Swaron OS: Rains

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

just read this beautiful story...really nicely written and expressed...

i came to read with blank mind as this was your first write up...but now you raised a level of expectation in me and whenever a write up comes from you i will expect to be as nice as this...

Thank you for sharing the link with me...

pratik...

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veronica

@SwaRon_rocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Read the os ages ago..its beautiful

But very small :P

Loved the simplicity.

Keep writing such magical os's :)

-Veronica

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

that was superb and fabulous os... loved it

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Shreya

@swarontruelove

Explorer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

aww!!!!!!!!!!!😊 it was so cute and romantic and dreamy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i so loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was short but still managed to transport me to my swaronland. *sighs*

You really captured my imaginations through this os.

I loved how sharon danced in the rain opening up almost like a child!!😃

Swayam seeing her dance in rain nd the lines you wrote abt that pov of swayam were so awesome nd romantic.

then swaron dance!!!!!!!! i love rain dance of swaron!😊

then coming to the present, the ending was also reallly cute! i loved how swaron went out again in the rain to create more memories keeping intact their previous ones!😊

THE TITLE TOO WAS REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!

LOVED IT! KEEP WRITING DEAR! YOU R AWESOME!

Love

Shreya

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Beautifull one shot..It was beautifully narrated that too with flashbacks n all..Amazingly written as it is ur first write up so "pehli shot me hi ball boundry ke baar"..😆

Thanx for ur link

Prateek

Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago