"

Vicky " aur yeh- " he pointed to simmi /swayam /rey standing behind him

"simmi ki classes sabse zyaada disciplined hain but aap steps repeat nahin sikhathi, ( simmi thoughtfully saying OO) bhai ki classes hi nahin rahe ab tak"

"haan meri shoulder ki wajah se but agar hotha tho taani..." he asked curious

She got up from the sofa feeling very stupid and conscious saying," im really sorry, mera intention kisike upar kuch comment karna nahin tha...actually koi intention hi nahin tha. wo rey ka gussa nikaalrahin thi , mujhe aur kisi mein interest nahin hain ...aashi.." she looked at aashi apologetically her face clear that she was worried aashi would misunderstand her but

Vicky stood up and said,"no- its okay, mere taraf se tho thanks . mujhe kabse yeh samaj nahin aarahaan tha ki students khush kyun nahin hain...har class ke baad kuch wrong feeling ...kyun guys?" and looked at the others, everyone nodded while she again said," sorry main criticize nahin..."

Aashi came to her,"taani aapne criticize ya insult types nahin kiya..aaina dikhaaya bas..its okay."

"haan , she s right taani..tum dancer nahin ho but what you said, came from a students pov. So i guess its all the more important hamareliye ..thanks" Sharon and that settled it..everyone said haan haan and hugged each other in turns except bharat of course

Taani was all relieved that she didnt get into a fight with them the last day and sharons word had cheered her up- she exchanged a relieved look with rey and swayam - while everyone spoke as usual together ---hun mere classes friendly hain! mere disciplined! Maine kahaan na itna flirt mat karo! Yaar main doosre styles seekhoon kya rey"Sharon main tumse pochoon tho kya problem hain?etc etc.,

"yeh tho sabka boli, apne boyfriend ka kyun nahin boli? Ab tu bol rey ke baare mein" bharat still angry.. they all stopped talking and waited for her to say something.she looked at rey , he winked at her ," haan taani bolo mere class ke baare mein"

"mujhe nahin pata, kya? "

"arre! Aise kaise? Tune kitna seekha hain isse?" "nahin yaar samjho, shayad wo dance nahin romance classes hothe the" Vicky standing next to her hands on her shoulder, making everyone hoot rey grinned and Taani conscious "bhailog mujhe wo sab nahin pata, isne sabki band bajaayi hain tho rey akele ko kyun chutti dede ?" And everyone started haan taani / boliye/ cmon/ go on/

" rey ke classes " she remembered,smile appearing slightly on her face " rey ko hamesha pata hota hain ki kisko kya sikhaana hain, no pressure, dance ko enjoy karne ka lessons hain rey ke saath..."

"meri maa" bharat stopped her --hands folded,"isko kya nahin aata "

She looked at all of them staring at her and said sincerely ,"sab kuch tho aatha hain " everyone burst out laughing ... rey looked at her and laughed with everyone else. why did she have to go? His heart went a few inches down

as they all moved Sharon said," we need to think of someother way - mix classes ya kuch"to swayam/rey and simmi. They agreed.

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Kitchen

Aashi and taani carrying some tray - "try karthe hain, video classes agar work types kare tho.." and thumbs up," warna aap wahin kisi se continue karo" taani made a face indicating that she didnt want to learn from others but agreed knowing aashi to be right

Aashi kept the tray back on the counter and gave taani a hug with eyes moist," main aapko miss types karne waali hoon" taani said," main bhi" " aur jab Sharon mujhse rudely baat karegi tab aapko hi call karoongi" taani laughed and nodded .And both went out...leaving the tray

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SS came in and blah blah...normal conversation...with the tray in their hands...smile smile

Taani came back saw them and stopped back seeing their smiles...with a smile on her face she turned and faced rey also with a smile on his face- she frowned frustratedly and said," kitne cute lagthe hain rey..hamesha aise nahin rehsakthe instead of fighting "

"waise u just missed a fight sabke saath.." her face showed im so thankful expression,"tumhaara yeh phoolan devi type attitude is quite impressive " she blushed ," taani, kitna blush karogi ? " and moved closer

SS dropped something and TR turned that side watched them and looked back , sighed," rey in dono ko na ek hi kamre mein lock kardena chahiye"

"wo bhi try kiya tha ek baar, they had a huge fight" and remembered, shook his head," chodo un dono ko, yeh socho ki agar humein koi kamre mein lock karde tho kaisa rahega?" and his face changed ...showed he was in his own world of locked kamra s .she blushed and pushed his hand which was trying to hold her waist from the side while he sang tunelessly- hum tum ek kamre mein band ho aur ...

Vicky and nil came from behind , said- hum dono aajaye both T/R jumped apart as the guys did hi fi and laughed at them " swayam ko bulaaooo main "Vicky and rey pushed him while nil asked, " taani tumhe kab jaana hain?"

i am liking ur story but really not understanding where it is going
and its an honest comment

awesome update
but wats going to happen next.as taani wapis jarahi hai

Ok first of all i must say you are amazing writter ...i have just read all the parts n they all were awsome...truely specialy when taani was confuse abt there relationship ...i really wish ke serial mai essa hota...bt its ok...the serial is fiction n this story also...so its ok...
N ya i m confuse ...tht were will the story go ...n really wish tht taarey get together...
N ha one more thing u very eell explained the swayam n taani bond 😊