Omnia Vincit Amore (love conquers all) FF. Chapter 3 Pg 7 updated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! So I'm not this huge fanfic writer or anything but I decided that I should take up new challenges 😆
Here's the prologue to the story! And.. Have you guys ever wondered what would've happened if Zoya was never sent to the orphanage but Gaffur did decide to keep her, my take on that .
Ever wondered if AsYa had met way earlier than they did? 😳
Well here's the preview. Tell me if ya like it!
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The hall was filled with the sounds of thumping hearts and nervous murmurs as the invigilators voice boomed over the speakers requesting the students to get seated quickly. Rushing in the midst of the mass of students, a girl accidentally slammed into someone thereby dropping all her belongings.
"Allah Miyan!" She exclaimed and kneeled on the floor o gather the scattered mess as the polite stranger helped her.
"Why do I have to be such a klutz? She mumbled to herself and quickly muttered a "sorry" and a "thank you" to the stranger before her and began rushing off only to bump right back into the same stranger, muttering a "sorry" again she ran off, earning her the reply of "incredibly foolish" from the handsome stranger
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INDEX
Chapter 1 - Pg.3
Chapter 2 - Pg.5
Chapter 3 - Pg.7
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Az07 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Do continue soon dear
I too always wondered what if zoya was with gaffour? Will asya ever met?
Is gudiya factory raaz & zainab murder is involved?
Please pm me when you update
I am hooked to ur story now itself
I miss asya very much
Edited by Az07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting & unexplored idea i must say!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting
Plz continue soon
Do pm me for next update
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting concept...
continue soon...
pm me if u can:))))
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interesting concept
continue soon😃
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nice prologue
have sent U buddy request
Plz accept it and plz do pm next update😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely Prologue! :D
Waiting for how they will actually met and love blossoms! 😳
Update soon! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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And there are the famous lines...

Ahhh AsYa😳

Excuse me while I go cry in a corner😭

Anwyays, nice start, PM me for the next update please😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note: Well we have to assume a few things here. Zoya and Asad are same age, no they are not college buddies. Secondly after Zainab (or Saira) (or Zoya's mother) died Gaffur didn't let Razia send her to orphanage. Done? Yes? Ok.

Chapter One: unus <3
He couldn't help but stare at the girl seated beside him she had an aura around her and he was well all most fascinated. And he was not definitely the kind of person who would pay attention to girls, no he didn't have time for that he had to get a degree, get a job and work hard for his family. Girls weren't a part of his plan, sure he'd marry if his ammi wanted him to but that would be one day and that day definitely wasn't today. Love? Ohh please.. It doesn't exist. He didn't believe in love? Well he had no reason to, years ago his father had abandoned his mom and him and his sister, hadn't he claimed? Claimed to his mom that he loved her?
He had been lost deep in the oceans of his thoughts when a voice rang through the speakers of the hall announcing that only the last five minutes of the time limit were left and that the students better hurry up! After meticulously checking and then rechecking the paper he handed it in.
And the girl beside him? Well she begged the authorities to give her more time.
No she wanted that one mark so badly! She had dreams. Dreams to get out of the life she had been living in. To escape from the namesake family of hers. She needed freedom and for that freedom she needed that one mark! She made her famous puppy dog face and large baby tears sprang into her eyes as she emotionally blackmailed the poor invigilator to give her the paper and the old man pitied at the young girl and eventually gave in. Boo yah! Fake tears and dramatics they always come in handy. She quickly started rewriting the paper.
"What is wrong with people these days? Couldn't they complete the paper in the given time? No sense of time management" he thought shaking his head and then made his way out of the building and into the bus that routed home.
He just hoped and Infact prayed that he wouldn't be sharing his seat next to someone murky and unkempt, he brought out his pocket sanitizer and wiped his hands clean.
Just as he made himself comfortable in his seat apart from the window? Because who sat next to the window where the dust made it's way in. Someone plopped next to him and let out a tired huff and stared out of the window. And destiny! His bus mate was none other than the clumsy girl he had slammed into in the morning. He almost let out a growl and was about to ask her to dislodge her arm from his arm rest when she turned her head towards him and brought her hand in front of his and made a loud introduction! "Hi I'm Zoya! "

Edited by SurbhikiPankhi - 11 years ago

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