Seven Hues- A Drabble Series Complete Page 39 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_



I am really serious. I cannot rhyme to save my life.

Umm, since you are curious... I think I'll tell you. I have added grey... And deleted one of the colors.

:)

And nope.. No Terry Pratchett.. Although the color of magic seems like a beautiful thing!

aah, but is not the grey of a monsoon cloud filled sky the perfect background to the rainbow? *rubs hands in anticipation*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Abhi mann nhi hai.. sar bhari hai..

and we both know our arguments are infinite loop.. all sucking black hole..
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Posted: 11 years ago
A/N: This is the one color I added. I hope you guys will allow me this one! Thanks in advance!

Grey


"Aapko kaunsa rang sabse zyaada pasand hai?" He stared at her for a full five minutes, trying to comprehend what she was trying to achieve with this question.


At times like these, he'd actually sit down and wonder whether he hadn't accidentally brought in a child bride.


What was she? And how could she even expect him to be answering about colors?


But a ghost of a smile would involuntarily appear on his features, and his eyes would soften as she'd just understand and flutter away like that butterfly friend of hers.


He had never seen an individual encompass so many colors inside them.


She was everything, She was green. She was blue. She was pink. And she was red.


She was everything.


Strange, he mused, how a man of his psyche was actually associating colors on a person. He of all the people had always really seen the world in one shade, grey.


People were never really anything else. They were just grey. A mix of good and bad. And the good in them was wearing off each passing day of his existence. So, he just saw everything in darker shades of grey.



Until she had arrived.


And she had filled so many colors at once, that he had had to close his eyes in the fear of losing his vision.

"Sleti..."He had answered, going near her.

"Uska toh koi aadhar hi nahi hota. Yaa kaala chuniye yaa safed..." She had pouted.

Typical her, he smiled, and gently kissed her.

Edited by _SenbonZakura_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Got its...
apan donon kinne velle hai nah.. 😆

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See I was just about to say.. reading the line that Rudra doesn't strike me as a grey person...

hear me out...

he has such a ruthless.. brute personality.. aura.. *i swear... i have started to abhor the semblance, ruthless and control.. after writing it so many times.. help me to find new words.*

so i always believed that he his more of black and white person..

and then paro.. apart from the multicolor personality she possess.. *in seedha sense.. not in ganda sense* i always believed her to actually see people in grey..

Okay no i am writing then i am reminded of our profound MerDer... but still.. this thing kind of makes sense to me..

I know I am just flipping the entire thing of the OS.. but u get me..

Its because... Paro is such a sweet soul.. that she would actually try to see good out of eevry bad thing.. she will try to analyze.. before passing statement.. i know tejawat incident opposes it.. lekin you get me nah? she tries to see good..

as for rudra... u pointed out he was shifting to darker shades.. agreed.. but then.. he sees everything through only one pane.. and if one passes that test.. good... nhi toh not good.. so that way..

but these are my feelings then..

See How well you can write fluff.. its such a cutsu wutsu piece.. when u expect it to be all dark and twisted owing to the color grey.. Awesome...

I unresd.. You forced me to.. through your write up... :* *this is the reason that u get excluded from we... :P*

And i just love how you end your OS's with a moment.. Canon.. a beautiful canon..

amazing.. :D
Edited by -Vaish- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
unres kar dio beta.. chal goodnight..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Gray
Bleakness is what the gray symbolizes to me. The bleakness of his life and existence until he met her. I really liked your "add on."
Funny enough, gray is one of my favorite colors, lol.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sure, grey was his colour till she came.
Once again google baba says, grey is an unemotional and detached colour. Which is wht he was, still is, in every matter save Paro.
Grey is also solid and stable, which is what he is for Paro, for her vivid coloured and ever fleeting disposition. Nice symbolism, Anky.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_


Thanks so much! I don't think there are any punch lines.. I just write random stuff! 😆

IF does not like my posts! It keeps deleting them or moving my cursor around while I am typing!!!
I lost my reply twice and paste option did not work

Anyway, I was saying your grey drabble is beautiful !!! He seems emotionless to lot of ppl but he is filled with it and she seems too emotional but she revels in it while he believes he shuns it.


And if these lines are random stuff, I have start taking classes from you! Even my "unrandom" quotes are not this awesome 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful one again... lol..grey is one of my favorite color too...it could be his color..but i want to really know his color in the show and hope it to be a vibrant color...just my thought😊 ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
This series is really good. You writers are so talented, I will never give up on the show because of you guys. Which may be a good thing or bad, I am unsure 😆
PS: Not to take away anything from your writing, the comments are pretty darn fine too.

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