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Jyo.

@Jyo.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: edwebllalover9
awesome os.aliya give a perfect answer to zain,i hope she do the same in show.now not going to leave,last part was cute.keep writing.

Hey, thanks a lot 😳 Glad you like it.

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Loved Aaliyas taunt about broken promises to Zain !!

And teh end.. wher Zain keeps smiling is just too cute😆

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hilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

THIS was SO daaarn cutteee ! :D
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Loved this version of yours... I was smiling through out !

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dancedanceRR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

So so good! Please consider continuing this OS!!

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ZainXAliya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Your really an amazing writer. This story touched my heart and my Zain was just too cute! I felt bad for Aaliya when Zain had broken a promise to keep her happy all his life. Amazing OS!

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Jyo.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: babydolll
amazing os...

keep writing

Originally posted by: hilly
THIS was SO daaarn cutteee ! :D
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Loved this version of yours... I was smiling through out !

Originally posted by: aniiee
Loved ittt

Originally posted by: preity_d
beautiful

Thank you guys 🤗

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Jyo.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash
Loved Aaliyas taunt about broken promises to Zain !!
And teh end.. wher Zain keeps smiling is just too cute😆

Thank you! Glad you like it 😳 I couldn't help but remember the broken promise on Zain's part so I thought I'd incorporate it :)

Originally posted by: dancedanceRR
So so good! Please consider continuing this OS!!

Hi, thank you so much! I would love to but I really don't have an idea as to where to take it from here. So I think I'll live it here. Thanks a lot for reading 😳

Originally posted by: ZainXAliya
Your really an amazing writer. This story touched my heart and my Zain was just too cute! I felt bad for Aaliya when Zain had broken a promise to keep her happy all his life. Amazing OS!

Thank you so much for dropping in and pinpointing the parts you liked. Means a lot 😳